DAMN WHEN JACK CLOSED THE DEAL WITH DRU WITH A SCORCHING KISS, I WAS LIKE DAMN I WANT TO DO BUSINESS WITH JACK IF THATS WHAT HE PUTTING OUT IN THE PLACE OF A HANDSHAKE.. i JUST LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH YOU ARE ONE TALENTED WRITER.... FOREVER A FAN AND KEEP IT COMING!!!!!
Author's Response: Jack def knows how to close a business deal. Thanks so much for your awesome reveiw and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 03:48 am
Oh this was nice Black. Man, Victor just goes for the kill doesn't he? But that's why he's is TGVN *lol* I loving Mikey already. That's my slick lawyer. I love the past scenes for Dru and Jack and it seems that this is when Neil came in the picture in your last past scene. I hope Dru doing the right thnk by being partners with Jack in terms in business and pleasure too it seem. Oh Smiling Jack still has his power over Dre. Nice. Great upate Black.
Author's Response: Hey Megumi. Victor is no joke. Michael isn't either thank goodness. And yes, this is when Neil came into Dru's life. As for whether Dru made the right choice we'll see, but Jack is def determined to get his way this time. Thanks for the review and the stars!
Date: 09/08/08 03:48 am
you betta go girl!
That was freakin HOT! I just LOVE Dru and Jack together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Pru! Thanks for reading and for the great review! Reviewer: pru Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 02:45 am
Great update Black!! Magnifico.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading rhonda and the review!
Date: 09/08/08 01:23 am
I am so glad you updated this! Before reading this I never paired Dru and Jack together, but now I can totally see it. You have made Jack Hella sexy.."Nice doing business with you too Dru." I love it. Excellent update.
Author's Response: Hey Harlen! Thanks for reading. Yes, Jack and Dru are a little different but I've been curious about them as a pair for a while. After Dru fell of a cliff, I figured what the hell, I'd give it a shot. So glad you're enjoying it and thanks so much for the review. Reviewer: Harlen Winters Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/08 01:19 am
Awesome update Mamba. funny how i never thought these two would make a goood couple, but now i can't stop reading it!
Author's Response: Hey kaci! Thanks for reading. Everyone says that when they read this story but I always thought they'd make a great pair. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review girl.
Date: 09/08/08 01:16 am
Great Chapter!! I loved the Dru and Ash scenes. I wish Y&R were bold enough to do Dru and Jack. Can't wait for Michael Baldwin to enter.:)
Author's Response: I reallly, really dislike Ashley. However, I really, really love writing the Dru/Ash scenes. And Y&R seriously missed the boat on this one. I kept waiting for it to happen then Dru went over a cliff. Thanks for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 31/07/08 01:44 am
Damn girl do I have to say this again...go and write a damn book! Go make a lot of dinero!!!
Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/07/08 05:07 pm
Yeah, Jack's kind of an asshole. He loves her, I really think he does, but still...asshole.
Who are you calling," Olivia asked.
"Michael Baldwin," Dru replied
*Token does the happy dance*
Great chapter Black, you got me all worked up again. Can't wait for the next one....
Oh and btw...
Ashley's a bitch.
Author's Response:
Ah, but he's my asshole. LOL. See, that's what I've always loved and found fascinating about Jack. He can be so giving and loving one minute and a controlling manipulative jackass the next. *sigh* God bless him.
I lurve me some Michael so you know I couldnt' resist.
And yes--Ashley is a bitch. Thanks for the review and the stars!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 29/07/08 05:44 pm
I should have known!!! Jack was behind everybody at Newman knowing about Dru and his meeting. Jack is a snake in the grass, but this needed to happen though. Oh man, past Dru told Ashley about herself and old Vic. Those two will never like each other, never. Okay, why did Liv have to call Michael name out like that? Yes, Michael is a lowlife at times, but I love my Michael. Great update Black. I can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response: What can I say, Jack is Jack. His heart was in the right place though. I couldn't resist that scene with Dru and Ashely. Can you tell I"m not a big Ashely fan? She'd just so darn useful in the story though. And Olivia may think Michael's a snake, but I think he's the bees knees. :-) Thanks for the review Megumi! Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/07/08 04:33 pm
Can I just say that Ashley can go jump off a cliff? I hate Neil for what he's doing to Dru. She is so much better off without him. Great update Black!!!
Author's Response: Hmmm, Ashley and a cliff. My need to put that in my next story. Neil is being Neil. He's hurt right now and honestly he has every right to be. That being said he's still a liar. Actually everyone's a liar which is kinda awesome. Thanks for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 29/07/08 03:07 pm
Loved Dru getting into Ashley's face about Victor.. as if..
