They both need to stop thinking about Carol's reaction and concentrate on their relationship. Good chapter.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/09/09 09:09 pm
they're not going to be able to keep it a secret for long, someone is going to see them. If she likes him then that's all that should matter.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 19/09/09 07:04 pm
Ahhh! That was sweet it was calm makes me think there is a storm coming.
Great update more please.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/09/09 06:30 pm
Smart for not telling Carol
so how long will this be a secret?
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/09/09 01:14 am
Nice update, thanks!
Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/09/09 12:50 am
Loved the update. It seems as if Scott is ready to burst out of his shell. Go Scott!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/09/09 12:15 am
love the little privated joke he told mack i was lmaof. it good she didn't tell her because the girl it like cnn she have the news every where lol. i hope her and scott still countin see each other. like the story and thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 08:46 pm
Mackenzie shouldn't tell Carol unless Scott tells her she can. Carol will blab it around the office. Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 07:46 pm
i don't like Carol all that much either. I love these two together though! The sex is hot!
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 03:46 pm
I don't particularly care for Carol. I'm glad she didn't share with her anything about their night, she does gossip to much and is so negative. Great update!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 02:55 pm
I think it was/is a good idea not to tell Carol she slept with Scott because she seems like a good person and what not but she talks too freaking much.
Plus she slept with Martin and just met the dude I hope she was well protected cause I aint calling sista girl a ho/slut but she sure does get around.
Great update more please thanks
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 01:00 pm
I don't like Carol. I am sure that she noticed more than Mackenzie and Scott wanted her to. Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 08:24 am
I just saw this story and decided to give it a try, and I'm glad that I did, b/c its pretty good. I like Scott and Mackenzie together.. and this last chapter was HOT HOT HOT..
I wonder whats going to happen when they get back to Chicago.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 09:47 pm
no wonder why scott act they way he does i kind of understand him now. wow he is a freak she is so lucky lol . i'm glad they shared stories about each other and hope she doens't tell carlo about them before she knows it the whole office will know lol. thanks for the updated realy like the story.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 04:07 pm
well with liquard and dancing brings out the freak in eveyr one lol. dam scott was working it you go boy but hope neithr reget in the moring. love the story girl and thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 04:03 pm
ooo go scott is your birthday go scott is your birthday . i'm glad that mack got him out on the dance floor to get his boggy down instead of being bored at a club. scott and mack make a cute couple thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:58 pm
wow well it looks like carol going to lose thos fav shoes of hers lol. scott having dirty thougths about her lol don't worry scott she having dirty thoughts about you too. i can't wait to see what happen in the club. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:53 pm
awww he let her lean over him to see the new york sky that very sweet i think scott wanted some carmel on top him tonight lol. wow that boss is realy a dick a very very small dick lol. i feel mack i been having a panicked attack myself but glad her grand ma was there to calm her. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:48 pm
i hated boss like that. smug think they know everything but he has a little dick so everything work out lol. so mack and scott going to be roomies this is going to be good lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:43 pm
lol carlo remind me when my sister drink they do some silly crazy things lol. So Maz wanted some vanilla lol like they say the quiet ones always the freaks in the bed room lol thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:40 pm
Well i think she told scott how she felt lol . but something tells me she going to rub off on him but he might wipe himself down when it done lol. carlo better watch out she about to give that girl a run for her money lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:36 pm
wow that is a werid guy lol but let face it we all werid in are on way. Carlo is a trip lol i think everyone at work have a carlo. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:31 pm
well it nice that she made a new friend the first day at work. Carol was right people are ass holes lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:27 pm
like the pics of the cast and like that dr reid from crimal minds is in the story love that show.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 03:24 pm
Thanks for a great update, I am glad that they are talking to each other. Poor Scott being mugged.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 12/09/09 02:52 pm