You must login (register) to review.
Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great udate.  But I am confused to why they are bad mouthing Scott so bad. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 12:26 am
Title: Chapter 4

Nice update!

 Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 08:33 pm
Title: Chapter 4

How does he get anything down if he has to stop every other minute to sanitize his hands. I take it he won't be going out to the club.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 3

Great update!! Thanks

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 05:12 am
Title: Chapter 4

This is good. MacKenzie might want to lose Carol as an intimate friend though. She seems nice and all but office gossips are never good to keep company with.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 4

Great update. What's up with Scott??? Why is he stressing Mackenzie??? Hope she has fun with Carol.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 03:22 am
Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update but for Mackenzie to go off on a fellow worker like that was so unprofessional.  I understand that no one seems to like Scott but my goodness the way that they treat him is so wrong.  As for Mackenzie she needs to start acting like a professional instead of a baby.  If she is so home sick then she needs to go back to Arkanasas.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 01:03 am
Title: Chapter 4

Scott not liking him at all.

 Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/09/09 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 3

Great update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/08/09 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 3

This has potential. Jared is going to be entertaining.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/09 04:16 am
Title: Chapter 3

Poor Scott

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 08:58 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I like it! I hope to see more soon!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 07:51 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great update.  I kind of feel bad for Scott.  Doesn't seems like anyone that he works with likes him.  What is POV?  Why is he the way that he is?  He seems to have a germ phoia as well.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 07:03 pm
Title: Chapter 3

i llikey, i likely a lot. thanks for the update and will be looking for the next update soon.

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 06:53 pm
Title: Chapter 2

this story has plenty of potential and i liked what i have read so far.

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful beginning. I look forward to reading it!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/09 02:46 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great start to the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 07:20 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this story speaks to my heart...I'm a simple 'country' girl too...can imagine the culture shock from moving from the country to the big city like Mackensie....whereas people in the country are more laid back and hospitable...and the face-paced lifestyle of the city makes them appear 'cold' on first impression...

Looking forward to reading more...good start...

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 04:48 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Interesting so far. Pleas continue.

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 11:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

great start, I look forward to reading it.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 07:08 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm liking this start and look forward to reading more.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 06:50 am
Title: Chapter 2

good start. please continue

 Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/08/09 06:26 am
You must login (register) to review.