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Title: Chapter 32.3

yes she free from that mean s.o.b and it very nice to be bless with such good friends that willing to help you out and know they care about you. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Good friends are soooooo important to have in life.

Thanks for the continual comments!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 04:23 pm

Title: Chapter 32.2

glad he having a crappy day i hope he has many more to come. just wait to he find out why those two women are there lol. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

At this point, I think everybody wants Blaine to have a bunch of crappy days, crappy years even. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 32.1

wow do these two need water throw at them to cool them off lol. they are a mess but a good mess glad she going to help out suga to get out that life style. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

They are a mess. lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 04:18 pm

Title: Main Cast

I agree with Thundakat's review - things about to get heated up in more ways than one...

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

So true. Y'all both right.

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 01/12/10 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 32.1

Why is it that I have a feeling deep in the pit of my stomach that Blaine is about to get worse with his methods of running the P-Ranch just could be a feeling.  I don't think he is about to let Suge go.  No matter what Rina proposes.

Great update can't wait to see what comes next.

Caesar has got it so so so bad for Rina and vise versa but sista girl is trying to fight it due to obligations to her mission and revenging Leesha's untimely departure from us....still smarts that one for some reason for me.

Thank you

Happy writings



Author's Response:

Blaine is about to get worse. Can't say in what way though. And yes, C got it bad (thinking about that Usher song). lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 10:51 am

Title: Chapter 32.1

Subrina and Ceasar both have it bad and I love it!!!

Author's Response:

True. True. tee-hee

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 09:05 am

Title: Chapter 31.3

I got to the end of this chapter thinking I was not caught up only to find out that I was.  I was kind of disappoint but happy too but now instead of going to the next chapter and the next I have to wait for the next chappie it's all good though.  I am happy to see that Caesar and Rina had another backstroke moment before all hell breaks loose.  :D

Happy writing

Thank you



Author's Response:

You read fast, Thundakat. No worries though. I plan to maintain a steady posting schedule.

Happy reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 01:36 pm

Title: Chapter 27.3

Miss Hot A$$ trying to get her freak on tonight.  LOL!  The hussy :D  I aint mad atcha Rina get your freak on sista.  I wonder who is going to interrupt this time.

Notice how Slimy Blaine doesn't do devious shyt until Victoria is not around like that prostitution proposal to Rina.

I have a mind to think he purposely got himself caught by Vickey  coming out of Sug's room so she could go to the hospital.

I hope Neelam is not successful in finding some big girl to bring back to the states for "model"  I like Neelam and don't want him to get into trouble and jail time.  I hope he just too this free opprotunity to see and spend time with his family.



Author's Response:

I admit, Subrina is leaning on the hussy side tonight. lol. I'll do what I can do help her stay strong...um stronger when it comes to him. Unfortunately, Caesar is that wild card that she didn't anticipate in this mission, so it's gonna be a struggle.

You got Blaine pegged right. He is a slimy one. As for Neelam, things are gonna work out for him.

Thanks for commenting! 

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 26.2

Okay Karianne I know that was you little test for Rina but that test hurt Caesar so I am not liking you very much right now.  Like damn your quick thought could not have came up with something else.

You suspect dude.  You ain't on the dl are you?

Great update off to read more.  :D



Author's Response:

I'm not liking Karianne either right now. By all means, read as much as you like. :)

 

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Date: 29/11/10 05:56 am

Title: Chapter 25.3

I wonder if Caesar will ever find out about Ricky and Rae and the baby she aborted cause she did not know who the father was. 

I also wonder if Rina will find out about the miscarriage and the Ricky too he said he would never kill the mother of his child well he did as well as his child with his cruelty and the beatings he gave Leesha.  I still feel sad she did not make it thru this story.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

All secrets will come out before the story is over. Yes, it is sad about Leesha. I really hated writing that part of the story.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 25.2

Okay...I know it is not funny but I wish I could have been a fly only at that moment.  LOL! Poor Sun-Hee now Rina knows she is senstive down there I don't know why she even thought she could get a wax job there.

Great update



Author's Response:

Sista was tryna bond with the P-Ranch girls. Plus she thought she could handle the procedure. Guess not. LOL!!!

