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Title: Chapter 8

Oh damn Poor Sharon .. and Jack.. Whoa dude... You not playing.. You don't give a good god damn who knows how you feel about Dru! 

Great user of History - Great Update!

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Date: 24/09/08 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 7

ok I had to go and get a smiley for this one - <lmao  "I couldn't understand why he'd go after you like this---did you kick Geppetto or something---"<lmao  that damn Michael.

That said it all. Great Update!

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Date: 24/09/08 02:01 am

Title: Chapter 6

Ashley is such a bitch. I have a feeling that she was afraid that Dru would find out that she was fucking Jerome!

The Newmans are a tripp..
I guess Oliva forgot to read the sister/sista hanbook.. damn chica!

Hell yea .. you better call Michael Baldwin - Great Update

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Date: 24/09/08 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 5

OK First Off - Jerome! you are wrong for that! LOL

Damn did thoes two ever meet a closet they didn't like. LOL

You have the ability to write line that stick with your reader that make your story - unforgetable -

He mumbled against her skin, the words unintelligible until he turned his head to rest his cheek against her back.  "Mine," he whispered.  "You're mine."

Great Update!

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Date: 24/09/08 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 4

Ok I am finally getting an opportunty to catch up with this story. Great Update.. Best part of this chapter -

 "You give him a plane-a fucking airplane. Do you know how pathetic that is?"

Tell lthe truth and shame the devil Kudos Chica

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Date: 24/09/08 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 11

Just when I thought this story couldn't get any better, it surely blew me away. I'm so in love with this story. A story I would have never dreamed up in my mind with Drucilla and Jack. i hope they find out really quick that Lily is theirs. Thank you for continuing to bring this wonderful story.

Author's Response: Hey Karen.  Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you like it.  Last Chapter is coming soon!

Reviewer: karen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/09/08 07:22 am

Title: Chapter 11

Oh Mamba, mother of all writers I salute you once again for this nicely written chapter. I'm beginning to think Jack might be the father. Dont worry, I can keep a secret. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hey dyehanna. Thankss for reading.  Actually, Lily's paternity was revealed at the end of Loving Dru, the story before this one. And yes, Jack is her father and Neil kept it from Dru.  All will be revealed soon. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/09/08 03:50 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Fantastic chapter. I think everyone's getting ready to find out who Lily's daddy really is.

Mamie really treated Dru crappy. Is she still around? I hope not.

 



Author's Response: Hey lovemboth.  The wait will be over soon I promise.  And yes, Mamie was a witch in this story.  I don't know where that came from but I think I always found her annoying in some way.  The character was such a throwback to that old massa dynamic that it just made me steer her character this way which was actually fun to write.  Anyhoo, thanks for the review and the stars. :-)

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/08 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 11

Hi! Blackmamba,

Thanks for the update! I'm in love with this story! You are a very good writer! I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response: Hey Hopieland.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  So happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Another excellent update! I know this is horrible but being as though CK is playing Lily...I don't feel bad...maybe I should just imagine the other Lily. I am so glad they are together...wait until they find out about Neil's lie all these years...this is getting sooo good.

Author's Response:

Hey Harlen.  Funny you shoudl say that because if you look at my trailer carefully, you'll see I used Davetta.  I just prefer her as Lily, always have.  Thanks so much for reading and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Harlen Winters Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 05:49 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Jack and Dru were HOT as usual, I'm glad they are together.

I so hope that Lily needs a transfusion so that Jack/Dru find out that Neil lied about Lily's paternity all these yrs.



Author's Response: Hey Shina.  Thanks for reading and the review.  Much appreciated.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 05:02 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Alright Jack betta be there for your girl. At first I was like Jack & Dru really, before i read this story. But the way you tell there story i don't ever question them together. As always Black, great update!!

Author's Response: Hey Kaci :-)  Glad you're enjoying the story and my made up Jack and Dru.  Thanks for reading and reviewing girl.  Means a lot.

Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 08:16 am

Title: Chapter 11

Jack and Dru are too hot for words. I hope that Jack finds out about Lily soon and when he does,he makes Neil's life a living hell.

Author's Response: Hey Anouk. Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Much appreciated.

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 06:50 am

Title: Chapter 11

Another exciting installment of Dru and Jack...wow, loved the chair scene, from beginning to end.

Loved Dru's hesistation on entering the houuse and those memories.

 Uh-oh, Lily is hurt.



Author's Response: Hi Robin.  Glad you enjoyed the scenes. Thanks for reading and reviewing.  It's really appreciated.

