Great chapter, I think this is how falling in love should be, good friends who cannot live without each other.
Thanks!
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/11 04:52 am
First question: when exactly did you write all this? Have I just been asleep?
Second question: ....um don't got one.
This is too funny. Love is friends. Love Padma. Love the opening of this chapter. Priceless. I can't believe they are all going to go on this trip just cause he said so. Where did he get these friends and can I have some? (guess that counts as second question)
Oh oh, third question: will there be a show down between EvRen and the ex? Cause that feels like it would be hilarious especially if Padma was anywhere near.
Keep them coming!
Y tambien, me gusta las gotas de castellano!
One more thing. Were you channeling Fleetwood Mac for this title?
Author's Response:
all these questions! i wrote this all between yesterday and today, just struck me so i had to go with it. i might actually update again before the night is over. i'm glad you're enjoying this though. all that Spanish!!!
Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/12/11 01:54 am
Awwww that was a cutie moment!!! Can Ceaser find out about sunday morning *eyebrow lift*
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/11 01:23 am
Really enjoying this story. Love all the characters and the fun interractions.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/11 01:00 am
Wow, can't wait to see what happens on the trip
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/11 12:46 am
hot damn...i like this hahaha
Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/11 07:15 pm
I am really enjoying this new tale; thoroughly entertaining as always!
OMG Evan and Caesar are so perfect for each other! It's funny how EVERYONE but them can see that:)
I am totally rooting for them, and can't wait to see what happens when they go on vacation; hopefully sparks will really fly while they are away!
Merry Christmas!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/11 10:30 am
So I'm holding a logical review ransom until I get another update...get with it woman...do you want your review?
Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/11 06:56 am
They're so cute together even though they aren't together. I love how they genuwinely care for one another. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/11 03:06 am
I love how Caesar is taking care of Evan. Love their relationship! Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/11 02:01 am
Love the story can't wait for the next chapter. HAPPY HOLIDAY :)
Reviewer: Tracy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/11 12:58 am
you are off to a very nice start, my dear. characters sound very interesting.
Reviewer: readywonder Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/11 09:56 am
This story is soooo super cute so far! I LOVE it. I love your grammar. The way you write is poetic minus the cursing. Be careful with that, too much cursing tends to make the dialogue undearable sometimes. But the phrases are beautiful. When you talked about the intimacy of the sun and her skin because of the open roof of her jeep (paraphrasing of course) that was truely beautiful. There was something else you said that stuck out to me but I can't remember. I just remember liking the way it sounded. Cesear (spelling) is super cute. I love his relationship with Evan. And I adore her name btw! But anyway keep it up girl!!! You'e got a fan in me! Update soon!!!
Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/12/11 07:12 am
lets c where this goes
Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/11 12:49 am
LOL..this is awesome!
I love the obvious closeness with Evan's family and Ceasar. I can only guess its the same with his family and her as well.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 06:43 pm
Whats this, whats this, whats this??
Intellectual Tit Mouse! (when your being stern a theres got to be three names)
You didn't tell me bout this when I was whinning about my story! Damn your modesty!
So.......
I'm liking the vibe. Erotic and Humorous is good.
Y después?
Reviewer: puertaobierta Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 05:58 pm
I'm loving this already! Caesar is hot!
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 02:49 pm
Seriously you thought this was bad? You're kidding...right...
I can picture them together and the whole Saturday morning scene playing out. Toss in mom and it was a hilarious exchange. Why oh why is Miss Evan lying to herself? She knows who and what she wants. Silly girl.
Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 02:29 pm
Ceasar is hot!!! Me likey!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 07:42 am
What dance do you want me to do...The Running...The Reebok...I'll mosh pit dive...so happy right now
Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 06:32 am
Intrigued already. I can't wait until the first chapter is posted.
Reviewer: BilliMonroe Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 06:27 am