Loving the new chapter, BM.
Dru and Jack are as hot as they were in the past and I'm looking foward to them being together now and the truth about who Lily's real father is coming out.
I also stand by my statement of Neil being deluded by jealousy even back then. Everytime I read the flashbacks to the past it just proves more and more that Neil knew just how much Dru meant to Jack.
You don't give a woman who is nothing but some ass a ring, and for Neil to act like all Jack wanted Dru for was sex is just bs. Makes me loathe his ass kissing behind even more. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Author's Response:
Hey Pru! Thanks for reading the update. The reveal is coming soon, so be on the lookout. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pru Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/09/08 08:09 pm
Well done! this is a beautiful and well written love story Blackmamba keep it coming!
Author's Response: Hey Hopieland! Thanks for reading and thanks for the reveiw!
Date: 05/09/08 05:47 pm
WHAT A GREAT MORNING PICKUP!!!!
Author's Response: Hey choc. Thanks for the review and for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/09/08 05:03 pm
Yes! I am so happy that Dru finally admitted it not just to Jack but herself. When Dru talked about feeling guilty about Lily and Neil...my heart went out to her. That was so well written. The situation with Lily is going to be a mess, but now that her and Jack are together, it will be much easier to handle. This is my favorite chapter!
Author's Response: Hey Harlen. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have to say, writing that scene was great for me because I've been writing these two for a while and felt like it was time. And thank you, thank you for your comment about Lily and Neil. Dru is finally coming to terms with some of the choices she made and more will be revealed in these last chapters. Thanks so much for reading and thanks for the review.
Date: 05/09/08 04:24 pm
Well, it was about time!!!! Finally they admitted their feelings for each other.
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 10:29 am
Finaly she say she love him and they going to try agian. I love the flash backs neil was a big ass. He wanted dru to think that jack didn't care for her and that he a better man but he wrong jack love her and when they find out the truth about lily neil better watch out. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey wwefan. Thank so much for reading and the review.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/08 06:39 am
Great as always, I loved how the flashbacks tied in so closely with what was going on in the present. And Dru thought about Lily for a while which was nice. I liked her taking responsibitily for her actions.
Loved the update, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hey Token. I enjoy the flashback as well. This chapter was a kind of full circle for Dru and Jack I think. And yes, Dru did finally come to terms with the things she's done. I think they all will before this is over. Thanks for the review! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/09/08 06:09 am
OH, OH, MY GOSH FINALLY!!! I AM JUST BREATHLESS WITH THIS UPDATE... I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOO MUCH.. JACK AND DRU ADMITTED THAT THEY NEVER STOP LOVING EACH OTHER AND THEY FINALLY WHOOOO!!!!! I NEED A BAG OF ICE AND A STIFF DRINK.. BLACKMA, GIRL YOU ROCK!!!!!! 500 ZILLION STARS CAUSE YOU LAID OUT AND I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!! FOREVER A FAN!!!!
Author's Response: Hey Hershey! Thanks so much for reading. I loved writing this one and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 05/09/08 06:03 am
It's about damn time!!!! And that's all I have to say!
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks for reading Sweat Pea and for the stars.
[Report This]Date: 05/09/08 05:58 am
Well, now that was hot and finally they are together in the present. lol I actually love the heart-to-heart between that action before the heat started. It was something very real and genuine from Jack and Dru and we finally see their real selves for the first time in the present time. Now though I know that Neil has done wrong and in fault with so much stuff that happens between everybody, yet I can't help to see his point-of-view and understand why he did what he did in this story from the past events to the present. Great update as always Black.
Author's Response: Hey Megumi. Glad you liked this one as it's one of my favorites. I'm so glad you thought it felt real. I wanted to make a sharp contrast from the younger more idealistic Jack and Dru to the present, older wiser Jack and Dru. And all I'll say is great observation about Neil. Thanks for the review as always. You rock.
Date: 05/09/08 05:13 am
"Do you think our daughter will be a dancer?"
