I'm so disappointed she let her self go like that. Did Angie's father rape her?? Why did she kill him??? Did she always do drugs or was it because of what happened with Angie's dad??? Please let her get herself together. Glad Todd is trying to help her. I hope she accepts it. Its time for her to get to know her daughter. Great update.
Author's Response: Hi Baha, No she wasn't a junkie from the start but in the two chaps, I will shed a lot of light into her story and she will get herself together soon, Thanks for reading hon.
[Report This]Date: 07/01/10 09:57 pm
Wow, that Laila is a piece of work. Love it.
Author's Response: Hi baha, if you think laila is nuts, wait till you meet their mother, appreciate the reviews dear.
[Report This]Date: 07/01/10 08:41 pm
That was a great start. I loved it. Now I'm off to read the rest of this story.
Author's Response: HI baha, it's great to see you here, thanks for taking an interest in my lil story.
[Report This]Date: 07/01/10 08:15 pm
wow lol i just love todd he kipnap her and then threated to duck tape her mouth lol that todd for you. i'm glad he doing that for her she needs tuff love and todd will give her pleanty of that. i hope school is going well for you and looking for the next updated. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
HI WWE, I'm really happy that you liked it. I would have paid to see that scene, thanks for asking about school, it's not kicking my butt, can't wait for it to be completed and done with.
Loads of love, thanks for reading.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/10 07:34 pm
OH NO YOU DIDN'T DYE! LMAO!! You're lucky we are cool because I know if I were to post this length of story you would have been all up in my grill...LOL!!!
It takes a man like Todd to reel in this type of Evangeline. My goodness by your description she really needs an intervention. When it comes to this denial word I believe Evangeline is not the only one...
Wonderful update but of course too short so you better keep your promise!
Author's Response:
Yes my darling Choc, I know we're cool and you wont use this against me. mmm denial, denial.....who else is in denial choc? Gat any ideas. Maybe some pushing and pulling between these two?
Glad you liked it, I'll keep my promise, scout's honor. Just between me and you, lets hope he doesn't settle for the path of least resistance. By the way, I dont eat granola bars any more so honey bunches of oats with peaches will do babe.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/10 06:32 pm
Let me explain myself...my dye! I was indeed reading this story when work got in the way and the next day I was transferred back up the Western Highway. Therefore, I had to wait on a computer for one day and the internet connection on the other day.. So there!
Oh Lawdy I am imagining a crack out Evangeline but at least she was giving to her daughter with all the words in between...LOL!!! This Evangeline is a trip!
Boy oh Boy Toddikins isn't giving up on his baby's momma. It makes you understand Angie's and his relationship more. Time for him to give her some damn tough love because she won't come willing...not this Evangeline...LOL!
Author's Response:
My Choc, yep. Todd ain't giving up easily and this time Vang will be the one kinda stuck between the devil and the blue sea. You know how crafty junkies can be, well Todd's getting a little wiser too.
Tell me I'm allowed make him a little mental, then he can claim temporary insanity. Thanks for reading Choc.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/11/09 11:04 pm
a little both he should be kind but also give it to her raw and uncut. she left her baby girl but she has a reason for doing that. i love the ice cream sence it cute. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hey W, isn't it funny how she swore up and down about the kid acting like a brat just to realize it's her baby? I was just making an attempt to show Eva's softer side for kids, one would think she'd hold on to her food coupon. It's time for a new Todd to be born and he shall come down with the hammer. thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 23/11/09 03:32 am
Great update. I thought it was funny how Todd and Angela found Evangeline. Then she has to nerve to pretend that she don't know Todd. Boo! Hmm, I believe I vote for Todd to give Evangeline tough love. Don't sugarcoat anything, yet be encourging to her that she can change and do better. If she isn't willing to change then Todd should dropped her like a bad habit. I also want to see some inner sorrow and strength within Evangeline that she can change and no more feeling sorry for herself and use her past as in excuse. Thanks for updating dear and I want the other story updated too Dyehanna!!!
Author's Response:
You are so right M, the nerve of that girl has no bounds, I swear, I wanted to update the others but for some reason, this one came more easily than the others, I'm just trying not to undate a bull load of crap, I'm sure you understand dear. As soon as something good comes to mind, I will definitely update.
