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Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for a great read and I winder why she is still friends with Carol too.  And for Carol to state that Sean is mad at her because she slept with his friend WTF?  Is she crazy or just a ho 24/7?  I hope that Mackenzie uses the blindfold wisely LOL.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 05:02 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for a great update....these two are like teenagers.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 04:56 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Great update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 06:55 am
Title: Chapter 20

wow that one crazy party lol. i wonder what did she get out the bag? thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 05:57 am
Title: Chapter 20

Yhey're going to have some fun tonight, with the blindfold. Great update.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/09 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 19

Loved the update. Glad Mackenzie decided to give Scott a chance.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/10/09 06:24 am
Title: Chapter 19

well it a good thing it snow her right he not like other guys and she give him a change to prove that. i like they got to know each other bit better thanks for the updated.

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Date: 06/10/09 08:16 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Great update... glad that Mackenzie is going for it with Scott, they make a cute couple.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/09 08:14 pm
Title: Chapter 19

They are now officially a couple. Great update!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/10/09 07:27 pm
Title: Chapter 19

Ah!!! That was so sweet. I like that Scott knows what he wants and what he wants is Mackenzie.  She finally opened up to him and wants to be with him in a relationship....good no more snicking around and it doesn't matter what the office says.

Great update. Thanks

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/10/09 07:09 pm
Title: Chapter 19

That was so cute. He was shy about asking her to be his girlfriend. She was afraid of being hurt. They finally agree to date each other. Yes! Good chapeter. Love it.

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Date: 06/10/09 06:53 pm
Title: Chapter 18

She wants some loving, he could have made it home just fine. I like them as a couple. Loved the update.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 18

lol yeah she wanted something from him she wanted to tap his behind lol. they make such a cute couple different but a good different. like he show her chicgo and gettting to know her. love the story thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 03:18 am
Title: Chapter 18

Smart girl!  She knows she's interested in Scott.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 12:17 am
Title: Chapter 18

They seem to be hitting it off ok.  Glad that she invited him up to her apartment. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 09:14 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Now are they acting a little strained . They have already done the do...what is up with that.

will they take their relationship to another level?

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 08:31 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Ooooh how sweet!!! Their first official date..... Great update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 08:10 pm
Title: Chapter 18

They had sex and now she's moving too fast??

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Date: 04/10/09 07:21 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Thank for the update, it was good.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 05:01 pm
Title: Chapter 17

I don't think I would have told Carol a thing, my sheisty radar is up around her.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 04:56 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Yeah right Mack you aint slick girl.  He lives in Chicago practically all his life he knows how to drive on the roads during the snow.  LOL.

And Scott aint no better cause he could have told her that plus the sooner he leaves the faster he will get home...What is he going to do later when it snow more.  LOL

Yall know you want to go upstairs to Mack's apartment and do some very heavy petting...going to fast pulezze what was that in New York if not start past "GO" don't collect 200 dollars.  

Great update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 09:02 am
Title: Chapter 17

I don't like the fact that Mackenzie told Carol about her budding relationship with Scott.  The next thing that she knows that ho is going to try and get her some of Scott because she said that he had a big dick.  As for Mackenzie doesn't she know that you don't tell your friends about how good your man  is because then they will want him too.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 17

Carol didn't take it too bad. LOL!  Hope they become a couple.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 06:16 am
Title: Chapter 16

Still can't wait for Carol's reaction.

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Date: 03/10/09 06:10 am
Title: Chapter 17

Alrighty then, go Scott!!! Great update.

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Date: 02/10/09 03:04 am
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