I want to believe Jack is sincere.. I so want to.. coming to look for her.. wanting to be there for her..
but there is something to be said for a woman scorned and payback being a Bitch.. I just have to wait and see.. But I am loving the story.. Great Update.. Keep them coming
Author's Response: Ha, ha, I couldnt' resist that Ashely moment. She's such a hypocrite. Jack, sincere? Eh--in his own Jack way. He does want what's best for her, but he's a little manipulative in how he goes about it. Thanks for the review and the stars~ Reviewer: zeta Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/07/08 02:55 pm
I can't believe Jack did that but then again I can. I'm shocked because I never saw THAT coming but then again Jack would do anything for his ballerina.
Ashley aka Trashley always got on my last nerves. Glad Dru told her about herself and she's luck Jack came in. We already know the winner of that fight wouldn't have been an Abbott.
Please tell me Dru's going to leave Neil's sorry behind! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Jack is Jack. Can't say that enough. I absolutely think he would do something like this for the woman he loves. Ashley is queen of the hypocrites. Couldn't resist calling her out at her name. Neil and Dru's marriage is dead on arrival. The fallout though will be someting to behold. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: Maverick Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/07/08 06:34 am
gamn dru better stop treating jack like sh*i or i will have to take her out and take her place. Jack just showed dru where neil weak ass loyalty lie and it aint with her. I love this story soooo much. please , lease i need more.. your biggest fan victoria!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL. Little protective of Jack are we? Thanks for the review hershey and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 29/07/08 06:15 am
Jack is still playing tricks. Does he not know Dru by now, she doesn't like to be pushed into a corner. I'm sure she'll calm down, but he'll still have a red cheek.
I can't stand that self-rightous Ashley.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 29/07/08 06:09 am
Loving this story and I can't wait for the truth to come out about Lily. Her reaction to her "father" lying through his ass all these years should be priceless, as well as Drucilla's and Jack's reactions as well.
I'm also amused at how Neil's uptight loser ass has deluded himself all these years about the true nature of Jackand Dru's relationship.
Why he believes Jack only wanted Dru for sex all those years ago is a mystery to me....unless Dru unintentionally gave him that idea, but whatever it is, he needs a reality check about it now. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Reviewer: pru Signed [Report This]Date: 29/07/08 05:37 am
I'm so glad Dru's marriage with dull ass Neil is over! BlackMamba, don't let her go back to him. And have Dru slap Lily while she's at it! And self-righteous Ashley! I can't stand Ashley!
Update soon!
Author's Response: Don't worry lovemboth, the marriage is done. Lily, is---Lily. I couldn't write her any other way. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/07/08 04:43 am
What a great update, and Ashley face must of been priceless. Jack is bold coming to find her at Liv's. I can't stand Liv, but I'm going to enjoy her putting two and two together and getting pissed off I hope. JV
Reviewer: JV Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/07/08 05:45 pm
Thank you for another great update!! Jack and Dru are so bloody hot!
I am loving this story, it always seems to make me blush;)
I had to re-submit my review forgot to add my rating
Author's Response: Hey AshAli! So glad you liked it. It is a bit raunchy in places but you know this story just takes me there I suppose. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: AshAli Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/07/08 03:54 am
Damn! Word travels fast! Like the flashbacks. Update soon.
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for the review lovemboth and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 21/07/08 02:00 am
I'm liking this story... Dru and Jack are hot together... I read this one b4 Loving Dru.. but I still may finish reading Loving Dru b/c you are a very good writer.
Author's Response: Ah, so glad you're enjoying it Lady Liberty. I see you read the first story and hope it gave you a little more context for the stakes at play in this one. Thank you so much for saying I'm a good writer. Every chapter I post is a little scary for me, so I'm happy that you enjoy it. Thanks for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 20/07/08 12:33 am
so Jack went to get Dru... Well Damn
Nice update.. can't wait until the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: zeta Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/07/08 08:51 pm
So Jack wants to make things right... hummm be careful with your heart Dru..
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 19/07/08 08:13 pm
Jack is an ass. I love him, I do, but he has been and will always be an ass. That stuff with the mail clerk? Lord, help me.
And Dru's leaving because Neil didn't support her? Really? Don't think that's the case at all, I think those wet dreams had more to do with that decision...
Don't make me side with Liv, I'll never forgive you.
Black, this fic gets me all worked up, I feel like I'm watching the damn show. Which is great, cause now I feel like yelling at my computer screen...
Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: *sigh* When you're right you're right. Jack is an ass which is why I love him so. Dru is Dru. I do my best to capture who she is (at least in my mind) so yes, her reasons for walking out on Neil had more to do with her feelings for Jack than she's letting herself admit. Oh and don't worry about Olivia--that's all I'll say. If you feel like you're watching the show, then darnit, I think I've done my job. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/07/08 06:29 pm
damn i want jack to come get me . that man is just lovely. i adore this story soooo much. forever and ever a fan for life.................
Author's Response: Ah, so you like Jack I see. LOL. thanks for the review hershey and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 19/07/08 07:20 am