LOL at Dru tossing the drink on sleazy Brad. If he is not the perfect combo of golddigger and gigolo, I don't know what is.
Jack is a very determined man. Seems like he's going to have Dru burn all her bridges if it means he can have her. Hope he can pick up all the pieces.
Author's Response: Amen about Brad. The Gardener has always been to big for his overalls. And very nice observation about Jack. He's very determined and has a one track mind. Thanks for the review shocol. Much appreciated. Reviewer: shocol Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/08 09:47 pm
Again, you're killing me with the flashback. I love that stuff, it's so good. And poignant, considering how things ended up.
Brad's an oily snake, but damn if he didnt' make me laugh. What the hell are you trying to do to me? And I loved the scene with Dru and Lily, very emotional. She really needs to talk to her daughter, it feels like she'd avoiding the situation with her family right now.
Excellent update as always. :)
Author's Response: You like those flashback eh? Well I love writing them. Brad is dog poop but I liked that line too. Though I think I liked Jack's line a bit better. Ha. Dru is avoiding big time right now. She'd not good at handling things like this, and we'll really see that in upcoming chapters. Thanks for the review and the lovely stars. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/08/08 08:00 pm
Blackmamba,
You are killing me! Please another update make that two! Jack and Drucilla are so hot! This story is good.
Author's Response: Hey Hopieland! I'm going to try to update this one faster. So glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review! Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/08 07:02 pm
What an update! From 90' Neil was trying to hustle Dru to his side eh? Maime did irk me in that chapter.
Brad has some DAMN NERVE! Dru should've punched him in that smug face and don't get me started on Lily!
Author's Response: Neil was def very much into Dru. Brad is and always will be scum to me. Lily is predictable to say the least. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: Maverick Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/08/08 09:01 am
I had visions of Lily being speared through the heart with a swizzle stick! The timing of that girl!
I understand the little twit wants to keep her family together. Almost felt a slight thawing of my contempt towards her at the end there. Very slight.
Let's stone Brad, shall we? Kiss up king...cannot stand him. Whichever way the wind is blowing, there's Brad.
Nice update!
Oh yeah, I almost forgot...Neil's a lying, self-centered creep!
Author's Response: Yeah, scary how predictable that little chick could always be. But yes, she is devastated by her family falling apart and Dru isn't helping matters by running around town with Jack. And stoning Brad is an excellent idea. Let's do it at High Noon shall we? Thanks for the review! Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/08/08 07:15 am
DAMN ALL THESE PEOPLE BEING SO DAMN SELF RIGHTOUS AGAINST DRU IS MAKING ME GAG. LILY WHINING ASS, BRAD WIMP ASS TRYING TO TAKE UP FOR LOSER SHARON ASS, JUST EVERYONE AROUND. JACK IS SO HOTT I AM GLAD DRU TOLD HIM TO TAKE HER AWAY MAYBE NOW WE CAN GET SOME JACK N DRU LOVING INSTEAD OF HOTT FLASH BACKS. I LOVE THIS SERIS SOOO MUCH IT DRIVES ME CRAZY.. FOREVER A FAN OF YOURS!!!!
Author's Response: Hey Hershey! The hypocrisy is rampant isn't it? Y&R character are famous for it I think. Thanks so much for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 28/08/08 06:10 am
Oohh, that was good!! Man 'the gardener' is an asshole. I can't stand the punk. Poor Dru, see is hurting but she can't keep Jack out of her mind and he can't do the same either. Oh that was a tense scene with Lily. Poor baby girl. Great chapter Black!!
Author's Response: Hey Megumi! Yes, the Gardner sucks big time. Cant' stand him either. Dru is hurting and Jack is def on her rain. Lily is hurting to right now, though she has a bratty, childish way of showing it. Thanks so much for the review Megumi. You rock. Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/08 05:50 am
Love the last update Black. Sorry this was short and sweet review, but I was late reviewing and everybody just said what I was going to say anyway. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey Megumi. No problem, just glad you're still liking the story. Thanks for the review.
Date: 25/08/08 08:37 am
I love love love this story. All the drama and romance is the best. I wish I could see this lay out on tv.Looking forward to an update.
Author's Response: Hey karen! Thanks so much for reading. It would be great if this could play out, I think. Will update soon! Thanks for the review
Date: 21/08/08 11:15 pm
Go Drucilla! Getting in asses left and right. I cannot believe Sharon had the audacity to call our girl a cunt! I love how Dru dimed her out and was about to whup her ass all at the same time.
