I love this story already!
Reviewer: universauhl Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/14 03:51 am
Wow, this is such a cute story but it's so full of sexual passion between the two even though they have not taken it there yet. Would love to read an update of it since it's been a few years now.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/02/13 12:59 pm
the entire story is great
Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/04/11 01:19 am
yes i'm glad she giving him a change because they seem to realy like each other alot. maybe they fall in love too. now the pool action all can say is dam lol had to get cold water after reading that lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:46 am
ooo how cute is that they singing together holding each other nice. glad that her friend oliva invited him to lunch. wonder what going to happen next? i hope they kiss thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:38 am
well her friend make a point he did help with the bags and he looks like he need a home cook meal and some other things too wink wink. glad they made up good friends are hard to find. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:28 am
lol poor justin who knows maybe ashlynn with help with jr some day all night long lol. i'm glad that he like her and who knows maybe she give him a change she might meet mr. right. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:21 am
what happen to her for her not to trust guys agian? i love her friend oliva she got guts and she seem to try to help her friend out. don't blame her starting at justin i would done the same thing lol. like the story and thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:13 am
This was an awesome piece of fan fiction! And really sexy, especially for a story where there wasn’t any sex! Just the chemistry and tension, and gorgeous physical pairing. And the scene at the pool was hot!
I hope you add more stories soon, really enjoyed this and I think this story definitely has further potential. This was fantastic, add soon!
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 28/07/09 03:31 am
Girl, those two have some unworldly self-control if they can undress each other, touch and kiss each other and that's ALL! LOL
I do think it's a good idea that they wait awhile before sleeping together.
Good update!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 01/11/08 01:22 am
Really enjoying this story!! Update soon.
Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/10/08 12:10 am
I swear I will be getting to this story soon. I have a weak spot for Justin Timberlake *sigh* so yeah, will have to catch up with chapters and commenting :) Just wanted to let you know :)
Reviewer: madame z Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/10/08 07:57 pm
“Perfectly. We can still do what we did last night though right?” I ask giving her a mischievous grin.
just like a guy...lol
Reviewer: CMA Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/10/08 07:07 pm
Go Ashlynn, that is the way to get his attenetion in your polka dot bikini and they are singing together...great story. Thanks
Author's Response: thanks for reading :)
[Report This]Date: 26/10/08 04:55 pm
They are to funny...thanks for a great read. LOL WOW, I am still chcukling about the way that they interact.
Author's Response: they are cute, aren't they? lol, thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 26/10/08 04:48 pm
ROFLMAO...dude is to funny, Justin Jr...oh man. Loving the story. Thanks
Author's Response: lol, thanks!
[Report This]Date: 26/10/08 04:23 pm
Great story...with a friend like Olivia Ashlynn doesn't need any enemies. Thanks
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 26/10/08 04:17 pm
AWESOME!!! PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh don't worry, I'll keep it coming, lol. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 26/10/08 08:59 am
Great start!!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thank you, i'm glad that you like it. thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 26/10/08 05:52 am
Cute!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 25/10/08 11:50 pm
love it love it love it!!
Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you :)!
[Report This]Date: 25/10/08 10:29 pm
That was so wrong to stop there. Post the next update pronto!
That is one of my favorite songs...classic!
Author's Response:
i know, i love cliff hangers, lol.
it's one of my favorite songs too, its the ultimate sexy song, lol.
thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 25/10/08 09:12 pm
I remember this story... Just not sure what the name of the site was, but you all had some rocking stories over there.
Thanks for posting this over here
Author's Response: I'm over at Tasting Eden now, that's probably where you read it. Thanks for reading it back then and now, lol! Reviewer: Jmee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/08 06:44 pm
I liked reading this chapter. Justin is funny and a true guy.
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like it! And yes, Justin is a genuinly nice guy. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 25/10/08 05:26 pm
Thanks, for another wonderful update.
Author's Response: thank you, i'm so happy that you all are enjoying it so much. thank you again for reading!
[Report This]Date: 25/10/08 04:33 pm