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Title: Main Cast

Thank you so much for sharing this great tale with us. I loved the characters!!! Its sad to see it end but I hope that many who are not connected to the Chamber will get to experience it on print. 

Author's Response: You're most welcome, Minerva. Thank YOU for reading along with us!

Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 11:03 pm

Title: Chapter 10.2

Goodness, moving it along, I already have SO MUCH to catch up on already. Oh, well, I'm breezing right on through!

This is great. I love that the characters recognize how much the other characters "look-alike" others. ^_^ I am looking forward to seeing how SuBree interacts with these people, quite a few of whom are shady. We shall see.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

You're making good time. I will leave the story up until next Sunday, so hopefully that will be good timing for a fast reader like yourself.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 04:52 pm

Title: Main Cast

You didn't disappoint!

Like every stoy there has to be an end, but I just wish this one didn't. I am going to miss Subrina and Caesar.



Author's Response: I'm going to miss Y'ALL. Your comments in particular were so encouraging, funny, and provided me with great motivation to keep the words coming. Thanks again for all the support!

Reviewer: 100%FAN Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 03:20 pm

Title: Epilogue

I loved it! I am very happy that the important people all received happy ending including Blaine and Rev.

Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the 'happy' endings of everyone involved, including the bad guys. From your previous comments, I know that you wanted Ricky to have another chance at happiness because he really was trying to change for the better. I put some serious thought into your words and so tried to give him that HEA with Binky. Hope you liked it.

Thanks for commenting! 

Reviewer: Paula Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 02:13 pm

Title: Epilogue

first i apologize for not reviewing each chapter but know i read them all and truely enjoyed this story from start to finish! it's was just as explosive this time around like the first - never drama free, lol!

but to follow Subrina & Caesar's journey was the greatest! glad they worked things out in the end - thank you times 1000 for BGWC! so daaaamn good and good luck with publishing BGWC!

promise to tell us when the book is due because i want it!



Author's Response:

It does my heart good to know that you enjoyed the 2nd version of this story. I tried to make it better than the first in ways great and small.

Thanks for commenting and the well wishes! I will definitely let you know when the book is released.

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 11:24 am

Title: Chapter 92.1

The prison rape of the villian is so over done and completely contradictory to the entire message of this novel. Actually this whole chapter is disapointingly barbaric. What happened to the people who forgave? Who took the higher road? Who seeked to act with integrity? A brutal beating and then a rape is anything but.

Author's Response:

TheDaezy, I've been waiting for a review such as this and you did not disappoint. I knew when I wrote that scene that everyone would not like it. I wrote it anyway because unlike all the other 'villians' in the story, Blaine was UNREPENTENT and REPROBATE, despite any forgiveness sent his way. Thus he was not going to get very much mercy from me. In fact, I was going to make SURE that he reaped what he sowed in totality.

Sorry you were disappointed with the outcome, but I stand by my decision.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TheDaezy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 08:36 am

Title: Chapter 10.1

Mmm, I knew Ricky's stupid behind would try and get our girl, but, no, hell no! I actually would have liked to witness her biting his head off with he rrazor-sharp tongue. And a lesbian just because she's not into you? Come on son! That is the worst way to come to Lesbianism. Goodness me.

Hah, Caesar wants a taste, that much is for sure. 



Author's Response:

You got Ricky and Caesar pegged right. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 94.2

Awwww....yay!

Author's Response:

LOL!

Thanks!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 94.2

Will Ricky be granted the privelage of knowing his son?

Author's Response:

That's a wait-and-see moment, Paula. :)

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Paula Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 9.2

I wonder if Neelam (I hope I got that right) will remember Subrina/Bree’s superior posterior. A booty like that doesn’t just lose its quality, even if it's lost some of its quantity.

I am excited to see how it all goes down when Caesar, Avalon, Victoria, Blaine, the P-Ranch employees, and, especially, Ricky meet Bree/Subrina. I wonder if ol' boy will try "recruiting" her again, the way he did when they first bumped heads.

And I laugh every time I read her cover name; it throws me that none of the characters (thus far) has gotten the giggle fits the way I have. Priceless.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOL!!! You tickled me with your assessment of an unforgettable boo-tee. Too funny!

I actually started to get the giggles when I said Bree's undercover name out loud. lol.

Thanks for commenting and for the laughs!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 12:03 am

Title: Chapter 94.2

DANG...please make the EPILOGUE LOOOOOOOONNNNGGGGGGGGGG

 LOL I dont' want it to end



Author's Response:

The Epilogue is long, 100%fan. I hope you enjoy it. I'm kinda sad to see it all end as well, but there really wasn't anywhere else to go with Subrina and Caesar's story. Can you say spin-offs? LOL!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 94.1

I saying that right now  that chick should had pick up the phone the fool trying to ask you to be his wife lol. Glad they had the talked and like she said Lesha should marry the man that she loves and care for and be happy. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I'm glad Subrina released Leesha to be happy. It was my pleasure to write that scene.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 10:59 pm

Title: Chapter 94.1

I'm so sad this is ending. What a wonderful story!

Glad Ceasar came around, cuz that was getting old. He missed the entire pregnancy!

I'm sad Vickie had to die, and Ricky, well, I guess it really coudn't have gone any other way. He killed in cold blood. No way atound that.

Subrina...pick up the phone!!!



