Glad Ro was able to share a laugh with Jane, she needed it.
Author's Response: Yes, she did. Sometimes, it's just like that.
[Report This]Date: 16/02/11 10:10 pm
Great update! I wonder why he let her...? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It's coming. There are only four more chapters left in this part of the story.
Date: 16/02/11 10:01 pm
i hope victor can show strom why, when where and that love is in him
Author's Response: He will. He can. It's hard for him, but if he wants her...he'll have no choice!
Date: 16/02/11 08:53 pm
I like the comraderie between her and Jean though I have never liked Jean, lol. I'm glad she was able to get it off of her chest and talk to someone about it, and it's strange to me that she considers the necklace a collar but seh won't take it of. Great chapter as always.
Author's Response:
There is complexity within that necklace. It's a sort of foil for a great many things between Ororo and Victor.
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 06:21 pm
Hey great story!
I'm a big fan of Storm and Sabertooth fanfic. To bad their isn't a whole lot and enough stories about these two paired off. When I started reading your story, I was really excited to see a fanfic about these two. Plus you have fabulous writing skills; it flows well and it's like watching a movie.
Thanks for the read
update soon
Author's Response: Thank you. I am updating as soon as I get chapters back from my editor. :) Reviewer: Shanee Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/02/11 08:12 am
really enjoying this story - thank you!
Author's Response: Thank YOU, for taking the time to read it!
[Report This]Date: 11/02/11 09:37 pm
You rock! You are the bomb! As an X-Men fan from way, way, waaaaaaaaaay back, you do them justice.
Keep doing what you do!
Author's Response:
Oh that's fantastic! I've always liked XMen, but never has a plot bunny spurred me to write something- until now. Thanks so much for your kind words.
Reviewer: acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 02:43 am
I'm enjoying this story so much. Love a Victor and Ororo pairing.
Author's Response:
Oh me too. I love that these characters on first look seem so contradictory to one another, but for some reason also work REALLY well together.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 10:51 pm
Okay, yeah I'm hooked lol I've always been a huge fan of the xmen and have wanted to read stories about Storm. At first I thought it was wolverine she was with and was shocked to see sabertooth. I've never liked sabertooth and wondered how the story would turn out. Surprise,surprise it turned out wonderful! You got some great writing skills girl, don't take too long in updating this. Big fan over here!
Author's Response:
Sabertooth is definitely NOT a warm, fuzzy character, but the one line that bounces around my head when I write him is, "I'm an animal who dreamed he was a man." (exact citiation may be a bit off here)-- but that's where I'm coming from when I write him. Liev Schrieber's portral of that character was very much on point, and I really wanted to explore what made him go from "Victor Creed" in Origins, to "Sabertooth" in X1. That character has depth, and that depth is what I want to explore.
So thank you for your kind words. I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 09:39 am
Oooh excellent chapter! I soo wish this were a tri, even if I want Ro to end up with Victor. I also like that Ro and Logan are friends, but I'd like it even in more if deep down he had a little thing for her. Although you did allude to something like that in a previous chapter.
I also like that Victor started to desire her, even before his memory returned.
Author's Response:
You know, I know Logan has a thing for Jean. But in my mind, and partly on the things I'm basing this fic off of, it would never have worked. Although, as I think in future chapters you'll see, the relationship between Logan and Ororo is also very strong. Even if it's not necessarily "romantic" as she says in the story, if they weren't colleagues...and the place and time were different, they could have been something more.
And with Victor...he's a felinid. And most animals, even human babies, imprint. The reason he rememebers her- or at least recognizes her on some level, is because he "marked" her in such a way- through scent and smell.
Humans do it too, although many of us don't realize that's what it is. It's how we can recognize certain people coming and going, just by the sound of footsteps or by a smell. Even if they don't say anything.
Thank you so much for reading this. I am so glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 07:40 am
I really like this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I do too. It's still dominating my brain. I cannot write anything else but this write now. So more is on the way. :)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 05:24 am
Yay!! Loved it. Glad he got his memory back but now what's he gonna do with Ororo??
Author's Response:
Um...just a hint... there's a hard "M" Rated chapter in the future. But we're not there yet!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 04:50 am
wow this was some chapter so victor rembers his past with ro i am so happy even though ororo is not so loving towards him!!!!!!love this story..........
Author's Response:
Well...ya know...he DID leave her. And the way he didn't wasn't exactly the best way possible-- although he THOUGHT he did the right thing at the time. We'll explore that...in the next chapter, I do believe. Thank you so much for keeping up with this!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 04:20 am
I left you a review already under the name 'Jage' but I had to join so I could find this story easier and be able to follow along because I am loving it.
