Penname: ellendare [Contact]

Real name: Ellen

Member Since: 28/06/08

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Beast by Onimosity
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419663
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 6: Wild is the Wind

I don't know how I missed this one until now -- but your characterizations are amazing. I am loving what you're doing with Sunshine. She's a mix of sass, strength, vulnerability, heartbreak, and wisdom beyond her years (sometimes all in the same scene!) and you blend those transitions together beautifully.

I can't wait to read what happens next, and even better, I can't guess what happens next. Thank you!

Reviewer: ellendare Signed
Date: 07/12/09
Title: Chapter 12: The places you've been ...The things you have learned ...They sit with you so beautifully

Your writing blows me away -- I can hear Nikolai, I can see him... it's not so much that he wants to be a better man for her (which is a romantic staple I'm glad you're avoiding)... it's almost like he likes himself better when he's with her. Great, captivating job!

 Reviewer: ellendare Signed
Date: 13/12/09
Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

I don't have words to tell you how much I am loving this story. I fear it can't possibly end well, but I have faith in you and in the tale. Thank you so much!

 Reviewer: ellendare Signed
Date: 29/01/10
Title: Chapter 31: By The Time You Come Round to Me

You are a stunningly good writer. I have so many favorite parts, but I love best the way you give each character a voice of his or her own.

 Reviewer: ellendare Signed
Date: 06/02/10