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Title: Chapter 13

Oh Bravo Chocolate! I so love the ending. Goodness, Blair needed her ass whopped and I'm glad that Evangeline was the one who gave out the asswhopped. You had me rolling with Evangeline tauting Blair with "He's Mine" song by Mokenstef. Girl, that brought back some memories. I just hate that Star and Jack had to witness to the craziness that is their mother. I love the dream home, the engagement party, that seeing Evangeline and Todd getting ready for marriage. It was so beautiful. Todd and Evangeline's Vows were spot on and so heartfelt. *sigh* Mama Lisa didn't come. Well that's her lost, yet I'm glad that Vicki and Todd made-up. Oh the carriage ride and the upcoming helicopter ride was to cool Chocolate. I can see Todd and Evangeline riding off the sunset like they did. *cries* I'm going to miss this version of Todd, Evangeline, Little Tangie, and the kids so much Chocolate. Maybe you can write a sweet one-shot of them in the future. I look out for this family dynamic and/or another Tangie fanfiction in the future. Because you always bring in the heart and heat of Tangie loving in your stories. Thanks for writing this sweet story Chocolate.



Author's Response:

Hey M...

THANK YOU FOR AN AWESOME REVIEW!

Yeah the fight was something fun to write. I knew it had to go down no matter who started it but I felt that Starr's phone call to her dad would be the perfect opportunity. First I was going to use 'I've got your man and you can't do anything about it' but then this other song kept popping in my head...it does bring back some memories.

You actually gave me an idea about writing the family way into the future...so its not going to be a one-shot but not as long as this one. I've already got it outlined. I can give OLTL credit for one thing allowing me to see that was possible with them...even though they chickened out in the end.

Thanks for reading my story and I hope I can give all my readers the best as I continue to improve... 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/08 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter 12

What a wonderful update! I loved the tape that Evangeline gave Todd. So sweet.

Glad that Evangeline isn't letting Mama's opinion stop her happiness with Todd.



Author's Response:

Hey Love,

As I told my other readers Evangeline only could think of giving one thing that she knew Todd would cherish very much. As far as Mama Williamson goes I don't think anybody in Llanview is good enough for her daughter. She wants Evangeline and child back home with her...

Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/08 05:25 pm

Title: Chapter 12

WOW BLAIRBITCH IS A MESS.  I LOVE HOW VANGE AND THE KIDS ARE TOWARD EACH OTHER.  KEEP IT COMING!!!

Author's Response:

Happy Presidential Day,

Don't you mean witch...LOL!!! I always thought Vange had a great personality that could respond once given the chance. I found that I had to write that way!!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 11:08 pm

Title: Chapter 12

ah ha, I finally caught up with this wonderful story, this is a great update, can you give me the recipe to Evangeline's chicken noodle soup?

 When is the wedding? Please don't keep me waiting. As always, great job Choc.



Author's Response:

Happy Presidential Day to you Dye,

It's a secret if I give it to you there might be consequences...evil laugh...LOL!!!

Oh so its please don't keep you waiting like you kept me waiting for that update! Payback Dye...payback...hahahaha!!!

You are still my fanfic buddy...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Nice update choc. Love the family moments and the vid was precious.  Great job.

Author's Response:

Even though our politics stinks...Happy Obama victory to you guys,

As always Black thanks for giving me such an awesome review. Have I told you that you are an inspiration already...LOL!!!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 03:11 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Oh, I really enjoyed this chapter Chocolate. Evangeline's gift to Todd was so beautiful and an exciting present to give Todd too. It meant to much to Todd that he got the chance to see the birth of his baby girl. It was nice to read about Evangelin's family too since we were cheated of it on the show. Blair is really losing it. I would almost feel sorry for her if she didn't bring all her heartbreak and troubles to herself. You will always pay  consequences for your actions. Great as always Chocolate. I can't wait to read Todd's and Evangeline's wedding very soon.

Author's Response:

Good Presidential Day,

He has given her so much and I wondered what she could give her that was so personal that he would truly love and that was all I could come up with. Yes you are right in saying that it meant a lot to Todd that he could witness the event.

Could you believe that I wrote Blair this way that I myself almost felt sorry for all the things she's going through...LOL!! I have to laugh at myself.

Lastly, I think I have really painted myself into a corner with this wedding...LOL!!!

Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 08:14 am

Title: Chapter 12

That was great. The fam and the video. All of it.

