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Title: Chapter 9

Continue!!!!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/09 12:59 am
Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update. Like that Mackenzie and Scott are bonding a little.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 05:10 am
Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 02:52 am
Title: Chapter 8

Wha Mackenzie did right there wasn't wasn't necessary. She needs to leave Scott alone when dealing with Carol I think.

Good update.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 8

If she said that in front of him he may change his mind about going. Great update!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 08:52 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I have a feeling Scott is going to rock Mackenzie's world soon.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 08:01 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update.  I thought that they were in a suite with separate bedrooms.  If they are then how she is sitting on her bed and talking to Scott who is at a desk in their room? Also, don't they have separate bathrooms too.  As for the wager that Mackenzie made with Carol that wasn't very nice of her.  I am not surprised that Scott and Mackenzie are attracted to each other.  But what will he say when he over hears the conversation that Mackenzie is having with Carol? I hope that he doesn't go out with them.  I like Scott and I don't like the way that they treat him.  I don't think that is very nice.  Granted he is not the most social person there is but my goodness he is still is a person.  And persecution of someone because you don't like them is unacceptable.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 02:21 pm
Title: Chapter 7

That was short and sweet! 

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 04:19 am
Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Hmmm, Scott thinking naughty thoughts about Mackenzie,wow. Can't see how things turn out with the room sharing.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/09/09 03:01 am
Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update!! Being in the room together should bring them closer!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 07:00 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.  At east Scoot and Mackenzie are being civil to each other.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 06:55 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I don't understand why Mackenzie hates Scott so much. He really didn't do anything that bad. She's being over dramatic. Although, I can't deny I'm anxious to see how this plays out.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 03:20 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Nice!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/09/09 06:00 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Can't wait for the conference.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/09/09 05:06 am
Title: Chapter 6

This trip is going to be interesting.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/09 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait for the conference in the Big Apple.  It should be fun.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/09/09 01:02 am
Title: Chapter 6

I cant wait till they get to the Big Apple! Geat update

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 07:23 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Loved the update. What's up with Mackenzie??? Its like she's overacting to situations when it comes to Scott. She needs to bring it down a notch and try to be professional. She needs to watch what she says and in whose company as it could be taken out of context.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 07:10 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 12:27 am
Title: Chapter 4

What is Scott's real story?  Waiting on the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 12:18 am
Title: Chapter 3

Next update please

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 12:11 am
Title: Chapter 2

Good start.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 12:07 am
Title: Chapter 5

Really...Mackenzie needs to cut Carol loose. Whats she got against Scott anyway? Office tramp AND gossip...that's all I'm saying.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 05:46 am
Title: Chapter 5

great update! Carol is a mess.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 03:54 am
Title: Chapter 5

Great update. I feel Carol is gonna lead Mackenzie astray with her wild ways. Hmmm, Mackenzie got a thing for Scott???? 

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 01:31 am
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