Reviewer: Robin Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 11

As always, I enjoyed reading this chapter. These two are just as hot today as they were 20 years ago.
I hope that Lily in the hospital equals the truth finally coming out, you know that I've been waiting for this!!!!

Author's Response: Hey Sweet Pea. So glad you enjoyed the chapter!  I think the hotness actully took Jack a little by surprise with his old ass. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing.  As always, you're the best.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 11

Great update as always, I can't wait to see how this all shakes out.

The scene with Mamie was pretty damn powerful, and the banks slips falling to the ground...that was some powerful imagery there. But I think my favorite part was her walking down the street, she just seemed so broken, so unlike the Dru we normally see.

This was awesome as always, can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response: Hey TBG.  Thanks for reading.  The Mamie scene was my favorite in the update so I"m glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for the review. It means a lot.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 04:10 am

Title: Chapter 11

I hope lily is alright and that she make it. Jack needs to know the truth now and soon that lily is his daughter not neils. Finaly dru is going back where she belongs. thanks for the updated.



Author's Response: Hey wwefan.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Much apprecated as always.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 04:03 am

Title: Chapter 11

Mamie had me pissed in this chapter. Why couldn't Dru turn over a new leaf?

That was HOT! Just HOT! Jack/Dru still got it!

I am really hoping that the big Lily is Jack's comes due to this hospital stint... PLEASE let it be!



Author's Response: Hey Mavrick.  Yes, Mamie is def not the most likeable woman in this chapter.  Dru had gotten better but she was still hiding things.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Maverick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 03:55 am

Title: Chapter 11

Oh No! Not Lily. I hope it's not too serious, but looks like the cat is about to let out of the bag for sure now. I love the flashbacks. So much about their past is reveiled in the past to understand the future. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great update Black.



Author's Response: Hey Megumi! Thanks for reading and reviewing.  So happy you like the flashbacks.  They're my favorite thing to write. 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 11

OH MY JACK AND DRU WAS EXPLOSIVE.  LILY IN A ACCIDENT, I HOPE DRU DONT THINK IT HER FAULT BECAUSE THEY HAD WORDS WITH EACH OTHER AND SHE DID NOT GO AFTER LILY.  I THINK LILY IS GOING TO NEED BLOOD AND BOOT LICKING NEIL IS NOT GOING TO BE ABLE TO GIVE IT TO HER OR M GIRL DRU AND THATS WHEN JACK GOING TO GET TESTED FOR A MATCH AND THATS WHEN THE SH*T GOING TO COME TO HEAD ON NEIL LIES!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY KEEP IT COMING....

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing hershey!  As always you rock.  Much appreciated.

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Date: 16/09/08 03:43 am

Title: Chapter 11

Great update Black!!! Hopefull the ish is about to hit the fan!  I bet Lily needs a blood transfusion and Neil will be found out.  Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Rhonda. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: rhondanicole18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 10

Awesome!

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Date: 07/09/08 06:03 am

Title: Chapter 10

How could I have missed this story? I would have never thought of a Jack and Dru combo (I guess that's why you are a writer. LOL) I really love them together. They share a very adult type of love. Dru is right-they can't go back, but maybe if they break down the defenses that they have built around each other's hearts (through this and subsequent heartaches) they can go forward. Please continue writing. I love this story.



Author's Response:

Hey anouk, thanks for the review.  Jack's one of my favorite Y&R characters and I thought he and Dru would have been explosive.  I do like writing that grown up kind of love and I'm glad they came through.  Conclusion is coming soon so I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/08 01:19 am

Title: Chapter 10

This part was preaching to the choir (which would be me):"Then what do you want Jack," Dru asked. "I'm not the same girl I was back then. I'm middle aged and a mother---I have stretch marks and hot flashes---I can't even climb too many stairs anymore without my knees hurting---"

Black, this was an awesome update. I felt the desperation and the hope in Jack and Dru. You can't go back but maybe going forward dreams they dared to dream can become real.

Oh, and the love scene was hot!



Author's Response: Hey lovemboth! LOL, you felt that too huh? I think that was my favorite part of the update.  And yes, Jack and Dru are struggling here but finally moving forward.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/08 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I'm so happy for Jack/Dru, them making love at thier spot was both romantic and hot.

Now I want them to find out that Neil kept Lily's paternity a secret and not only get back at them but the Newmans as well.

Look out Genoa City, her comes Jack/Dru.



Author's Response:

Hey Shina.  Thanks for reading.  Stories winding down and all will be revealed so hang tight! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/08 04:13 pm

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