Author's Response:

Hey Kelley,

I always wondered what could Vange give Todd for a gift. He does have everything...:) So I thought about something that might come from the heart.

Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 12:21 am

Title: Chapter 12

Nice update, see this is how TIIC at OLTL should have does this, especially the relationship between Todd/Starr.

Love that Vange is not letting Lisa keep her from marrying the man she loves.

Can't wait for the Tangie wedding.



Author's Response:

Hey Letitia,

TIIC wouldn't know good writing from bad writing with the crap they put out every week or they might have the excuse 'We're not bad Fronz just makes us write that way'. Anywho I have always liked the relationship between Todd and Starr before OLTL messed it up big time.

And whats that old saying 'the heart wants what it wants'...:)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/08 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Gurl, I love some todd and vange! nuff said! great chapter!

Author's Response: And I love some Kelley giving me an awesome review! Thanks girl!!!

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/08 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Yay, Christian's gone! LOL

Todd is so hard headed. Of course, he wouldn't be Todd if he wasn't hard headed. Evangeline isn't Blair, so he needs to come correct to her.

Todd can't get Evangeline to the altar fast enough!

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Good Morning Love,

The internet was going haywire for a couple days thats why I'm so late to respond...

Yeah our guy has always been the one to go do his own thing but now he knows that with Evangeline things have got to change or she will leave his ass! ;) As far as marriage goes well he did take Blair to the altar...what is it 6 times...LOL!!!

Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/10/08 07:33 pm

Title: Chapter 11

LOVE THE UPDATE.PLEASE, PLEASE EEP IT COMING!!!!!



Author's Response:

HEY!! HEY!!! HERSHEY!!!

THANKS FOR THE AWESOME REVIEW!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/08 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Star is such a brat!!

Hope things work out between Layla and Antonio...

 Awesome chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Hey again Redbird...killing two reviews with one stone!

Starr has always been a brat when she needs to be...

As you go along you'll see what happens to those two ;)

 

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/08 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 11

I am just so happy that he was honest with her.  I am glad that she was honest with what she was feeling as well.  This is the only way that they will make it.  And I do feel bad for Christian.  But he asked for it.  I do hope that he does find some happiness.  Awesome chapter to a great story.

Author's Response:

Hey Letitia,

I have always felt that Todd and Evangeline were people who were pretty honest with each other especially when they put a question forward. They both have some issues revolving from past relationships but with these two I always feel that they will work it out.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/10/08 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oooohhh this is going to be good!!

Both men were a lot calmer than I thought they would be...we will see what happens when they all meet for the DNA test..



Author's Response:

Hey Redbird,

Thanks for reading my fanfic. Yeah I've always felt that Todd gets violent only when he has to...LOL.. With Evangeline in his life he has to portray that calmer side but we all know that lies beneath...;)

Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/08 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 11

wud up choc, as always, Todd is a walking sex on a stick, i wonder where your mind truely is with you writing all that bumping and grinding about my favorite couple. I have a pretty good idea where your head is at now. Good update.

Author's Response:

Dye...Dye...Dye...

What do you ever mean when you say that... To tell you the truth I think Black's sex scenes come more easily than mine ;)... Believe me mine is very...very...tame...LOL!!!

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/10/08 11:47 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Oh Chocolate, this chapter kick so much ass. I knew Evangeline was not going to let Todd get away with keeping the trick involement about the DNA test slide. Todd has to realize that he and Evangeline are a package deal and do not keep sercets from Evangeline. I'm glad Evangeline did forgive him and they made up with making hot sweet love. Damn it was hot too! Hmm, maybe the caveman can learn some sense while he gone. Great update Chocolate and thanks for updating.

Author's Response:

Hey Meg...

Todd might be the bees knees when it comes to sex but Evangeline is not Blair when it comes to allowing Todd to do whatever he wants to do in their relationship. I always wondered what people say love is not enough. Marriage takes a lot of work and sometimes you still fall into the same old habits. I think Todd learned his lesson...and of course our man can perform ;)...LOL!!!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/10/08 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 11

great update Choc.....

 



Author's Response:

There is always something behind your great updates C...

Thanks for the review though!!!!

Reviewer: Cma Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/10/08 09:43 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Great update, choc!

Todd talking to Tangie at breakfast was so cute! 

I'm glad that Todd and Antonio made a peace treaty with each other.