The angst, the drama, the sexual tension... I just love it! I really like the fact that you show that he wasn't a good man, even before storm, but at the same time she sort of kept him calm and she did matter to him, even though he left her.
And I like that once she got over her shock of seeing him again and then getting Victor back and not just dealing with Sabertooth she pulls back, because he does need to prove himself worthy to her or at least explain why he just left her.
I think the fact that she kept the necklace is more telling of her feelings for him in my mind, then her keeping his clothes since that's something she appears to wear all the time while the clothes can stay hidden. It's like she has a part of him with her at all times.
I am really enjoying your portrayal of Logan and his interactions with his brother. I'm assuming this is going off of the wolverine movie right?
Anyway, I am loving this story, so happy that I happened across this site the same day you happened to update and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
The necklace in X1 is actually what started this fic for me. It was so out of place in the movie, but she wore in CONSTANTLY. And in my mind, I wondered why. So I began watching all of the movies, in order, until I hit origins. Then the idea hit me. Literally. I was halfway through my re-watch and I paused the movie, jumped out of bed, grabbed the computer and started jotting down notes. Then I watched Origins again, along with X1-- and I started calculating th eyears between the two movies. All that "dead space" gave me ALOT to work with.
And this is the result of it.
Reviewer: Jammi Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/02/11 02:46 am
I'll be honest, I have never thought of Sabertooth and Storm together but I have to say what I've read so far has made me squeal like a little girl, LOL. The first chapter grabbed me and pulled me in and my heart pulled for them and then this chapter was just brilliant.
Reviewer: Jage Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 01:54 am
I absolutely love this story!! Victor and Orro together always keeps me glued to a story!! Keep it coming!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/02/11 11:59 pm
Great update - keep it coming!
Author's Response:
Believe me, I'm working on it.
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 11:22 pm
I love this story, although I would like for you to put Logan and Ororo together. I love their coupling, but I guess Victor is alright although I don't thinks that VIctor deserves Storm.
Author's Response:
I've often gotten this sort of thing from lots of people when I pick character parings, and the one thing I tell them is, while someone may think Victor does't deserves Storm (and I can really see why) that's not what she thinks. This story isn't about who "deserves" who (because in Real Life people don't always get what they deserve either) it's about who "loves" who (and that's something you cannot control).
Even though its' a fanfic story, it's not entirely based in fiction. I try to write as close to real life as I can. I want to make the characters living, breathing people. And in talking about people, and not characters, there are flaws, judgement lapses, etc.
So, despite the off pairing, I am glad that you like this. It means a lot to me. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 10:53 pm
Loved the update. Hmm, wonder what Ororo is gonna do now???
Author's Response: I think it was Shakespeare who said, "the journey to true love never did run smooth." (or something like that).
[Report This]Date: 05/02/11 06:35 am
Oooh Victor and Logan are brothers. I think I knew that, but may have forgotten or perhaps I'm confused.
I really enjoyed the scene of how they first met. It was sexy and bit dangerous.
You did a good job capturing Logan. He told her some hard truths and I hope she listens.
Thanks for updating.
Author's Response:
Yes, I used the "brothers" iteration from the Origins movie. Although, In another incarnation of this, I had them as father and son...but that seemed a bit creepy to me.
I love Logan's character here. He's very rough, but he keeps it real. He doesn't BS. with her, and he told her the things she knew. This is what real friends do for you. You may not agree with them, but they do try to keep you from falling off a cliff.
Oh, and as for how they met...I just couldn't resist. :)
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/11 12:12 am
Really enjoying this story and the pairing of Ororo and the feral Victor - and of course in my mind he looks like Liev Schreiber...*drool* LOL! Update soon!
Author's Response:
For the first incarnation of Sabertooth used in the first few chapters, I drew off how he was portrayed in the first XMen movie. The latter part of the story draws strictly off Liev Schrieber's portrayal, which has waaayyyy more depth. Both to me, are completely believeable-- because he was the same way in the comics-- man and animal.
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 11:18 pm
another excellent chapter so old logan knew ororo smell before he even met her cause of his brother well this story is beyond great i just love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
OH YES. I thought that was a bit of a naughtly detail, but I couldn't resist adding it.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/02/11 10:59 pm
I love this...
Author's Response:
aw, thanks. I'm working on it. Right now, I am just writing it until I can't write it anymore.
Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 08:31 pm
the tension between Storm and Sabertooth meet is comes off so well - thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you, that's what I was going for, so I am glad it came across properly.
Date: 29/01/11 11:23 am
Loved the update but what happened to her??? More please!
Author's Response: All shall be revealed. I am thinking this is only the first story in either a duo or even a trilogy.
[Report This]Date: 29/01/11 05:43 am