OMG! Its as if Jack knew and still does now! Love it. This chapter is bringing them back closer than ever and to the truth. I can't wait for them to bust Neil! Please tell me Michael will at least drop a hint about Lily to Jack/Dru. I know my man Mike doesn't care for Victor or his brown nose dog Neil.
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hey Maverick. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, it's one of my favorites. Thanks for the review! Reviewer: Maverick Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/09/08 04:42 am
Yes she going home with him. She should had throw the whole botle at brad smug self. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 04:07 pm
Love Love Love how dru put that bitch in her place and let her know she no ones whore. Thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 04:04 pm
Dam that one hell of a way to seal a business deal lol. Micheal knows something neil told him. Does he knows that neil is not lily dad? thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 04:00 pm
Well I hope jack where a cup because I have a feeling she going to go for the balls lol. I can't belive he told them but that jack always love the dram. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 03:56 pm
I give it to dru because if I was her lily would got her teeth knock down her thorat lol. I'm gald she finaly took a stand and going to do things dru way. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 03:49 pm
Wow neil is a bastard for that one. Tossing her out like she yesterday trash. I wonder how they found out that she was meeting jack? thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 03:34 pm
Dam jack has some skills in the bedroom. Neil has some balls talking to dru like that I can't wait to she found out that he been a lie snake about lily. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 03:19 pm
Well the sister is a BIG BITCH lol. I hate when people think their better then others. I hope dru lay her flat on her back but something tells me that isn't the first time sis lay on her back lol. Glad she going to meet jack. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 03:12 pm
I hate that she had to go back to that neil guy she not happy and she not in love with him. I love the flash back from her point of view thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/08 03:07 pm
Thank you for another update. This is one of my favorite stories. You have captured Dru and Jack, perfectly. I was not expecting the end. And Lily, oh my, when she, Dru, and Jack discover the truth.
Author's Response: Hi Kim! Thanks for reading and so glad you're liking the story. Really happy you think I got the characters down, that's always great to hear. Thanks for reading and thanks for the awesome review!
[Report This]Date: 30/08/08 02:48 am
Another great update. I can't wait for Jack, Dru and their daughter Lily to be a family. I know it will take some time, but in the end it will happen. You write your stories so wonderfully I can't seem to get enough of them. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hi Karen. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing the story. I'm so happy you enjoy them and I will def try to update soon.
Date: 29/08/08 10:43 pm
Loved it. Brad got off easy, the weesal! The more I read the more I want the truth to come out and for Neil to look like a jerk and loser!
Are we finally gonna see some Jack/Dru present love!?!
Author's Response: Sweet Pea! Yes, Brad is a weasly bastid. I'm starting to think you're not a Neil fan. LOL. Thanks for the review and the pretty stars. Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/08/08 05:33 am
Its' about damn time!
I'm astounded at Dru's restraint at not punching Brad in his smug face. Coming up to her and acting like he's all hurt when we all know he was looking for a way to get Sharon back and Dru just gave it him, so instead of FRONTIN like's all outraged he should be kissing her ass.
As for Jack and Dru, hell yeah. It's about damn time they got nekid again too. I also want to know when the TRUTH about who Lily's real daddy is, is going to come out?
IF anyone deserves a punch in the face besides Brad, it's Neil ass kissing behind. Can't wait for the next chapter. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Author's Response: Hey Jeanine. I'm not a Brad fan, so the minute I wrote him, I knew it wasn't going to be pretty. Jack and Dru are inching their way to something for sure. Thanks for reading and the awesome review! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/08/08 01:01 am
I wonder how Lily will feel when she finds out that Neil lied to her all these yrs about her real father.
I hope that together Jack and Dru get even with everyone, including the Newmans and especially Neil.
Author's Response:
Hey Shina! Thanks for reading and for the review. Newmans make me itch, so look for a bit of carnage where they are concerned.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/08/08 11:03 pm