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Title: His arms

wow, i wonder what she has been doing for the last eight years?

Author's Response: Hi Brandy, sorry it took a while to reply, thanks for reading and the review, I promise not to drag too long, you'll find out what she's really been up to very soon. 

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 01:15 am

Title: His arms

Yeah Dye you totally killed it with this update...FINALLY!...lol!!!

I adored they conversation between Todd and Angela...maybe she is his given her questions and the way she wants an answer. Poor Todd trying to talk about the birds and the bees...lol!!

Evangeline in the background all this while. Don't make her rich...please. Successful at changing her life around but on the verge of a divorce bc its always been Toddikins. You know the woman will still some sort of mean streak in her..;)

Absolutely loved reading it!



Author's Response:

My Choc, I was really torn between making Angie older and keeping her as an infant so it took a while before I decided to age her a little.

You say poor Todd,

I say Poor Angie for believing Todd when he told her he got her from Saks Fifth Ave.. Yes Vange was shadowing every now and then in the background because that's where cowards hide.

 As for making her rich or poor, I'm kinda torn, It's not fun to be me right now. lol. but I figured out a way to make everyone get what they want. Just put it at the back of your mind that a divorced Evangeline could be a very bitter woman, Todd might not even stand a chance. 

Thanks for reading, as always, you are my partner in Tangie crimes.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 08:49 pm

Title: His arms

umm how about she sucessful but engaged to be married not married yet i won't todd to show her what she missing lol. girl you had me lmaof lol what the little girl said babies coming from walmart fifthe avenue family dollar lol yeah she todd and van daugther. I love the story and cant' wait to todd see his lady luv. hurry with a updated and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Hey W, Blame it on Todd, the walmart baby thingy, it's all Todd yet, it's understandable that he want her to remain innocent. Thanks for reading babe, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 03:52 am

Title: His arms

I would like them to meet as Eva being a single, working class, woman with a hellavu apology. Making her into a diva with a husband or poor with a chip on her shoulder would prove that she either A) got worse and became a bigger bitch than before or B) that she hasn't changed at all. Having her be extravagant or underprivelged draws the story out and makes it unpredictable. It would be uber awesome if she just turned into a better woman.

Author's Response: You are darn right, she needs to kiss his feet and apologize. As for being a better woman......you'll still see a bitchy side to this chick in the coming chapters, Vange is still far from the kind of better woman you might want to see. Hope you like the next chap, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 01:06 am

Title: His arms

Dyehanna, this was a great update. Angela seems like a beautiful girl too. As to how Todd should meet Evangeline how about Evangeline be successful and divorce. I still want my Tangie to reunited together as one in the end. Like I said before, my Toddy better be happy in the end or else!

Author's Response:

With all the women Todd is screwing around with, I dont think it will be hard for him to be all over her but do you really think he's willing to commit, with the experience he had with his ex wife.....lets just hope he's willing to give up the fast life. As for Angie, Isn't she just adorable? I guess one could say she's the one woman that really matters in Todds life, for now, Evangeline is just the bagage that comes with her.

              Thanks for reading Megumi.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 12:18 am

Title: His arms

great update. missed this story. so she'll be difficult no matter what. successful, rich, married? rich,successsful since she was gone so long, but i want her with todd. so single pissed and difficult i guess.. tough choice

Author's Response:

Hmmm Kelley li, pissed and difficult, oh yeah, I can live with that but in two chapters from now, will you be able to handle it????? You might just get what you wish for. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kelley li Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/09/09 11:27 pm

Title: The moment I saw you.

When they reunite Van should have gotten herself together. She should be successful but not rich, living her her life drug free and working hard to be the person she should have been when her daughter was born. She should be thankful that she was able to leave her daughter in the hands of a man she barely knew. Who chose to raise her daughter as his own. Loving her as if he help to create her.  But she should be remorseful because she chose to not to stay get clean and help Todd raise her daughter Instead of choosing to  leave her with a man she barely knew all for her own selfish reasons.

I hope to read the next chapter soon.

 



Author's Response: Yes, let's hope she understands the meaning of gratitude because no one could have raised that kid better than Todd did. There are a lot of single moms today because some the men who put the seeds in them are too lazy or irresponsible to step up to the plate. And then there are a few Todds left in the world, she's so lucky she met him.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/09/09 06:53 pm

Title: For the love of Angela

yes and no , she knows what type of person she is.