Thanks for the review babe.
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 22/11/09 07:26 pm
Glad you're back..
Todd need to give Evangline a swift kick in the ass then throw her into rehab ASAP!!!!
Looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
Author's Response: Hi chocolate girl, a kick in the butt she wll definitely get, I promise. Thanks for the review. Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/11/09 07:36 am
YES DYE YOU DID LEAD ME ON! GOOD JOB!!! so you see I'm not that mad atcha when I should be...LOL! You got me good believing in Evangeline changing her life and moving on up in the world only to find...wah..wah... (that's me sniffling)
Yeah girlfriend needs an intervention but even if you don't let them get back togther I'm not impressed with this Kelly person. You made her downright icky which means maybe some 'reuniting and it feels so good' after all the months of therapy...lol!!
Author's Response:
Ohhh Choc, I got you sniffing? .....here's a tissue box, would you like me to hold it while you blow your nose? lol How can I make it up to ya?....... Oh I know...I'll update asap. Will that do?
So you dont like Kelly that much? I guarantee you this...if her head gets too big for her scarf, we'll just have to organize a beatdown for her. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/10/09 08:44 pm
you teas lol i'm thinking they meet and they didnt' lol but you writtien that very well. van yeah she need help bad very bad and so hated kelly lol the dollar store in a price car lol onlly todd would do that for his daughter lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hey wwefanforlife, okay, I accept my guilt, I was quite a tease. Looks like no one is on team Kelly but dont be too hard on her, she's just trying to claim back what she lost. Shhhhh dont tell anyone, I dont like her either. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 11:53 pm
Oh my it was all a dream. But in some ways they are still connected since they had the same dream. I am so glad to see that Agnie is just like any other little girl. She was actually standing up to Todd. I can't imagine what was really going through his mind at that point. Just an awesome updat.
Author's Response: Hi Letitia, yeah it was all a dream, I just had to string you along, and of course, Angie is outspoken, Evangeline is her mom, I think Todd was scared but he did the right thing by taking to her about Vange. Thanks for the review.
Date: 25/10/09 09:45 pm
Okay, you wrong Dye, but that's how you like things. Don't you? So they both were dreaming the same dream. Interesting. Poor Evangeline, I would though she would have been stronger, but she really needs help. Why do I smell an intervention scene coming up soon? Wow, little Angie is a trip, but she as letting Todd now what is up. I feel sorry for Todd to because he trying to be a good father, but his gulity and longing to at least see Evangeline is eating him up like it making Angie sad. Hopefully when all of them met each other, things will start to make sense and healing can begin to take root. Thanks for the update Dye. :)
Author's Response: Hello Megumi, thanks for reading, the intervention is up in the next chap, I can only hope it meets your expectations. Todd is a very nice guy I'm going to give him a little backbone. To rescue Eva we need to teach in 101 in gangstership [I'm not even sure if that's a real word] Thanks for reading babe.
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 04:35 pm
He was dreaming. I still loved it and this chapter too. Angela said a mouth full, but I'm gald she got all of it off of her chest. I can't wait until they meet.
Author's Response: Hi bayoumomma, it's nice to see Angie finally say out loud what's been eating her up. Thanks for reading, appreciate it. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 04:07 am
They are too much. I loved it!!
Author's Response: Thanks Bayo, glad you liked it. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 03:47 am
Dye, you are just plain evil....I was eating at the palm of you hands and then you took me two steps back, Evan needs to be whipped back into shape.
Dreaming was great and waking up sucks
I can't believe Todd said that to angie, you really have to hold up to your side of the bargin in the next chap or I dont know what I'll do. This chapter made me mad but I guess that's the point.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: dear sugar, [with my right hand up] i solemly swear to hold on to my side of the bargain. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 02:05 am
It's time to have a reunion. She is a sweet and funny little girl. How about she be a woman that is in between. She has gotten better but still has a ways to go, yet surviving! Great update!!
