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Title: Chapter 1

I hope you made up your mind with this version. Its like the third time that you start with this story again. And honestly I think its kind of unfair that you will only update sooner when you get 10 or more reviews on each chapter. SO if you get only 3 or 4 you will update once a month?? Sorry but it sounds kind of forced. Its a lot more nice when people post comments spontaneously instead of feeling kind of forced to do it other wise the writer won't continue with the story or won't update sooner.



Author's Response:

Well I ask for people to review not because they have to it's just it will motivate me more to write better and to update sooner. How will I know what to improve on if know body reviews or that people like this story. They could put a simple Update and that lets me know that there somebody out there that likes my story or wants me to countine.

And if i delete this story I won't put it back up ever again.

 Reviewer: a reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 01:29 am
Title: Chapter 1

ok was great but i hope you keep yr promise because it's the third time i reading chapter one, becase every time you change it pls finish this one.



Author's Response:

I Know I keep changing this story but the first two time I thought it was kinda kiddy and Unrealistc, Now i'm taking my time and writing something better are thats what I'm aiming for.

 Reviewer: ladynaik Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 01:22 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like it . Want to read more.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 01:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm very intrigued, please continue.

 Reviewer: Shaun Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 01:06 am
Title: Chapter 1

I love this story

 Reviewer: Story Lover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 01:05 am
Title: Chapter 1

Please update!!! I love this story

 Reviewer: SuperFan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 01:05 am
Title: Chapter 1

Loved it keep posting plz!!!!!

 Reviewer: Hale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 1

interesting... you've intrigued me now... waiting for the next chapter

 Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 12:42 am
Title: Chapter 1

I am glad you are back, so please update soon.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 12:36 am
Title: Chapter 1

I am so glad that you are bringing the story back. I love this story!!!! What made you choose a different girl? It is a very good start I like how he she is affecting him by just being there. Update again!!!!!! Love it!!!!!

 Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 10:40 pm
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