They are so cute together...I need more please. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/09 04:25 pm
True understanding. I have seen that in my sisters marriage. As I was reading this, I kept seeing my sister and brother-in-law in my mind. Thank you!!
Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/09 11:18 am
Damn, you are good. Your characters come alive for me. I ca almost reach out and touch Alex and Matt, or is it Matthew lol!! Well done.
Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/09 10:28 pm
This is a really thoughtful piece. I like the tone and the mood; her reflecting. And I love the overall theme, "Bed". Who'da thunk that having to replace an item as mundane as a bed would set you to considering your marriage? I love this piece; am marking it a favorite. Will try to keep up. Great job. :)
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 25/01/09 07:45 pm
The thoughts you have while shopping. I laughed at the fact that she spoke up about her feelings right there. My weak self would have waited until we got home, giving him a chance to escape, while I just got angrier.
Could you add more spacing to the next chapter. Spacing between paragraphs makes it easier to read.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 23/01/09 02:35 pm
Very interesting start. So what is up with Alex. Is Matthew really a jerk? or does Alex not know what she wants. Look forward to finding out as the story goes along.
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 23/01/09 05:05 am