Author's Response:

I was so ready to bring Ceasar back around til it wasn't funny. lol. I hated making him so stubborn. But to stay true to his character, I had to let him run straight into that brick wall by holding that grudge. No worries about him missing the entire pregnancy. I've made provision for that.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 94.1

All of us is like pick up the phone.

Bree is getting everything she wants if she would just pick up the darn phone.



Author's Response:

lol. Yes, everything is within her grasp right now and she doesn't even know it.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 94.1

You witch!! How can you leave us with a cliffhanger. You are so wicket. LOL.

Author's Response:

Dang, Brenda! You didn't have to call a sista outta her name. LOLOLOL!!!! I know you didn't mean no harm.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 10:03 pm

Title: Chapter 93

Wow why haven't her best friend said yes to that sexy fine break your back in good way doctor? I like how C grandma gave him that piece of wisdom to him he better hope that hadn't date anyone.  She having twins  C going to be shock by that one lol. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

C is gonna be shocked for more than one reason today. The twins are just 2 reasons. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 09:11 pm

Title: Chapter 9.1

Aww, aren't they cute! Too cute, I love them. Avalon, such a pretty name, and Caesar are definitely a real Mother-Son team. So many guys are this way with their Mothers, I just wish more of those Moms were like Avalon. Losing their baby boy, those women sometimes lose their minds along with him. It's good though, Avalon has instilled in him a profound respect for women - even the shallow ones apparently.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

I've seen both kinds of moms - the kind that know how to share their sons and the kind that don't. The latter kind is capable of causing all sorts of problems in a relationship.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 8.2

That woman, the more I read about her the worse my headache became, that's what effect she had on me. She NEVER says the right thing, ever. Sweet baby Jesus, she needs... I cannot even muster the understanding, the knowledge, to let on as to what she needs...

She needs her behind kicked. That might do it. Maybe. You never know.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

Sorry about the headache, but I so understand it. Some folks just grate the nerves like that.

Kick her behind? lol. Naw, I got something ELSE to turn her around. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 08:07 pm

Title: Chapter 8.1

Proving herself mode is no joke apparently. I hope her parents and sisters do not pester her much about the lengths she's gone to. It is for a good cause, above all, Justice.

Author's Response:

Subrina should be commended for what she's about to do, not criticized. 

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Well, all right! Leesha, you sneaky devil, writing it all down. I wonder who sent it, or if Leesha had it set to be mailed at a certain date. So that maybe she could cancel it...if she was still alive and well enough to do so. But I don't know, it seems that Leesha was on a pretty short leash. Maybe when she and Ricky were still shacking up, before the prostitution. Goodness, this has really gotten interesting.

I absolutely need to know more.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

Leesha was much smarter than Ricky thought she was. I like when folks underestimate their so-called victims. Despite the short leash she was on, Leesha did what needed to be done.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 07:40 pm

Title: Chapter 6.2

It's Subrina right? It has to be her! Aww, Caesar is not trying to give the big girls any love because of his Momma and Auntie. Sad, Brina's got the thickness in all the right places. Lol. On a bad Trip - anyway.

I loved this chapter. Neelam is a crazy hot-mess, that song made me laugh out loud, and finding out where it came from made me laugh that much harder. Nana Shirley is a G, yes indeed, I love that her very presense commands respect. They all better act like thay know something about her. Mm-hmm. 

The Rev. better go home and pray. 

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was Subrina. I'm glad you liked that song. It was my favorite in the whole movie. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 07:30 pm

Title: Chapter 6.1

Oh, damn, lol. That preacher is messy, coming up to the mother of the deceased woman he lusted after and, I think, had sex with as well. Wow. Then to take it a step further and flirt with another woman that isn't his wife: double wow and triple shame.

That repast, though beautiful, turned into a mess. I must say, Salethia surprised me in the best way this chapter. I could see my own Mom standing up for me the same way and that just brought this chapter home.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

I like that Salethia stood up for her daughter. She kinda redeemed herself in my eyes...just a little.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 07:11 pm

Title: Chapter 5.2

Too late.

She made her one phone call, Ricky, and your ass is grass. Because you know Subrina is too much woman not to come and investigate. I hope she eviscerates him.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

She's going to get him that's for sure. She just needs a plan and a little help. Both are coming.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 06:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5.1

Promise or no promise, he killed a woman. Her life is over because of him, there is no promise in the world strong enough to cover that up. And what if he does it again? Surely after getting away with murder, one feels as it it's no big thing to do it again.

Subrina, come and give that sorry excuse for a man what he's due.

*Peace. 

(P.S. I hate Ricky, too!) 



Author's Response:

Subrina is coming. No doubt about that.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 06:41 pm

Title: Chapter 4

If I could I would just rate you 10 and move on to the next chapter, I am so interested in reading what will happen next. Leesha, poor girl, Ricky put a hurting on her. And he put her in a brothel, which is only little better than walking the streets. It happens too much, women and girls are mislead, kidnapped and then sold into prostitution. I feel for her and my wish is that Subrina makes it in time, but I know she won't. Man, this has left me with a heavy heart.

And I hope I remember the things that were hinted at here in this chapter when they come up again.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Knowing that women are victimized that way was yet another reason I weaved that into this storyline. I wanted to hold a mirror up to my sistas' faces and hopefully let them see where they've let some man get into their heads the wrong way. It grieves me to know that we are often so desperate to be loved that it makes us vulnerable and easy to take advantage of.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/11 06:17 pm

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