As for Jack, I so LOVE HIM! And can Neil be anymore of an colossal ASS? The jealousy was just shining through even back then. If only it were possible to SLAP his ass myself. Can't wait for the next chapter. LOL! Baby!
~Jeanine~
Author's Response: Pru! Thanks for reading. Dru was on a roll here wasn't she? I see it as her taking back her life in a way, as only Dru can. Sharon does have a way of getting that holier than thou attitude about infidelity, when her closets overflowing with skeletons. Anyway, I'm not the biggest Sharon fan. Jack is such an ass at times and I love writing that side of him when he's out to get his woman. Thanks so much for the review and the stars! Reviewer: pru Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/08/08 03:33 am
THATS RIGHT!!! YOU TELL EM DRU!!! Now thats the Dru that I have always loved. Young and the Restless made a big mistake letting her go...bunch of assinines...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and the review chocolate! Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/08/08 12:44 am
Loved how Michael handed Victor his ass! Dru was the shit in this chapter. I applaud the way she told off both Jack and Sharon. However, I hope she'll end up in Jack's arms before the night is over.
Author's Response: Oh, how I love me some Michael Baldwin. I may have been a bit heavy handed in his favor but I honestly don't care. Dru was out for blood and loved it. Thanks for reading and the review Sweet Pea.
[Report This]Date: 19/08/08 06:23 pm
This is the best line ever! Dru...gotta love her.
Dru looked at Michael who nodded. "Make the check out to Drucilla Barber," she said. "My divorce will be finalized soon."
"I have to remember to congratulate Neil when I see him," Victor said.
"He'll have to take his head out of your ass before he could hear it," she replied.
Author's Response: Hey Harlen! Glad you liked it. I was pretty sure in that scene Dru wouldn't let Victor have the last word. Thanks for the review! Reviewer: Harlen Winters Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/08 04:37 pm
Dru takes not prisoners. Loved it Blackmamba. Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks Rhonda! And thanks for the review!
Date: 19/08/08 02:00 pm
"He'll have to take his head out of your ass before he could hear it," she replied.
Victor got is behind CHECKED!!! *LOL* Too cute. As for Sharon... She got her ass handed to her! LOVED IT!
What a FAB update to start the week out! Please update more soon! I need my Losing Jack fix!
Author's Response:
Hey Maverick! Thanks fo rreading. Yes, Victor got his ass handed not once but twice I think. Sharon was due for a beat down. Thank goodness Jack was there to save her. Thanks so much for the review and the stars!
Reviewer: Maverick Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/08 08:16 am
I can't believe Jack was so blunt with Sharon, he didn't even consider how she would feel.
Well, love makes us do crazy things but Dru knows better than to go skinny dipping in the same pool as her best friend. Loved it as always.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Jack was kind of in rip the band aid mode there. But at this point I honestly think that he's sick of all the lies and games. It's why he's after Dru so hard. Sharon just got the cold hard end of the truth (Sorry, I'm not a fan so I don't have much sympathy). Thanks for the review and the stars!
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/08 06:45 am
GODDAMIT SHARON INTERRUPTING THE HOTT LITLE SPAT BETWEEN JACK N DRU........DAMN DRU PUT SHARON IN HER PLACE, SHARON CALLING DRU EVERYTHING BUT A CHILD OF GOD AND ACTING ALL WOUNDED AND DRU ALSO PUT SEXY ASS JACK IN HIS PLACE. DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH, IT WAS TOO SHORT I NEED MORE OR I MIGHT GO INSANE....... FOREVER A FAN AND STALKER OF YOUR WRITINGS FOR LIFE!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey hershey! Thanks so much for reading. Sharon is the perfect interupter I think because in the last story she was very much the interloper. And I've always found her annoying and holier than thou. I got a great deal of satisfaction out of Dru yanking her hair in that scene. Maybe too much. LOL. Thanks for the review and the stars!
[Report This]Date: 19/08/08 06:42 am
Jack, don't listen to Dru...follow her! Angry sex can be good sex sometimes! lol
I do not like Neil. Lying s.o.b.! So glad Dru told Sharon about herself. Bring Dru back Y&R!!
I also do not like Victor. Old windbag!