Great comment!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 05:17 am

Title: Main Cast

It was nothing major just that I have read so many stories and the title seemed farmilar so I thought I had already read it before not so basically judging a book by it's cover  but in this case by it's title.  :D  I would have been kicking myself over and over again if I missed this story.  Again loving it just loving it and I have gotten pissed off today cause I had to go to work and was busy so I could not catch up like I wanted to.  Kept getting freaking calls rolling in even during my lunch break read the whole hr and again pissed I had to return to work.  LOL!!!

Author's Response: lol. I understand. In any case, I'm thrilled that you decided to join us. And you know I love reading your comments.

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Date: 29/11/10 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 31.3

I don't know if Bree can handle any more shock and awe.

She needs to get out of that water before she drowns in Eau Du Caesar because a lot of people are counting on her to do more than tread water. She needs to win the race.

Thank you for giving me a little something extra to be thankful for.



Author's Response:

Bree is up for the challenge(s) of this assignment. At least the ones that have presented themselves so far. lol. We'll see how she feels later in the story.

Thank you for commenting. I'm very grateful for each and every one of them.

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 31.2

Back to construction and now we got jackhammer love.

That sounds like a story somebody needs to write Supreme One. I can see it now a lady who needs something built and a big strong man who likes to pound things into the ground. Hmmmmmmmmmmmm and he does it slowly too.



Author's Response:

Go on ahead and write that story, Junebug66. You know you got it in ya! I'll read AND review it faithfully.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 31.1

Girl you are making me LOL. I'm going to disturb the neighbors if you keep doing that and they don't live that close.

Bree, maybe you needed to write it in a letter cause you are suffering a serious case of Goodius sexitis makeus forgetus our nameus. Hahaha



Author's Response:

tee-hee. I'm glad to know that you're finding so much enjoyment out of this story. It's my pleasure to bring you joy this holiday season.

"Goodius sexitis makeus forgetus our nameus"?  LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!

Thanks for the LOL's on this end as well. tee-hee

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 03:05 am

Title: Chapter 30

Well they say never say never it's not even two hours and Bree is going back to Caesar's place.

Nice to know that Neelam has plans to go to culinary school, I wonder what Suge dreams of doing after she finishes with her present occupation?

 



Author's Response:

Yes, never say never. I'm learning that in my own life.

As for Suge, you'll see what her future plans are in the next few posts. Hint: This time it's a NOBLE profession.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 02:56 am

Title: Chapter 29.3

From knocking boots, to nearly knocking herself out getting out of the window to knocks on the door bringing troubling.

This is not going to be good. I can feel it in my bones.



Author's Response:

You called it right, Junebug66. This is not gonna be good.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/10 02:39 am

Title: Chapter 29.2

Caesar crawling around on the floor like a dawg how appropriate!

Has he learned his lesson or is he doomed to repeat the open mouth insert foot routine yet again? I guess it hasn't completely sunk in that Bree is a real Shero and she can do all sorts of things, big girl or not.

Think he'll frame that g-string? If he's not careful he might not get another one.

Thanks for making me smile Supreme One as usual.



Author's Response:

LOL! Junebug66, you're a trip. No, he's not gonna frame that little delicacy.

Thanks for commenting and for making me smile as well.

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Date: 29/11/10 02:29 am

Title: Chapter 31.3

What a great update.

 

Nice! 



Author's Response: Thanks, Moni!

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Date: 29/11/10 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 31.3

lol  these two are crazy lol.  yeah it great to have that sweet out your perm kind a sex but like you say it only can last for so long. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

tee-hee. They are something else for sure.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 08:38 pm

Title: Chapter 31.2

well hot dam C man putting it on her. girl i wouldn't talk i would be his love salve and never leave that room agian lol. thanks for the updated

Author's Response:

Oh yes, C was definitely handling his bizness tonight! lol.

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 28/11/10 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 31.1

well what is there to say i hope she can walk in the moring lol. dam these two can't get enough of each other lol but dont blame her i proably done the same thing with  caesar myself. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

They really can't get enough of each other. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 28/11/10 08:33 pm

Title: Chapter 21.2

Mommy is so cock-blocking good for her.  LOL!!!!  Though I want Casaer and Rina 2gether I don't want either of them to be hurt just like Avalon doesn't.

Great update as always

Thanks



Author's Response:

Yeah, Avalon is tryna stop all kinds of things from happening. Too bad some things are gonna be outta her control.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 07:03 pm

Title: Chapter 31.2

Hot chapter!!

Author's Response: Yep! tee-hee

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 31.2

That was good

Author's Response:

It pleases me to know that you liked it so much. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 28/11/10 12:40 pm

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