I am soo loving this story. The action scenes spring of the screen and the tension between the two leads is almost tangible.
I wonder why he didn't kill her?
Author's Response: Oh, its coming. Believe me. I dream these characters at night-- that's how invested I am in them! Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/01/11 10:37 pm
oh shoot damn storm seems to be in some trouble whoo as always love this story!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/01/11 10:06 pm
hi love update why so short....remember victor her love
Author's Response: I dont have a set word count to my chapters. I write until I feel I've fully conveyed what I wanted to, then I go to another chapter. So some may be longer than others. But I apologize for taking so long to update.
Date: 28/01/11 09:36 pm
nice update
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 28/01/11 05:39 am
Loved the update. Hopefully Storm settles soon.
Author's Response: umm...well...I'm thinking this story is only the beginning.
[Report This]Date: 28/01/11 04:12 am
This was a nice setup for the next chapter. For some reason I saw all of this as the cartoon, lol. I'm so happy that Xavier didn't read her thoughts.
Thanks for updating
Author's Response: Well, at least you can picture the characters! That means my intent is coming across clearly, which is a good thing. Thank you for reading. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/01/11 01:03 am
really good story - look forward to the next update, thank you!
Author's Response: Your welcome. It's my pleasure.
[Report This]Date: 27/01/11 07:29 pm
As always love this story happy that ororo unburden some of her past with victor before he became sabertooth to the professor........again a wonderful story!!!!!
Author's Response: Well...sometimes you have too...although, its going to get a lot more complicated.
[Report This]Date: 27/01/11 07:16 pm
Of the pairings that I've read for her, Sabertooth/Victor is second only to Gambit for me. I like this A LOT!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/11 03:10 am
Hmmm, so it was Victor after all. Loved it!! Wonder why he doesn't remember??? What happened to him??
Author's Response:
I am actually planning a complete series for this. This story is only the beginning. I don't like to be cryptic, but it will come. Thank you for reading. I am trying to update this story as quickly as possible.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/01/11 11:46 pm
victor have you become so numd you no longer remember her scent you loved once and will again
Author's Response: Umm...it is so true... I personally believe love can drive people to extremes. Thank you for reading, I am glad you are enjoying this.
Date: 26/01/11 11:20 pm
I really like the way you are writing this. Thank you for putting this out there.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. This is my first step into the XMen fandom so I appreciate the support.
Date: 26/01/11 10:45 pm
nice update - keep it up and keep them coming =)
Author's Response: I'm working on it! Thank you!
Date: 26/01/11 09:18 pm
Awesome update. I'm really liking this story. The chapter was intense and it had a nice quick flow to it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I'm glad that intensity came through. I was trying to make it feel real. Thank you. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/01/11 09:02 pm
can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response: Im updating Monday through Friday, as fast as I can! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 26/01/11 06:33 pm
Victor and Ororo...an interesting combination. He normally does not get close to her because of Logan...Looking forward to more.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: I'm new to this fandom, but I've always liked things no one else takes an interest in. I've been a Storm fan for a while, but was captivated by the portrayal of Sabertooth done by Liev Schrieber in Origins. I got gripped by a plot bunny and well...this is the end result. Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/01/11 04:57 pm
Wow i just love this pairing ororo can know that when she is with victor that she comes first it is exclusive unlike with the other pairing altthough i am partially to the other set of claw weilding metal man but anywho this story with ororo and sabertooth is just whoo just wonderful all the mystery and the pain and face to face after a decade is just wow!!! Love this story please keep it coming........
Author's Response: Both characters are very strong and dominant, and that's what I wanted to play with and explore a bit more here.
[Report This]Date: 26/01/11 03:48 pm
good start - curious for more, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I do appreciate you reading!
Date: 26/01/11 01:53 pm
WOW!! This is a great start really grabbed my attention. When is the next update?
Author's Response: The next update is...now. Lol. I am working to get this story caught up to where it is on other sites. I'll try to update here first, before I do anyplace else.
Date: 26/01/11 01:00 pm
have always loved these two together. can't wait to see what you do with it
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm new to this fandom and these two characters, as individuals, really grabbed my attention. Then the plot bunny hit, and its held me ever since.
Date: 26/01/11 10:48 am
Me likey!
Author's Response: Thank you! I likey too!
[Report This]Date: 26/01/11 06:32 am
I actually hardly ever read plots that don't have original characters. But I'm an x-men fan (waaaay before the movies came out) and I love Storm. I've never read this couple before but I'm hooked already.
Author's Response:
I understand that. I had actually switched to writing my own original story when the plot for this hit. It started when I was watching XMen Origins. It got worse when I watched X1-3. Then I remembered that I used to LOVE the animated series, and when I went back to that...well...this is the result! Thank you for reading, and I am pleased that you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: Ana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 12:53 am
update soon.. victor needs soime love storm needs a man who loves with all and who will protect her
Author's Response: You are right. Mr. Creed does need Love. And he also needs a strong woman who can keep him in line!
Date: 25/01/11 10:51 pm
Good Start! I don't usually read X-men fanfics, but I was intrigued by the summary.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I am happy to have found this site to be able to share this story. Thank you so much. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/01/11 10:26 pm
OH MY FREAKING GOSH I CA'T BELIEVE YOU BROUGHT THIS SPECTACULAR STORY OVER TO THIS WONDERFUL HOME WHOO I JUST LOVE THIS STORY ALTHOUGH I WILL BE READING AND REVEIWING ON THE OTHER SITE BECAUSE ITS FIVE CHAPTERS IN WHICH I AM LOVING BUT ALSO WILL CONTINUE TO REVIEW ON HERE EVERYTIME YOU UPDATE OH HERER OMG JUST WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BY THE WAY I AM HERSHEY26 ON THE OTHER SITE........LOL
Author's Response:
You found me! chuckles. I appreciate your enthusiasm. Everytime I see "whooo" somewhere, I am now programmed to think of you! Thank you for reading. I appreciate your support.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/01/11 10:18 pm