Author's Response:

Hello Love,

she had the choice of having a roof over her head and having a good life working and living with Todd but she refused to do so therefore, it could be said that she's selfish because she left her child to a man who is almost a stranger to her but on the other side, I think everytime she looks at her baby, she remembers how great her life could have been if she had never met the child's father.

It could also be that she doesn't trust herself to do the right thing. {sighs with my head down} I dont know dear, I'm trying to practise some Zen to keep me centered and focused on writing the next chapter. lol. Thanks for the review babe.

Reviewer: loveisreading Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 05:33 am

Title: Crazy

I think so the child had nothing to do with her mother's problems.

Author's Response:

Hello loveisreading, sorry it took so long to reply. You may be just right because Evangeline's issues started way before the child came along, her life didn't start right and I'll do my best to explain in the up coming chapters.

Thanks a lot for leaving a review, I really appreciate it babe.

Reviewer: loveisreading Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 05:26 am

Title: For the love of Angela

You see what you caused dye. I didnt even know you updated until I went looking so you need to update quicker...LOL!!!

So you ask a question at the end I believe under that dope haze of Evangeline she is looking out for her daughter because if she was being truly selfish she would kept the kid and took away Todd's money as well.

Todd has a lot of work ahead if he wants Evangeline to get clean and be a mother to that baby. This pretty woman you are writing some deep stuff here so I'm awaiting the next update please..:)



Author's Response:

My Choc, you are making me turn red by saying i'm deep, makes me feel good though and by the way, it's all for you babe, you keep me grounded, lord knows I'm always playing catch up while you are setting my heart and soul on fire with your Tangie fic. 

I should make Todd work hard to get her clean Hummm.....any ideas????

 You want your coco puffs but you refused to give me my granola bars, how fair is that?

As I was saying please tell Blair that Todd doesnt do Trannies okay, he like 100% real women. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 12:54 am

Title: For the love of Angela

Evangeline is being both really. I believe she loves baby Angela more than life itself, but she thinks she is too broken to give Angela the love she needs. Evangeline is also running away from hurt and pain. Evangeline believe she can just forget all her problems, but she really needs some help more than anything. Angela didn't ask to be born nor it is not her fault of her parents faults. Hopefully Evangeline will come to her senses before Angela doesn't want to have anything to her. You got to love Todd in this story. He did what most men wouldn't do at all He's my hero and you better reward Todd for his wonderful heart with love and happiness or it's on Dyehanna!! LOL

Author's Response: Megumi, You have hit the nail right on the head of matter dear and dont you worry, Todd will be well rewarded. Thanks for taking the time to write a review, appreciate it babe.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 08:46 pm

Title: For the love of Angela

wow, this evangeline is hard core.i like it! thank goodness todd will be there fo the baby. good update

Author's Response: KellyLi, First out girl was a gangster and now a drugie, cant get better than that for saint Evangeline and Todd will be there by the side lines to pick up the pieces, Isn't he just the perfect gentle man? we dont get to see this side of him in OLTL anymore , what a waste. All they do is use him to prop other characters nowadays, makes me pissed as hell. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 04:57 pm

Title: For the love of Angela

This chapter is really good dye, the all gracious OLTL Evangeline is not a saint in this story, she even gets high. I really like this, update soon.

Author's Response: Hi Sugar, Thanks for the review, well appreciated. Will update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 10:59 pm

Title: For the love of Angela

I am just at a loss for words.  I don't know if I should huge Evangaline or just throw her out on her ear.  I am just glad that Angela has Todd in her corner.  Can't wait to see what you have next.

Author's Response: Letita, You can start by giving her a big hug then slap some sense into her, that might go a long way to help and yeah thank God for Todd, if not for him Angela might end up in some foster care with folks who only care about when that monthly check would come in.  Thanks for the review babe.

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Date: 02/08/09 09:21 pm

Title: For the love of Angela

Was she raped? That's the impression I'm getting. She definitely needs counseling. I hope she quickly realizes she's acting worst than her mom by abandoning Angela. Angela didn't ask to be born, but she's here now.