Sweet of Jack to show up to help Dru. What men will go thru for the women they love. *sigh*
Update soon!
Author's Response:
Ah lovemboth, you know Jack well. Neil is who he is. And I'll be honest, I never really cared for Dru and Sharon being friends. They're just so different, I couldn't see what Dru liked about her. I'm not a Mustache fan either by the way.
Not sure if Jack showing up was sweet or nosey but I guess in the end he's out to get his woman any way he can. LOL. Thanks for the review and the stars!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/08 06:05 am
Okay, first off, another fab update. This was really great, had me once again talking to the computer screen.
I really loved the flashbacks, as you probably knew I would. I can't wait to see more of them back then, what you wrote was so sweet and felt so real.
LMAO at Victor/Michael, that was awesome.
And the stuff with Sharon was great, and I'm glad that Dru's not letting Jack off the hook for the crap he's pulled. Man needs to grovel big time.
And I hate Sharon, so the hair pulling was awesome. But Dru honey, Jack did not ruin your marriage, that was all you.
As I said, this was awesome, felt like I was watching a better version of the show.
Author's Response:
Why think you Token. I'm glad you liked the flashbacks because I loved writing them. I wanted to show what happened with Neil and Dru and pretty much establish the fact that she didn't just jump into Neil's bed because he was there. He helped her when she needed it and that's a recurring theme in their relationship. That's why she loved him and that loss of trust and support is why their marriage fell apart. Well that and because Dru's in love with another man and won't admit it.
Victor/Michael was too damn fun to write. I could do that all day. Sharon is---Sharon and Dru is def not letting Jack slide back into her life after he inserted himself into it. However, you are right that Dru is the one responsible for her actions and her marriage falling apart. If she would have stayed away from Jack and focused on her marriage, none of it wouldn't happen. But that was impossible since she's in love with a man other than her husband and should have called it quits long ago anyway. *sigh* Oh I love complicated crap like this. Makes me all warm and fuzzy.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/08 04:53 am
Excellent story -- I love how you go back and forth between past and present. So much hisotry. Plus, it was one of the most erotic reads. This is only my 2nd Jack/Dru story ever. I will be back for more. You have hooked me.
Author's Response: Thanks Robin! So glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review as well!
[Report This]Date: 16/08/08 06:20 am
Okay, first of all this..
I couldn't understand why he'd go after you like this---did you kick Geppetto or something---"
Had me laughing my ass off. Thank you for putting Michael in this, I need him so...
Loved how Dru took control over her life, though going into buisness with Jack may not be the smartest thing she's ever done. She really needs to stop kidding herself. She wants some Jack lovin' that much is clear.
And old Jackie's still got it in him. The kiss at the end...very hot.
Loved the chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Ah, Michael Baldwin. I don't think Y&R is complete without him. I think it's high time Dru got a grip and started kicking some ass. Jack's offer is questionable but yes, I think you're right in that she can't help but be near him. Plus, she's got some leverage over him too. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 07:08 pm
Sweet! Jack is going to make their partnership more than just business. Can Dru fight it? Does she want to? Me thinks not but she'll put up some resistance, I'm sure!
Author's Response: Hey lovemboth! Yes, Jack has made his intentions known. As for Dru, we'll jsut have to see. Thanks for the reveiw and the stars !
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 01:46 pm
Love me some Michael Baldwin! LOL! Glad to see him in this chapter. I'm enjoying this story! :-)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm a Baldwin devotee. Thanks for reading pinkrose and thanks for the review ! Reviewer: pinkrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/08 08:42 am
Michael's a trip. I want him to represent Dru in the divorce since Neil's a dick to her. That and I want him to stick it to Newman too if he thinks she has a case for wrongful termination.
Jack's such a badboy. *LOL* LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Michael is one of my favorites so I really enjoyed writing him in this chapter. Dru has a strong ally in Michael so we'll be getting more of him soon. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: Maverick Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/08/08 05:11 am
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!
Dru is not playing with getting controlling interest in this company with Jack. But, leave it to Jack to kiss her breathless.
Now I'm just waiting for them to find out about Lily, OH THE DRAMA!!!!
Author's Response:
You're welcome Sweet Pea! Dru is done playing around but Jack is Jack. He is on a mission. And that darn Lily secret still looms....
Thanks for the review and stars!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/08 04:52 am