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Title: Chapter 9

I should have know that BlairHo had something to do with those test results...Blair Todd doesn't want you so Get Over it... I hope Star cuts her off as well.

Glad that Star and Todd had that talk and that Starr has no ill feeling toward Vange.

Tangie is a Manning... all is right.



Author's Response:

Hey Liberty,

Well I had let Blair sneek back in somehow because she cant help herself with butting into Todd's life like she has ownership of it. Starr and Todd needed to have that conversation because she does loves her father and he loves her likewise...

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 10:59 pm

Title: Chapter 1

So you finally put me out of my misery, amen to Todd being the papi. I'm looking forward to an update, I expect a Manning world domination. Great Job choc.

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 05:03 pm

Title: Chapter 9

OMG, OMG!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for making Todd the daddy! I love you, choc!

So glad that Starr has resolved her feelings towards Evangeline, Tangie and Todd.

I choose not to address Blair Witch and Cry Baby Vega. LOL

This update was so poignant and exhiliratiing. The uncertainty of their relationship if Todd really wasn't Tangie's father. Then my joy when it was proven that he was. Yippee!!

Sweet update!



Author's Response:

Hey Love,

I'm happy that you are happy! lmao!

I had incorporate that uncertainty because there was a big secret involved and no matter what Todd said Evangeline was always going to have that doubt. He had been through so much with Blair and she knowingly withheld a secret from him so it had to come into play.

Why don't you want to address Blairho and Cris??? LOL!!!

Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 9

Yes!!!!! I knew it!!! Todd is Tangie Daddy and the bitch Blair had a hand in messing the results in the first place. Todd is going to get that trick. I'm so happy for my couple!! I can't wait to see what happens next Chocolate. Great update.

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

So the long wait is over for you guys. I could have gone the other route if I wanted ;)...Thanks or the review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 9

I really just wonder what Blair has up her sleeve.  I am glad that they have this time to be together as a family.  I know that Vange was scared that things would change if it came out that Tangie was not his daughter.  And maybe Starr will really be able to see the light.  Just a great job.

Author's Response:

Hey Letitia,

It is always human to have that fear especially when you are just embarking on a new journey of love. She did keep it a secret and you know what usually happens to secret. As for Starr she loves her father but you know teenagers...LOL!!!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 02:53 am

Title: Chapter 9

WHOOO  YOU HAD ME SCARED AND UPSET FOR A MINUTE.  I MUST SAY I HAVE NO PATIENCE WHEN SOMETHING THIS GREAT IS BEING WRITTEN, MAN I CANNOT EXPRESSED HOW HAPPY, AND OVERJOYED THAT LITTLE TANGIE IS TODD BABY.. BLAIR IS NASTY AND HER GROWN ASS DAUGHTER NEED A GOOD SHUT THE HELL UP AND STAY IN A CHILD PLACE TALK.  I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOO MUCH, FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hershey haven't heard from you in a while I was wondering...I said my procrastination is scaring away hershey so let me make a great update...LOL!!!

I have always thought that about Blair that's why I write her the way I do...;)

Thanks for the review!!! 

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 9

See why did you make <pck 

Besides everything else this was a very good chapter i loved it....Why havent you gave that brat an arse whipping......between you and me you know this is not who the father was...but i like said eariler I still promise to never tell anyone the orinigal deal we made....lol.

You are so sneaky posting when you said you wouldnt being posting today.....you people should have asked me eariler before you held me hostage and threaten me not to say a word....Choc scares me....ooops dang it now i think i've said to much...dont beat me up please Choc.....the last bruises havent heal yet...lol

Outstanding Chapter update.....



Author's Response:

Bwahahahahaha...because I want you...

Starr is Todd's daughter so I don't think he was going put a beat down on her Ms. Thing...LOL!

Don't try to insinuate that Todd isnt the father to these readers...lmao!

One of these days I'm going to give you that beat down that you seem to be requesting from me...woman....

Thanks for the review even if I made you puke...hahahahaha!!!

Reviewer: Cma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/08 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Oh he still aint the pappy...hahahaha.. i still promise i wont tell....lmao

OMG my favorite line becuz its soooooooooo TRUE.....

“Those little brain cells of yours are going full steam ahead.”