Author's Response:

Sweet Pea, I'm not sure she's ready to get better, she's still in pain and some wounds just wont heal even with time, we all know about those kind of wounds.

There are some battles that she cant win alone and the sooner she realizes that, the better for everyone. It might take more than a few trips to the shrink's couch. She doesnt feel like facing her problems so she wants the easy way out, in life, there is no such thing as an easy way out all she's doing is running in circles.

Maybe leaving Angela isn't a bad idea for now because she needs to re-invent herself before she can be a good mom.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/08/09 07:14 pm

Title: For the love of Angela

Evangeline is both i understand not wanted to be a mom i never had the desire myself but there a point in your life you being curel. You killed her father i knwo that hard to live with but you baby gilr should have to suffer for that . then there the other side sometimes it best to give your baby up if you feel in your hearts of hearts that you be a bad mother or father but something tells me van wanted her baby very very bad. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Hi wwefanforlife, It's not really the guilt that's killing Vange, it's more of self hatred and the fact that she's always been made to feel not good enough by her mom.

But it's better for the baby to be with someone who can care for her rather than growing with a mother filled with scorn. Thanks for the review, well appreciated.

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Date: 02/08/09 02:24 pm

Title: Crazy

This chapter was good, I noticed how Evangeline kept refering to her daughter as an "IT".

Yes I think Todd did an honorable think by keeping lil Angela and I hope that Vange gets better in time.

 



Author's Response: Thanks Sugar, she couldn't bear to look at the child so I'm not suprise that she calls her an IT.

Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 02:01 pm

Title: Crazy

I hope todd did the right thing to keep the little girl from living some where us but it van doesn't get better it cant' end bad. love the story and thanks for the updated

Author's Response: Hello wwefanforlife, Thanks for the review, you know how to uplift a broken spirit on a bad day, just when I felt like kicking m supervisor's ass, your review made me smile. I'm happy you love my story. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 03:53 am

Title: The moment I saw you.

Yes, Todd did the right thing by keeping the baby out of the system...I hope Vange comes around and learn to love Little Angela...

Will we learn who the father is? 

 



Author's Response: Hi chocolate girl, I believe Vange will be okay, she might just take a little detour on the way and yes, we will find out who her baby daddy is. Thanks for the review babe.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 02:25 am

Title: Crazy

yes, todd you did the right thing.  even if evangeline never wants the baby, you and that baby need each other. good update. please update soon.

Author's Response: Hi KellyLi, As crazy and stupid as Todd can get, he would make a great dad, the baby could act as the missing link between these two. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 01:30 am

Title: Who is Evangeline Williamson?

wow, they are both nuts and todd is in it deep. geat chapter

Author's Response: KellyLi, yes they are both nuts but this time, Evangeline is even the crazier one. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 01:25 am

Title: The moment I saw you.

I like this non-oltl version tangie! great work and i love the hot sauce and spit in the drinks.

Author's Response:

Hi KellyLi, I had always thought that OLTL made Eva self righteous and put her in the goodie corner, it's time to taint her a little and make her a nutzzy for a change. Thanks for reading, appreciate it.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 01:12 am

Title: Crazy

That's an interesting question. In a crazy way, I believe Todd did do the right thing. It seems that he has bonded with Angela though Evangeline havent' yet. We dealing with a broken Evangeline here and I'm looking forward to see if she can break from her heartache or continue to go sink further in self loathing. Now hurry up with an update to this one and those other two stories Dyehanna.

Author's Response: Hi Megumi, thanks for reading and leaving a review, well appreciated. yes you are right, Vange is way too messed up right now coming around might not be easy but it's going to happen at some point.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 01:10 am

Title: Who is Evangeline Williamson?

I knew Evangeline did something big in her past and that was big. I actually feeling sorry for Todd because he does not know what in the world he is dealing with in it comes to Evangeline. Interesting chance from the show Dyehanna. Now updated your other two stories and this one soon. :)

Author's Response: Hi Megumi, thanks for reading and leaving a review, welll appreciated babe. I'll try and keep up with the other two stories asap. As always, your reviews are wonderful.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/06/09 05:27 pm

Title: The moment I saw you.

This is a pretty cool story, I really enjoyed this first chapter, very imaginative, keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thanks sugar.

Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/06/09 02:44 pm

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