Great start. LMAO at Olivia, I have friends like that.
Author's Response: friends like Olivia are great, they always keep things interesting, lol. thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 25/10/08 04:29 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE.
Author's Response: just updated! lol, glad you like it. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/10/08 01:46 pm
I think I just had an orgasm and there was nothing remotely sexual about what just happened. All he did was push against me and here I am ready to rip off my clothes and tell him to just take me on the lawn.
This made me LOL, it was very cute. Love how spastic she is around him, very entertaining. Great update, looking forward to the next one. :)
Author's Response: that's one of my favorite parts as well. Ashlynn can get really squirmy when she's nervous. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reading! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/10/08 06:45 pm
Aw, man. Here she goes making me feel bad again. I really hate being a girl sometimes.
LMAO.....
Ashlynn is a goner....lol...Go Liv....
Hey luv,
So sorry Im late for chapter 2 & 3....Im so loving this story to pieces....please please please dont make me late too long for the update.....
Author's Response: you're not late for anything, just as long as you end up reading it is all that matters, lol. and thanks for reading, i'm glad your are liking it so much. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 21/10/08 01:50 am
Great start!. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: thank you, i hope you continue to like it. thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 20/10/08 04:48 pm
I really like this story!
Ashlynn is sweet! Justin is hot!
Author's Response: thanks and justin is pretty hot! Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/10/08 12:17 am
I am so loving this story! Poor Ashlynn, I can sympathize with her...that is the way I am around people I don't know!
Author's Response: oh no! you get that nervous? but Ashlynn's nervousness is pretty cute, lol. thanks for reading! :)
Date: 19/10/08 11:04 pm
i just discovered this story, i really like the quirky, fun feel of it. i can't wait to find out more, especially about Tony.
Author's Response: ooh, i'm glad you fount it. thanks for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 17/10/08 03:22 pm
I like you giving his point of view. I cant wait for the next update. I hope she goes to the party too.
pokerdiva01
Author's Response: thanks, the entire story goes between Ashlynn's p.o.v. and Justin's p.o.v. I think it's important to show both sides of the story. Thanks for reading :) Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/10/08 03:11 am
JUST WANTED TO SAY I ENJOYED THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS OF YOUR STORY... CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!
Author's Response: thank you, i'll try and keep updating on a regular basis so I don't keep you guys waiting, lol.
[Report This]Date: 17/10/08 03:04 am
You have me hungering for more. This story is funny yet hart warminging. I can't wait for Ashlynn and Justin to hook up.
Author's Response: funny yet heart warminging is exactly what i was going for, lol. thanks you so much for reading and I hope you continue too!
[Report This]Date: 17/10/08 01:10 am
Awe that was good....but come mate that was way too short.....i need more i tell you more....like soon...pleaase please please......
Author's Response:
haha, i think i have you hooked already huh? i just updated for you and thanks again for reading :)
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/10/08 10:03 pm
Nice! more please
Author's Response: glad you like it :)
Date: 16/10/08 08:26 pm
Great start. Really liking this so far. Olivia is a trip. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the read, i'm glad you enjoyed it. Olivia's a fun girl, you'll get to know her in the coming chapters.
[Report This]Date: 15/10/08 05:17 am
Girl this is good. Ashlynn reminds me of me. Please update as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Ashlynn is so shy, you possibly can't be <i>that</i> shy, lol.
[Report This]Date: 15/10/08 01:49 am
I love your story and it made me laught. Please update.
Author's Response: Thanks, i'm glad it made you laugh! I'll update as soon as I can, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 14/10/08 03:17 pm
I really like this story. I cant wait for the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, i'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading! Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/10/08 03:04 pm
I can't wait to for the update!
Her friend didn't have to be so forward!
Author's Response:
Olivia is a very forward chick, lol. She's wrong for that though, just wait until you meet Tony...
Thanks for the read and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/10/08 09:04 am
Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 14/10/08 07:00 am
Nice start to your story. Love the pace.. it has a nice flow. Girlfriend freaking out was funny as hell.. LOL
And I have to say, the 1965 Ford Mustang - I have always wanted this car. I hope to have it, one day..
Thanks for sharing your story and Welcome to The Chamber!
Author's Response:
I would KILL to own a 1965 Mustang, they are the must beautiful pieces of macherinery that I have ever seen. It's always been a dream of mine to own one. Thanks for welcoming me and I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Thanks for the read!
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 14/10/08 06:57 am
Whatever that was about it was a low blow.
Author's Response: Very low in deed, wait til you meet Tony. Thanks for reading! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/10/08 06:38 am
This was a great start, I loved the convo with Justin, it was cute, even though Ashlynn freaked out a bit a the end. Let's hope she calms down a bit before she talks to him again. And what's the deal with Tony, can't wait to see what that's all about.
Thanks for posting this, looking foward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Tony's a very interesting character, he comes in a little later in the story. Thank you for reading and I'm glad that you liked it so much! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/10/08 06:17 am
DAMN I AM LOVING THIS STORY. WELCOME TO THE CHAMBER..PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING....
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 14/10/08 05:30 am
Oh that was funny and good. I just love the flow of your work. Thanks for posting this here for us to read Lips of Pink...you rock...
keep posting i need more...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't worry, there will definitely be more. Thanks again! Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/10/08 04:48 am