This is a Fan fiction about Season 11 DWTS R&B Singer Brandy and her dance partner Makism Chmerkovskiy. This is an intense romance btw Brandy & Makism. Enjoy!
I like your story and have been following it fro the begnning. I think you should tidy up some of the format issues.
Also, thougt I love reviews on my stories. for me personally the fact that so many people even read it makes me happy.
Please continue because we totally need to know what Brandy is gonna do. As soon as she tells Maks, I know his sexy butt will be on that plane to LA contract obligations be damned.
LOL
I appreciate your comments. I'm not sure as to why all that jibberh is at the beginning of the store I am going to look into it.
Don't get me wrong I love that so many people have read my story; however if people don't respond (like yourself) than i wouldn't know what i needed to improve on. I love feedback whether positive or negative.
Thank you again and I will check out your stories, and I will be sure to review.
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Brandy and Maks started out as Dance Partners. Little did they know that thedance and their feelings for each other would lead to such complications. This is my fantasy adaptation of Team BranDMC's relationship.
I really got all addicted to this story when my ass was supposed to be cleaning my triflin' children's room. LOL. Keep it going!
Yes! Read my fic! Triflin -child mess can wait! Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo SignedHarry and Tina have waited till she graduated from High School to officially come out publicly in the press. Much to Tina's opposition since she would be attending her new University Syracuse. Something pops that may force Harry and Tina to speed their relationship to the altar.
Awww..poor Chelsy. She was with the bloke for a long time. But Tina did handle thst well.
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo SignedOooh.. I love the royals. I am a die hard anglophile and royal watcher. The Royal Forums is a great place if you are looking for any research in current events, family history about the roayls from Britian and every royal house reigning and non-regning in the world.
Honestly, I love the conept. And on the royal forums there was a heated debate about what woud happen were Harry to marry someone black and let me tell you a lot of true colors came out on that one. A lot of white Anglos in Britian do not lik the idea of their royal family mixing. They'd rather the BRF marry each other. Ew. Even Kate and is a blood cousin to the princes despite her commoner status before the marriage.
Anyway, I think it's great that you are putting you wiork out there. It's really scarey. I think the sory has a lot of potential, but I would love to see a little more authenticity with the Royal Family and their speech. I know you're probably not British and therefore it's hard to write in a style you're not familiar with, but it really goes a long way in the credibility of the story. If you need any help with Beta work or whatever I'd love to chat with you, because I cold not stop reading this. I was really intrigued with the series.
I will contact you when I begin to write the fourth and last installment tomorrow, thank you for the kind review.
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Tabby and Jace met for the first time at a family member's wedding and decided to take advantage of the company and island scenery. What they didn't expect is that their paths have crossed before. It's funny how the past can come full circle.
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Tabby is beautiful. Who is she in RL?
I don't know, but I have been searching the net trying to see if I can find more pictures of her.
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
A 'Hawthorne' Fic. When Detective Nick Renata discovers that Dr. Tom Wakefield has betrayed Christina, he gives Tom 24 hours to tell Christina something that could end their marriage for good.
I read the first chapter out of respect to you as a fabulous writer, but I can't go through with it. I am Team Tom and Team Christina all the way! And this to me is blasphemous. LOL.
But I know this will be a great story.
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
This sequel picks up where the Preacher's Son left off. More tales of those Ferguson men! Maxine tries to get better with therapy. Matthew tries to deny the attraction he feels for Maxine. Nadine and Eric struggle to hold their marriage in tact while they try to help Max, raise their daughters and work!
A Heart Redeemed is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson
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I was both weireded out and understanding of Max at the same time. Having been a surviovr of sexual molestation myself, I know what it's like to go through the pain and heart break of feeling damaged. I don't think I've ever spied on a relative getting it on, but I do know what it's like to be curious about it because you haven't engaged. I spent my entire childhood and the first part of my twenties hanging on the sidelines feeling awkward around boys and girls who were gay because I didn't now how to handle it.
It takes time. I love this story, and I think you writing gets better with each chapter.
Thank you! I did some research on sexual abuse and counseling in order to write Max and Dr Grayson. Thank you so much for your review. I pray that you are better and have overcome all you have gone through.
