I loooove this story! I cant wait for more! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks! Will update soon :)
Date: 05/02/09 04:59 pm
Let the games begin! Todd is going to be in for it. I bet he doesn't think Van has it in her to play him. I can't wait to see what move she makes first.
Reviewer: YH Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/02/09 12:01 pm
OMG that was some hot hot hot games these two playing with each other. Keri right she has to play with fire mess with todd head witch is going to be fun. I swear i thought she was going to kill lily in that office lol thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/09 07:36 am
OMG, that chapter was great. I love David calling out Todd's feelings for Eva like he did with Eva. Also, the part where Todd was going crazy thinking he lost Van then told her to promise to never leave him, just awwww. How sweet and cute. Also, the scene at Ultraviolet was hilarious, I love jealous, territorial Todd lol. I also loved the kiss but wish it was longer but Todd is screwing with Van. I can't wait to see how Van will get Todd back and f*ck with him now. More jealous Todd, I can't wait. What a fun story lol.
Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/09 07:22 am
Black! this chapter was just so so good and hot. Goodness, Todd is a trip and just so naughty. But I believe he just release another side of Evangeline with these games. Oh dear and let the games begin.
Todd and David scene just rock and we finally see why Todd is doing this to Evangeline. He wants Evangeline for himself. Aww, but he sure is making things hard isn't he? But we are talking about Todd Manning. LOL
Ladies night was fun and Kerri is so funny. I love her as a friend for Evangeline. Oh! I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing Black and great writng again
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 05/02/09 06:48 am
I love this story! Makes me want to watch the movie again. Write faster!
Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 02:05 pm
It's always a blast reading your stories, I have a feeling that the best of this story is just about to start. Keep up the good work ma.
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/01/09 01:46 am
I love how you are adding Lily as a new element because she certainly knows how to bring it so Evangeline better watch her back! Awaiting your next update!
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/09 04:40 pm
I am so loving this story!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 24/01/09 02:17 am
Now that was classic Todd. I just love this story.
Author's Response: So glad you like :)
Date: 23/01/09 07:52 pm
Hee! I love it!!! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Elle! Will update soon :)
Date: 23/01/09 02:53 pm
Hah! I love it, Lily replacing her after the snark about her skin that would piss anyone off. I'm loving Keri and Neil in this story, I'm looking foward to their scenes together. David was awesome as always, calling Evangaline on her feelings for Todd. And sending her food and wine was sweet, though not too sweet, this is Todd we're talking about. I think part of him wants her to quit so he can have a shot, yet doesn't want her to because she might leave. Or something. :)
Great update Black!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Token :) David's always fun to write and you could be right about Todd's real motives. :)
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/09 08:57 am
Todd is such a jerk. Pissing off the woman you love is not the best way to win her heart.
Author's Response: Ha! Yes, he is a jerk isn't he? thanks for reading Sweet Pea :)
Date: 23/01/09 05:47 am
Todd better watch his balls before van cuts them off lol. I can't belive he did that to her and that girl got some nervers to tell van she has dry skin. I wish these two just relize they love each other thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Glad you like wwefan. Thanks so much for reading :)
[Report This]Date: 23/01/09 04:54 am
I LOVE this story. I love how you write the character interactions. I love Todd's scheming and I love Evangeline faking like she not in love with Todd. I can't wait for an update.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying it superstar :) Thanks so much for reading.
Reviewer: Superstar2577 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/09 02:28 am
That was a nice update. I like that David could easily see Van loves Todd, and Kerri and David's banter was nice too. Everything Todd did for Van's birthday was so sweet. Lastly, I love the animosity between Eva and Lily and the fact Todd hired Lily cause he knew Van hated her lol. I can't wait till the next chapter to see Van fuming about Lily working with Todd, so juicy.
Author's Response: Thanks bsbgirl. So glad you like it and will update soon :)
Date: 23/01/09 12:59 am
Todd is playing with fire now, hope he doesn't get burned.
I'm going to enjoy a Lily/Vange feud, and you have Lily pegged like on the show, a total airhead... (boy do I miss Davetta's version of Lily)
Loved David and Kerri's they are comic relief.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Hey shina, so glad you like it. Not the biggest Lily fan, so yes, she served a great purpose :) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/01/09 10:29 pm
Todd is hilarious; I wonder how far he is willing to go to prove a point. He really did cross the line where Evangeline is concerned, but does he really have to go this far to prove she is making a mistake by leaving him...hmm....
It'll be interesting to see how they get back to each other.
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading Amiefuzzy :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/01/09 08:27 pm
No, Lily didn't. My mouth hung open at what Lily said. It's one thing to insult a woman, it's another thing to bring up ash. You just don't. Evagline Williamson is going to have to choke a bitch.
You've got me all riled up, Black. I can't wait for the next part. I'm loving David and his one liners. Calling Kerri an "evil boheme" was priceless.
Author's Response: Ha! Yes, it may just come to the choking of the bitch. Love that you're riled up. I'm a big David lover so you'll get lots, and lots of the snark. :) Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/01/09 05:26 pm
ARGH! This is going to be sooo fun! :D Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading kooshasay! Glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 22/01/09 04:11 pm
FINALLY AN UPDATE I JUST LOVE THIS STORY. OOH I HATE LILY TOO I DARE TODD HIRE HER BUT AT LEAST HER DAD CAN KEEP THE BITCH IN CONTROL. PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING..FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks hershey! So happy you liked it :)
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/09 03:21 pm
Ok this update had me laughing from start to finish. Thank you for David. I love him being Evangeline assistant.. The banter between David, Kerri and Evangeline was awesome. The timing was on point.
Love how everyone see's what going on between these two, but them.
Damn you for the awe moments. I was choked up on her B-Day right with her.. and then the coq au vain arrived - damn you - 
I heart 
the fact that Evangeline hates Lily and Todd knows it.. Awesome -
Most interesting line in the story -
"Mindy is a Scorpio," he said. "Must be why she’s good with people." - lol
Author's Response: So glad you liked it zeta. And yes, I'll always, always bring David. I try not to and he pops up anyway :) Thanks for the review! Reviewer: zeta Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/01/09 02:07 pm
LOL!!! Now I know why you are using CK's Lily!!! Evangeline is going to eat her alive before it's other with. Oh Todd you are just evil, when you are piss. Which is so adorable. David is craking me up in the story too. I was wondering when somebody was going to call Evangeline on her love for Todd and David was the person. The whole scene in Evangeline office was priceless!! I love the flasback with Evangeline's birthday. So wonderful. Okay I'm waiting to see what Evangeline is going to next because I know it's about to go down in the next chapter in some type of fashion. LOL!! Great as always Black.
Reviewer: Megumi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/01/09 07:20 am
Todd is a complete ass, but you can't help but love him.
Author's Response: LOL. You are so right Sweet Pea. Thanks for reading :)
[Report This]Date: 13/01/09 06:11 pm
Great update! I love how you're using Keri and Neil in this, I already like them as a couple. and they seem pretty leveled headed, just what the situation needs. Of course Todd is going to play games with Evangline, who I'm pretty sure was disspointed when he stopepd calling. LMAO at the Lavery jokes, he's so lame. So glad Todd pointed that out. :)
Awesome chapter Black, very cute. But with a hint of sexy too. :)
Author's Response:
Hey Token. Thanks for reading. Glad you lie Kerri and Neil. Will see more of them as the story progresses. And yes, they are the level headed ones. Todd always plays games so I figured this was par for the course. And yes. Lavery is lame.
Thank again!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/09 04:32 am