I love hot,sex against the wall.  That was hawt!!!  Thank you for the update.  why did she go see Caesar again?

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Glad you liked that scene. I liked it too. Mmm...hmmm. lol.

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P.S. Bree will eventually remember why she went there. LOL!

I don't know I am on the fence.  I want Bree/Rina to put Ricky in his place again I just enjoy him being rejected by Rina but I still think Caesar should not play games with Rina and be the stand up guy he has always been and not be in competition of Rina we all know he and she have chemistry and Rina does not need to fall hard in this assignment ang be hurt plus Caesar is already going to end up hurt when he finds out the truth why Rina is there and that is to bring down the P-Ranch even though it is legit b/c of Ricky and Blaine so far it does not seem as though the girls are being mistreated only by Ricky was Lexus held against her will and beaten by him and Van Diamond crazy red.

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Girl, you said a mouthful there. Wow! And you're so right on so many points. Ricky does need to suffer more rejection from Bree and he will. Caesar does need to wise up and just go with the natural chemistry he and she has...and he will...eventually. And yes, that crazy Van Diamond brother was in this book cutting the fool again.

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Go big girl what u gone do!?!  I loved it Topaz got stole on!!! LOL!!!

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I am more and more liking Vicky for the exception of her slimmy husband and adopted slimmier son she seems to be on the up and up unless there is something I am missing. Sure she covered up for that slimball of a child of her and kept the promise she made to her friend that she would continue to look after him for all of her life but that is not her fault that she married slimmy and gave her heart to love a child that has no morals or values other the slim.

She was a pro turned cosmetic businesswoman turned Boss Lady to a profitting brothel and it doesn't sound like she mistreats the ladies it's those two others that are about to bring her down.

Great update.

Okay Salethia made me want to slap some sense in her on this post.  I have tried to over look her faults with her thoughtless verbiage but like Rina that mouth of garbage pushed the wrong button.

Thank you for another wonderful update.

Rev. Slimy down and more to go.  Bobbi I have no words for that ghetto heifa

Sal glad to see she knows who her daughter is and has defended her today.  Good looking out mom.

Great update

You may as well Ricky take back that sigh of relief buddy cause Victoria or Aunt Vicky is not going to save your (excuse my language) fucked-up  pretty Ricky ass for long especially with Rina involved you messed with the wrong sista.

Thank you off to read part 2

Subrina's mom is a trip though I see some good in her she does not know how to gauge her mouth and her actions to certain things.  I don't have her on my hate/dispise list so that is a plus.  I feel sorry for her because of her way of her coping where as Rina usings food Sal uses put downs of others to make it all right.

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I also pity Salethia, but she does work my nerves at times. lol

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Leesha...Leesha Leesha my poor gulible Leesha girl why why why.  This was a great update.

On to read more.

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Subrina doesnt stand a chance!! That man is to sexy to refuse.

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No she doesn't stand a chance with C. lol.

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That was good!!! 

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Thanks, Pmgayles!

what i think going to happen he proably going to try put that good loving on her again  but she stop him lol. i so hated that man for setting N up like that hope blaine pays for it. thanks for the updated.

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You might be in for some surprises. lol. Remember this story is being REVAMPED, meaning if you had even the smallest peek at the original version, you might find some parts VERY different this time around.

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