Everything on TODD is LITTLE.....ROTFLMBAO

  • <lmao 
  • Glad you finally see what i see in/on him...which is little of nothing....
  • <lmao
  • Reviewer: Cma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 07/10/08 04:33 pm

    Title: Chapter 8

    Oh he still aint the pappy...hahahaha.. i still promise i wont tell....lmao

    OMG my favorite line becuz its soooooooooo TRUE.....

    “Those little brain cells of yours are going full steam ahead.”

    Everything on TODD is LITTLE.....ROTFLMBAO

  • <lmao 
  • Glad you finally see what i see in/on him...which is little of nothing....
  • <lmao


  • Author's Response:

    Time to deal with Ms. C...

    Don't go putting ideas in people's minds bc Todd aint little! John's concept of the word 'love' is small unlike my guy Todd who goes out all the way for our lady Eva...

    Still love you though! And maybe like John...a little...LOL!!!

    Thanks for the review I think!!!

    Reviewer: Cma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 07/10/08 04:32 pm

    Title: Chapter 8

    Shoot me, just shoot me! Choc, I didn't believe you could be so cruel to me. You're actually teasing me, torturing me!

    Please, please, please let Todd be the daddy! Pleeaase!

    I know Lisa is on her way. Todd better get ready. I'm glad Antonio and Layla made up. Viki needs to just butt out of Todd's life. What is her problem?

    Diane should have done the test herself in the first place. Idiot!

    Great update!



    Author's Response:

    Yours is the funniest Love,

    I promise next update It will be revealed!

    Thanks for the review!

    Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 07/10/08 03:26 am

    Title: Chapter 8

    Oh no you didn't Chocolate! You are so wronged with keeping the results longer to see who is the real father. Okay I give you this twist of the story this time. Great update btw. Aww, Poor Todd and Evangeline. Little Tangie are theirs, I just know it.

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry Megumi,

    This fic is coming to an end so I can't keep you waiting any longer...Next update...Thanks for giving me this twist...LOL!!! Thanks for the review!

    Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
    Date: 07/10/08 02:45 am

    Title: Chapter 8

    OMG please tell me there was no other man, b/c Vange doesn't sleep around.... I wonder who screwed with the test.

    Vicki makes me so sick, how could she still want Todd to be with a woman who is nothing but a revolving door and uses men to hurt Todd, and IMO Nora is no true friend... both women need some.



    Author's Response:

    Hi Liberty,

    No there isn't any other man. Just playing with C...who thinks she has a one up on Todd...

    I like Nora but I had to write her that way because she has a negative vibe with Todd due to their history. As for Vicki like Todd I really don't care but maybe I should think about it. After all she is his sister...hmmm...

    Thanks for the review!

    Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
    Date: 07/10/08 02:16 am

    Title: Chapter 8

    Great update Choc.  Nice twist with the test results.  And the plot thickens....

    Author's Response:

    Hey Black,

    I don't think I can make the plot thicken anymore...LOL! Yeah my fic is coming to an end but I had to throw in that little spice...don't you think...ha...ha...ha...

    Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 06/10/08 10:52 pm

    Title: Chapter 8

    OMG choc!!! You did it again, expect payback. Be afraid, be very afraid.lol. You left me hanging.

    If I read right , neither Todd nor Chris is the father??? So who the baby daddy? John??? lol. Just a thought, that would be a blast.

    This drama just accelerated on a whole new level, you got me doing the chicken dance, amazing update.



    Author's Response:

    Thanks Dye!

    Please it sure aint John. I'm not making C's day...LOL!!! Just wanted to hype up the drama a little because it is soon coming to an end. I am grateful that I allowed you to do a chicken dance. I think I have never allowed anyone to do a chicken dance before....LMAO!

    Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 06/10/08 04:51 pm

    Title: Chapter 7

    I need to get this out of the way....please, please, oh please let Todd by Tangie's real daddy!

    Lisa is coming to town? That'll be interesting!

    Christian is such a loser. Get a life; move on.



    Author's Response:

    Hey Love!

    Sorry to answer you so late. Next update we'll see what happens!...LOL!!!

    Thanks for the review!!!

    Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 02/10/08 04:51 am

    Title: Chapter 7

    Todd and Vange are just so romantic together, and thier lovemaking was HAWT.

    So glad that Antonio is basiclly telling his twit brother ti Grow the Hell up, Cris is nothing but a Macho Brat.



