I loved the face off between Maks and Ray J. I could really picture Ray being protective and Maks respecting it but holding his ground. I loved from one player to another, don't disrespect my sister. I laughed at Ray J telling Maks that he knows what"s going on with Brandy and him because he's a dude. I also laughed when Ray J was telling Maks not to have chicks on the side. You know, the standard. HilariousReviewer: Carolyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/09/12 08:19 am
You're doing pretty good for a first timer. I looking forward to more chapters.Reviewer: googirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 01:23 am
so i know this is like a year late, but can you update this please? you're such a good writer and you capture every character perfectly. please update soon :)Reviewer: Mia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/12 04:56 pm
I really enjoy this story! Is there gonna be more??? :)Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/02/12 09:39 am
This story is soooo good and very well written.....please continue, really like the way its going....Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/11 10:39 pm
Please, hurry with the next chapter! LOL!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/11/11 09:45 pm
UGH where is Maks when u need him???
I know, right? He might need reinforcements...Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/11 08:48 am
I can't believe Dennis, man I hope Brandy tell Maks everything.With friends like that who need enemies.Great job I'm looking forward to the next chapter.Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 04:21 am
Dennis and Erin may be in for a few surprises of their own.Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 03:15 am
Brandy had better tell Maks about his supposed friend Dennis. He can't be trusted. I can't believe that he disrepected Brandy like by showing up to her house drunk. That was all kinds of wrong, but Dennis and Erin seem to have that in common. I can't wait to read more.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/11 02:19 am
Oh geez Dennis is hitting on Brandy and Erin is lying on Maks....this bitch! Can't wait to read what happens next!!
Thanks hon! I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint.Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/09/11 12:21 am
Wow!!Another Brandmc fanfic. I like this one too. And as for Dennis and Erin, they are such losers, it's a shame they even exist. I just hope Dennis don't do anything to Brandy in his drunken state. So please write some more, the buildup is gonna hit the fan lol.
Thanks for the support. I'll admit I struggled with this chapter and the change it brings in the story, but where the pen tells me where to go, that's where I go. Dennis' actions may actually bring Brandy and Maks together. I promise that the payoff for the buildup will be HUGE! Keep giving me feedback. It keeps me motivated.Reviewer: Fran Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 05:39 pm
I really got all addicted to this story when my ass was supposed to be cleaning my triflin' children's room. LOL. Keep it going!
Yes! Read my fic! Triflin -child mess can wait! Glad you liked it!Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 09:02 pm
When can I get an update on this story?
I'm not sure. I'm at a bit of a crossroads in the story. Trying to make sense of the direction I took it in. Hopefully in the next few weeks. Sorry for the delay. Glad you're enjoying it.Reviewer: Danni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/06/11 02:49 pm
Oh the drama!!!!! I love this! I have to read more and see what'll happen!
Please do. Thanks for reading!Reviewer: Shae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/06/11 07:40 am
Thanks everyone! I appreciate the support! Jadadominique, its coming. Its coming. LOL.Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 09:59 pm
Me likey!!Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 07:32 am
I'm enjoying your story. Maks and Brandy are perfect together. I hope Erin and Dennis don't totally mess up their relationship.
Thanks. I hope they can survive. You never know in love world...Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 05:38 am
i love this story its going fast but good but erin and dennis need to be locked up asap keep it coming more love making please
Yeah, they should. I probably can talk to someone who knows someone about making the lovemaking thing happen. LOL.Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/06/11 08:44 pm