Author's Response: Bayoumomma, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 01:50 am
How can she not accept what he is offering her, no strings attatched. She feels she did a bad thing now do something to counter it and make things right with the life she bought into this world. If she didn't want this baby at all then why not have just had an abortion, but she didn't so do right by your baby.
Author's Response: Hi B, eventhough she didn't want Angie, abortion wasn't really an option for everyone, you'll get to know why in the up coming chaps. I think she's refusing Todd's offer because she's been kicked down by people who were close to her, besides, she didn't want to explain her past to him, when you live with someone for a while, there are bound to be questions. Not to excuse what she's doing but right now, she doesn't deserve a baby. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 01:15 am
I enjoyed it. I was pleased he took responsibility for baby Anglea, so that she wouldn't get caught up in the system!!
Author's Response: Hi Bayoumomma, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it babe. Thanks for the stars.
[Report This]Date: 25/10/09 01:05 am
I love the craziness between the two of them. Th egg throwing was funny!!
Author's Response: Hello B, Crazy, nuts but beautiful, That's Tangie love. If anyone can find me this nice goody Todd, I'll owe em for life. Appreiciate the review.
[Report This]Date: 24/10/09 11:38 pm
She has had a hard life. Looks like things are about to turn around for her!
Author's Response: It's nice to see you here B, Things can only turn around for someone who wants change, whatever she's looking for, It'll take a while for her to find it. Thanks for reading my story, apprieciate it babe.
[Report This]Date: 24/10/09 11:24 pm
I loved this story. OM! LMAO! I loved the concept and the way Vange is still a you know what...LOL!!! Goodness I felt the chemistry between these two. I still can't get over Vange and her bitchy ways...LMAO!!!! Yeah I believe they can coexist. Look at the how gentle she was with Todd and the way her mannerisms changed. Shit Dye I was ready to go down that road with you until the damn phone rang...LOL!!! Bring on the ex-wife it will definitely be very interesting especially with this Vange.....Great, great afternoon read!
Author's Response:
Hey choc, sorry it took so long to reply, mama has been kinda busy and I know you wont hold it against me right????
Well give me all the love you got now cos I'm not so sure how much you'll love me in the up coming chaps. You know how to make a girl crack a smile, thanks babe for reading, all your reviews have been amazing.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]Date: 16/10/09 08:58 pm
Interesting chain of events dear. You can tell they got a thing for eac other, but got issues, like boyfriends and exs. I'm cool with the ex Dye as long as she doesn't get too much spotlight. LOL Evangeline fooling herself when she says she isn't attractive to Todd. If she wasn't why is she so desparated for his forgiveness? When Evangeline meets the little Angela, I want Todd's sweet angel to ask Evangeline those hard questions. She already gave Todd a dressing down about sex and all, let her dress Evangeline down by asking why Evangeline left her and Todd along all those years ago? Then we can have the love connection between Todd and Evangeline.
Author's Response:
Not so fast M, just chill and give them a little more time and things will fall into place. Forget the exs, those two have personal demons to conguer. Angie's time will come soon and as for the E&T dressing down, you will find out the reason behind it just promise not to get mad.
Love connection??? For you M, I guess I could try.
Thanks for the review, f=gave me giggles.
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 21/09/09 10:13 pm
I am loving the story, although it took some getting use to, I Vang was a paragon of virtue ion the soap. You made her flawed, crazy and annoyingly flaky. Todd being likable was interesting. Me likey!!! Please continue.
Author's Response:
Hello PM, I'm glad that the story is growing on you and appreciate you reading, kind, gentle, mature and calm and not very gangster Todd is new to me too but then he was gracious with Vange in OLTL. He's a little tamed here, I hope I can bring some fire to his character as we move along.
Thanks for the review babe.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/09/09 01:14 am
ok you are so mean having todd with kelly lol but i think i see where you going with this and know this going to be a fun ride lol. i hope van be in her daughter life she needs to know her mother. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hey W, you think you know but you have no idea, you really think I'm mean? I'll try not to complicate things. After the next chap, I think things will get a lot more better in terms of Vange and Angie. Kelly is going to be just a figure head, she cant be more of an issue even if she wants to be, Evangeline can easily put her lights out.
Thanks for the review, appreciate it.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 20/09/09 12:11 am