Thanks for a great update so now she is a published author and her brother has graduated high school, which is great. Why did she give him 3 tickets to Japan? Her story was great. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 10:10 pm
Can't believe that her parents are so heartless. Thank goodness that her dr is so understanding and is willing to help her. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 10:07 pm
No I haven't read the prequel so I will go look for it but I did remember you talking about this guy in the beginning. I am off to read the prequel.
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 07:04 pm
Loved the update
Reviewer: p Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 07:01 pm
So, you're saying that NEITHER paren went to their son's high school graduation?? Freaking amazing!!
At least the siblings have each other. Lane is a great big sis.
Great update. On to the next chapter...
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 07:15 am
NO WONDER LANE IS STILL SEEING A SHRINK. HER MOTHER'S VERBAL ABUSE MAKES ME CRINGE. WHAT A RECHED WOMAN. I LIKE HER DOCTOR.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 07:03 am
Nice start.
I like the way you've written the parallel's in their lives. Stifling mothers. Lonliness.
On to the next chapter...
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 06:55 am
Oh I know who he is, with his sexy self. LOL!!!!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 06:50 am
Great update. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/09 06:35 am
this is getting goooood i luv lane caint wait for another update
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/06/09 04:45 pm
I see the sh*t is about to hit the fan.
TY for the update.
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/09 07:21 am
Lane is a wonder character. I like how she loves herself, even though her mom and the world may notsee her as not perfect.
I van't wait to see her interaction eith Gabriel.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/09 05:21 am
I like your story. So I like the fact that you write scifi story in your story. I like that see have this great relationship with her brother. It seems that the mother is disfunctional with raising and loving her children. I hope the next chapter will have Gabriel in it.
Reviewer: nicnac100 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/06/09 02:25 am
Parents must not realize how much they affect their children, and the fact that it goes with them for the rest of their lives. First Lane and now her baby brother. I wish I could give her mom a piece of my mind, but then again this is a story.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/09 02:15 am
I like the intro to the characters, and the plot seems to be moving along nicely. Love Lane too. JV
Reviewer: johnandvan Signed [Report This]Date: 11/06/09 06:14 pm
I'm definitely digging this! I'm waiting for Lane and Gabriel to finally meet. Can't wait!
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]Date: 11/06/09 06:27 am
great update and I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/06/09 05:07 am
Nice story, UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: C Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/06/09 07:43 am
Well, dammit, I love Lane too......this is interesting.
Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]Date: 09/06/09 06:12 am
I can I slap her mother. What happened to supporting your children's dreams? And then to slap the poor girl for no reason. When Lane is this famous author, with her hunk of a man, her mother is going to try to take credit for her success. I hope Lane will one day be able to put her in her place.
Dr. Farrokk is an amazing person, and you can tell that she's taken Lane under her wings. She probably thinks of her as a daughter now.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 09/06/09 04:26 am
I like this story. please keep updating it.
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/06/09 10:50 pm
Glad for theupdate. I like this story. What is up with the mom? Talk about abuse sheesh!!!! Look forward to reading more of this story.
Reviewer: Paw00 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/06/09 04:38 pm
Looking forward to readong more. Hope you update soon:)
Reviewer: Rashell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/09 01:38 am
Great introduction. I'm intrigued. I wonder how they will meet, how Lane will overcome the pressure from her mom and how he will deal with his commitment issues.
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed [Report This]Date: 09/05/09 12:50 am