This is just a word of advice for the young women who may read this. No one can make anyone do anything. In this chapter Tina says that she pushed Harry to behave as he did. That's simply not true. I'm not saying that a person is not affected by how another behaves, but a real MAN would not push or yell at a woman. especially not one that he loves.
I understand where the author is going with this, but I felt the need to caution against glorifing or minimizing violet or disrespectful behavior by a man against a women.
Having said that I applaud the author for her courage in putting her work out for the reading pleasure of other, and encourage her to continue.
Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/07/11 02:05 am
I think that Harry and Tina are rushing in to the wedding. In this chap it was obvious to me that they don't really know each other a lot. Harry has a temper and Tina is very bitchy. They both have some things to work on. I was laughing at the part where Harry punched Marco. The real Harry wouldn't even waist his time on Marco. He would have let the people who works for him solve this problem.
Sometimes I think that Tina is using Harry as a rebound. When he was in the army she kind of cheated on him, she give in to Marco very easily. If it wasn't because Marco was pressuring her in to having sex, she wouldn't have give Harry a chance. I do understand that she is still a kid. But she could have at least told Harry that she was seeing someone. She wasn't honest with him. Harry must really love her, because any other guy would have never took her back or trust her 100% again.
Date: 04/07/11 01:48 am
This chapter was to funny. I like the fact that your characters are real and so emotional. Tina and Harry had such emotional and character in that scene loved it.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 04/07/11 01:18 am
I think that they compare Tina with Diana because of their humbleness and the way she interact with the people. Those two are very good together.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 04/07/11 01:11 am
Tina is such a heartless bitch sometimes. I get that Harry has a temper, but she should know that he would never hit her. She always complains about how she will leave him if he touched her and stuff. Its getting kind of old. I get that Harry has to work on his temper. But he is human and he is not perfect. Tina will have to deal with it or leave his ass. Its simple as that.
I get that we all make mistakes, but Tina is just stupid. How many celebrity had been in these kind of scandals. She should have learned about their mistakes, but no. If those pictures gets out in public, I will not feel sorry for her at all.
I don't think that these two should get marry. Tina is not mature enough for this and neither is Harry. Tina complains about every single thing. She is bitchy as hell sometimes and really annoying. I have respect for Harry for putting up with her. But for how long? Love or not, there is so much a person can handle. I feel sorry for him sometimes. I love when the main girl is in depended and strong. But Tina is soo annoying.
I'm still curiuos to see what direction this is going. Even tho I can't stand Tina.
Author's Response:
To poor Tina's defense, I don't really think she knew she'd marry a prince, therefore these pictures would have no need to resurface..
Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/07/11 12:43 am
Loves the update!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 11:24 pm
love it
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 08:28 am
Actually I am enjoying reading this. Nice work young lady.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 08:04 am
I love how cute they are together! I also love your Kate, I imagine that she is really sweet in real life.
Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 07:06 am
the story is coming along good dont worry about the haters just do your thing and update quick am on the edge of my bed lol
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 06:57 am
I really like your story and they direction it is going.; I knew someone was going to surface and Marco just jeaklous. I hope he got rid of those pics of her in Bra nd panty. that would be such a big scandal.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/11 05:42 am