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Matheson felt that VaLysia was just another angry black female when she brought her grandmother to dinner at his mother's request. VaLysia thought Matheson was just another uppity white prick. Neither of them expected the sparks to fly!
Stereotypically Yours is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2010 BRAnderson
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And that's what separates mice from men. Get it done Matty!
Excellent chapter. I was on the edge the whole way through
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo SignedOld people sex...wow. It's like a totaly step toward tearing down the wall. I just don't wanna see what's on the other side. LOL.
Seriously, great stuff here. I love that Hannah is getting her swerve on and finding out that you can be a sexual 60. Go girl.
LOL! Well older adults have sex too. It doesn't stop at 30. If it did, I guess I'd be totally depressed and I'm way past 30. LOL. thanks for the review. I actually had someone write me a review and told me that the Hannah sex was distracting and that I should just stick to the main story. They didn't have a problem with all the extra characters and stories until Hannah had sex. (Not on this site). I had to laugh. I'm over 50 and if you like me writing about 20 somethings, get used to 50 somethings too! We aint dead yet. LOL!
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo SignedI don't know...when they start playing with the ass.,..LOL! Great chapter.
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo SignedI ha ve no idea what I just read but all I know is that in all of your stories, you definitely know how to push some boundaries and make people feel uncomfrotable. Good lord. LOL. Still reading and still enjoying every moment!
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~A Gift Fic for Happy 2 B Nappy~
April Jenkins will do whatever Carter Beck requests. Can you blame her?
Loosely inspired by The Secretary starring James Spader and Maggie Gyllenhall.
Okay The Secretary was like so incredibly hot and was one of the very last films we got to seem all hot and gorgeous before whatever happened to him happened.
I own the DVD and it is in my top ten of all time. The ending scene with Lizzie West's Chariots Rise kept paying in my haad as soon as April put her hands on the desk and then you referenced the movie!
Graat one shot!
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
They met and fell in lust, but in a small town things done in the dark have a way of coming to the light. Carmel Wilde is a single mother trying to do the right thing. Rod Woods is a man bored with his seemingly perfect life. Lust, betrayal, drugs and money. Who will end up on top and who will get screwed?
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Amber Rose's smutty face had me ready to puke, but this story is kinda like FIAH. Very interesting.
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Tom and Christina fight there way back to each other and do their best to over come a few obstacles that are thrown into their path.
I've seen some of your work on FF and I'm on the Hawthorne boards as well, and I have to say that your stories would be a lot more enjoyable if you worked with your formatting a little more and had some form of structure in your paragraphs. I want to read it, but it just seems like so much work
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Keesha Ward returns to Port Charles. She has been married, used, trashed and discarded. She also has two beautiful children - one of which may just belong to her ex-lover, Jason Morgan. Keesha/Jason, AU.
She sure the hell does. Almost seventeen years later and I still don't forgive Guza for making Jason do that to Keesha. Shit was cold. I love this. Keep it coming!
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But he still held on to the hope that they’d be there. It was all he had.
A Parenthood Christmas One-Shot!
Banner by me! :)
I so love this. I wanted write a Crasmine story after I spend this entire week catching up on season 3 of Parenthood which is hands down my favorite show on television. You've kept the characters essence and had a beauitful story to go with it. I loved it. I do like Dr. Joe because wh doesn't love D.B. Woodside and his foine self? But I kmow that Crasmine belong together. They just have to learn how to compormise and stop being so stubborn.
Anywho, great story and I hope you right more because this had me teary eyed just like the show does each and every episode.
Hi Vita Consuelo. I'm glad you liked it! I think you should write a Crasmine (Jasby) story. The world could use more Crasmine, I think. I missed the first 4 or 5 episodes of the last season and have been desperately trying to find a way to watch them. NBC.com sucks and is super slow and I don't believe they are showing the older episodes from this season. Anyway (rant/tangent). I love Parenthood and have been a fan from season 1. Love everything I've seen that Jason Katims touches (Roswell, Boston Public). I'm glad you thought the characters were "in character" and I too believe they belong together. I blame Jasmine. She's so stubborn but I can't say I wouldn't be that way if I were in that situation. And yes... Parenthood makes my "feelings" act up and I cry like a baby at the end of every episode! Thanks for letting me rant and rave and talk Parenthood and for the awesome review that made me smile!
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