oh no!!
can't wait to read more
Reviewer: mekaky Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/07/11 03:32 pm
That was awesome!
I thought you'll never come :-)
Good to see, you're back.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/11 06:58 am
Oh no!!! Poor Mary!!! Hopefully Vico comes home before she is hurt...
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/11 06:16 am
Glad to see this story back. Wow, you sure started off with a bang!! Loved the update. Are they gonna kill her or will Vico arrive on time??? Poor Mary!! Those thugs abviuosly don't respect a woman. They're vicious. She should have hid instead of going through boldly. She learnt the hard way not to interrupt thugs.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/11 05:27 am
I have to say i was really digging this story until i found out that she is 19 and he is 37. That is a bit to much for me. But I do like what you were doing on this story. I will defintitely give another one of your storys a try in the future!
Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/07/11 01:54 am
Glad you're back!!
What?!! Dont let Mary get hurt!! However, this might be the perfeect opportunity to see if there is anything different about Mary that's been hinted at.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 07:39 pm
I love this story. I love Vico and Mary. I actually love Mary and how sweet she is. I like Dino and Mary's relationship like father daughter. I don't like Danielle. What happened with Tara? When are you updating? Love It
Reviewer: Trina Mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 07:14 pm
Welcome back DameRouge,
I have been stalking this story and re-reading it for months now, so I am to ecstatic that you have blessed us with an update, but how could you leave us hanging like this? I am so loving Vico and Mary, but awww shucks it's gonna be on now when Vico founds out what has happened to his "Maria".
Please put me out of my misery and update soon, like today would be good.
A
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 05:07 pm
Oh no poor Mary! I hope Vico finds her before they do something terrible to her. On a positive note I love how happy Vico is with Mary!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/07/11 04:58 pm
Wow so these two got together nice. It so funny reading Vino humming lol but, he happy witch is good. I hope they don't hurt her and Vino comes home soon because they going to die for coming into his house. Glad you are back miss this story and thank for the great update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 04:31 pm
Another great delivary. I can't wait to find out how all these guys are related if they are. I'm assuming that Eric went to college---but he's working there as a bartender. I wonder if he's like a professional bartender (they go on competitions and stuff). And I noticed there were several Italian guys...I got to wonder if they all are related or just friends.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 01:28 pm
Wow, what a great start and so bloody engaging. I love this story. I'm a bit late to the game, but I'm here now and I'm glad to be reading this story. The characters grab you right off the bat the mixture of third and first person is well done and it feels like I'm in the story along with the characters. It's just great stuff. Please continue---as I see you're doing. Off to R& R the second chapter. Again, this is brilliant. I'm all over Ernesto and Mary--as characters not a couple. Ernesto is cool and Mary is a sweetheart. I'm in the same boat---I've got a $80,000 university debt I have to figure out about paying. It's too bad I hated the finance side of Economics and focused on the theory of it all. Ugh. Theory doesn't pay bills.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 01:17 pm
I hope Mary isn't hurt too bad.. Vico, will be going to war once he gets home and finds Mary hurt.. It's on now!!!
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 01:07 pm
What a great update. Please come back soon. Can't wait.
Reviewer: Romance Signed [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 01:05 pm
awesome story. mary needs help, hope vico is home soon. update soon.
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 12:34 pm
long time no see, i loved this story and its getting even better please upate soon
Reviewer: vanessa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/07/11 09:30 am
this is so good
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/11 12:06 pm
Keep up the good work
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/11 11:23 am
you seriously need to update soon. you can let this story go unfinish
Reviewer: sailormoon89 Signed [Report This]Date: 29/03/11 08:53 pm
where'd you disappear too??!!! I fell in love with this story, and you went into the witness protection program..aahh
hurrryy back please :]
Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]Date: 28/03/11 06:18 am
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY IT'S BEEN GREAT AND SO LUKEWARM I KNOW IT CAN GET STEAMY SO
Reviewer: KVGURL Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/03/11 05:23 am
Please update this story I think it's very interesting!
Reviewer: Priscilla Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/03/11 06:13 pm
Hi there, it's been months since the last chapter. When will be the next update? Hope you are not going to ditch this IR story. Love it and will truly be dissappointed if you stop writing (like so many of The Chamber writers) while your readers yearn for more.
Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/03/11 08:38 am
I enjoy this story, when will you update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/03/11 02:55 am
Please have mercy on me and update!!!
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 04:28 pm