Now I know Lisa is protective of her family but she went way over the line slapping my Todd. Yes, I said my. I've got to hand it to Todd; he's definitely changed. The old Todd would have went off on her! His love for his family and the love he receives in return motivates him for sure.

And does Van know her man or what? Too funny that she knows he's up to something.



Author's Response:

Hey Love, I think I remember a song like that...

I said to myself Todd and Antonio have to make a peace treaty and I was going to use the ladies in order to get it done. We know how men can be...LOL!!!

Yeah I wanted to show some of the changes that Todd is making and maybe one that is still hard for him to do.

Of course I've got those two connected...LMAO!!!

Thanks for the review Love!!! 

 

Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 12:27 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Great update choc. Really like the Blair and Todd bitching.  Funny stuff.  Tangie was bliss as always. Great job.

Author's Response:

Hey Black,

I love writing Todd and his nemesis talking to one another. Thanks for the awesome review as always!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 10

I just love how Vange knows that Todd is and has been up to something.  And Blair really should have known that she would not have gotten away with it.  And really Lisa didn't know who she was going to come up against when she showed up.  I am glad that she has seen the united front of Todd and Evangeline.  And i just love how Jack and Starr have taken to Tangie.  She is just a special little girl.

Author's Response:

Hey Letitia,

Well I have made them 'connected'...LOL!! Blair was more into making Evangeline have a lot of doubts about the situation in her life because that was her only consolation...Lisa is a tough broad and she expects the best from her daughters including the men they bring home...LOL!!! I felt that the one person that these two kids would warm up was Tangie - she is the innocent in all of this mayhem...

Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 10

Oh, this was a wonderful chapter. I actually like Todd and Antonio making peace with each other in order to be with Evangeline and Layla. Boy, Mama Lisa don't play, but I'm glad that Evangeline set her straight. I knew Todd was going to get that trick pay. LOL I just hope Evangeline don't get on Todd to bad about dealing with Blair. All the kids in this chapter was too cute for words. Lovely update Chocolate.

Author's Response:

Thanks Megumi,

Sometimes its hard to let children play out in fanfiction but I try my best to do it. These kids are an integral part of their lives and they can't just be around. I think if I didn't have Todd and Evangeline as a couple he would have gone too far but Evangeline has a positive influence on his life...so far...so good...

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 10

Oh boy, looks like Todd has some serious explaining to do... glad that Starr/Jack really seem to love Vange.

The banter with Todd/Antonio was very funny.... Cris will have a cow when he finds out that they are "friendly"

Lias to butt out and let Vange live her own life.

I feel nothing for Blair, she's got whats coming to her.



Author's Response:

Thanks Liberty,

In the grand scheme of things Todd is just learning to get away from the old Todd so he will go back to his old ways once in a while. The ladies can't have their men going at each other's throats everytime they get together so they had to make a stance with these guys. Todd and Antonio do understand what it means if they don't...;)

Lisa...Lisa...Lisa is just one of those mothers...

Again thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 10

make it stop...... make it stop...okay you win how about 

A TRUCE-----><igu 

LMAO....great chapter Choco seriously i likey.....shh dont tell anyone it will cramp up my style....

Bravo 9 starts & 2 snaps in a twist formation....you go girl



Author's Response:

C....asking for a truce...Are we going to be like Antonio and Todd...hmmmm!!!!LOL....

I wonder if Z knows that you likey my story...I wanna see that look...I'll pay to see it...LMAO!!!

Reviewer: Cma Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/10/08 12:08 am

Title: Chapter 10

Great chapters! I love them and starr,jack, and tangie! Vange knows her todd! Ten stars. And get rid of blair for good!

Author's Response:

Hey Kelley,

I would say kelley, kelley...where do I remember this name from. OH when I was looking for some Tangie fanfic to read on yahoo I bumped into your homepage and said wow and everytime I would go and check to see if you had finished the other two. Main I'm glad you're writing at the Chamber..

Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/08 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 10

hey chooooccccc, come out, come out where ever you areeee. why do I feel like you opened my brain and read through it?

The update was amazing so, when are they getting married, is Blair going to be one of the brides maid?



Author's Response:

Thanks Dye,

I'm happy that I opened your brain and read through it. I wonder what else is lurking through those hallowed areas...LOL!!!

I should cross my arms and have one of those looks on my face when you talk about Blair being a bridesmaid but you are too funny...d...too..funny...LOL!!!!

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/08 07:58 pm

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