    Author's Response:

    Thanks Liberty for the review!

    Yeah I've made him out to be a macho brat but I still love his body...I cant help it...LOL! Antonio had to tell him to grow up eventually!

     

    Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
    Date: 29/09/08 11:12 pm

    Title: Chapter 7

    Hey choc.  Sorry it took me so long to get to this one but you're doing an awesome job. Love it!

    Author's Response: Coming from you Black (one of my favorite authors) it makes you feel great!

    Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 29/09/08 10:22 pm

    Title: Chapter 7

    DAMN FINALLY ANTONIO STOPPED CATERING TO CHRIS EGO, AND PUT HIS CRAZY ASS IN CHECK.   VANGE AND TODD IS HOTT TOGETHER.  LOVE IT PLEASE, PLEASE EEPP IT COMING!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Congratulations Hershey! for getting reader of the month which is pretty awesome I might add!

    Yeah Antonio had to put Cris in check because it was creeping into his own life and that's not good. Cris is his brother not his son!

    Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 29/09/08 07:39 pm

    Title: Chapter 7

    Chocolate, you are making me enjoy this story so much!!! To see Christian get taken down from everybody is a dream come true. I don't like the worthless fool and hope he continues to be made like an idiot. I can not believe he tried to threated Todd with a knife. But my boy was prepared for the dumb bastard too. I loving George btw. :) See, Christian doesn't love Evangeline or Tangie. It's all about possession with him. With Todd you actually see true love for Evangeline and Tangie. And speaking of Evangeline, Todd and she smoking in this chapter. They are too hot for word. I love them so!!  Okay I can't wait to see the next chapter because I see Christian about to snap any minute now.

    Author's Response:

    Hey Megumi, Thank  you!

    I would feel that Todd wouldn't think that it was the appropriate time to get down and dirty considering that he and Evangeline were having a special evening. I really have to show my readers that Todd and Evangeline are crazy about each other and it's not all bells and whistle but real, true love.

    Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
    Date: 29/09/08 06:37 pm

    Title: Chapter 7

    The sex and talk between van and todd was hot! Great update.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Kelly...

    Like Todd once said 'I aim to please'...LOL!

    Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 29/09/08 04:45 pm

    Title: Chapter 7

    OMG!! choc, this chapter is really good, especially where Todd made Chris say Uncle, that was funny as hell.

    Chris is a moron to think Vange would want him, he's cute but boring as hell while with Todd, ADVENTURE never ends so sign me up Choc. I'm loving this.



    Author's Response:

    Hey Dye...

    Sometimes I do want to describe Christian's rippling muscles but you know...LOL! You are right adventure never ends with this guy. He's cute...he knows what he wants and he goes after it or should I say after our lady Evangeline. Thanks!

     

     

    Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 29/09/08 04:44 pm

    Title: Chapter 6

    Loved it! Todd and vange engaged!

    Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
    Date: 29/09/08 04:34 pm

    Title: Chapter 6

    What a romantic chapter.

    Time for my begging. Please let Todd be Tangie's daddy!

    Christian better not get any ideas.



    Author's Response:

    Love...are you still begging!!! LOL!!!

    I love you LOVE!!!

    Thanks for the review!!!

    Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 20/09/08 03:00 am

    Title: Chapter 6

    Great update! This is getting juicy! I just love them!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review Hopie...

    Though I have to remember that this is their engagement night...LOL!!!

    Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
    Date: 19/09/08 09:11 pm

    Title: Chapter 6

    Oh this chapter was so wonderful. You can clearly see that Todd and Evangeline are in love. I love the scene with Todd and his kids saying 'Happy Birthday' to Sam. It was something that needed to be done. I love how Evangeline and Layla talk about their relaptionships too. Tangie is such a doll and I actually love the little family that are forming and with Todd's kids too in the future. Okay, why don't I like that last scene with the caveman and I have this feeling that he is going to try something crazy......

    Author's Response:

    Hey Megumi,

    Thanks because I really want to put across to the readers that they are truly in love. I didn't know what to feel when I thought about writing that scene by Sam's headstone but like you said I felt that it had to be done. Tangie is her father's daughter ;) and as for Christian he can't do anything that Todd won't allow him to do...LOL!!!

    Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
    Date: 19/09/08 08:20 pm

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