Penname: TokenBlackGirl [Contact]

Real name: Angel

Member Since: 10/06/08

Membership status: Member

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Aspiring writer

Voracious reader


Television addict

Photoshop lover


 

Please Note: All previous original fiction stories have been deleted and are currently being revised. 


 





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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Picture of Drucilla Winters and Abe Carver

Drucilla Winters visits Salem to visit her newly married aunt, Celeste Perrault. But her new husband is Stefano DiMera and the Salem P.D. want her to spy on him for them. But when Commander Carver makes that request, both he and Dru discover an attraction to one another that will not only threaten Abe's marriage to Lexie and Dru's hopes of a reunion with Neil, but it will also incur the wrath of The Phoenix.



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Categories: Daytime Television, Days of Our Lives, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Drucilla Winters, Lexie Carver
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Lexie/Abe (Days of Our Lives)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Red Light Special
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 51994
Read Count: 1882
Published: 09/08/08
Updated: 22/12/09


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Her mouth then dropped open.

‘POLICE STATION FUCK COSTS LIVES!!!’

Martin raised a brow.

“I didn’t think even tabloids could use curse words outright...”

OMFG, this had me rolling. God that was so funny, I love this story.

And Theo's on the moon? That poor child, stuck with creep Rolf *shudders*

Great chapter! Please keep them coming..



Author's Response: Thanks for reading it. I would LOVE to see a tabloid headline like that too!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/08/08

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Martin the Sasquatch?  *Token blinks rapidly*

Damn...just...damn..

The dinner was divine, and the stuff that followed...LOL. That was some car ride, Abe and Dru...man, I'm loving them in this story.

This was great as always, thanks so much for the update!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/08/08

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter as always, love how you're using so many characters from both shows. There was so much to love, but these were my favorites.  

“Bo knocked my eye out.”

Heh, Loved Patch in this.

Hope said nothing. She could certainly sympathize. Billie Reed was still a name she had a hard time saying out loud.

This made me laugh out loud. I so look forward to these chapters, great job with this fic. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/09/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary: This is a Boiler Room story. With the downfall of J.T. Marlin comes the end of his relationship with Abby. Can Seth reclaim what was once lost? Can what was broken ever be repaired? [Here's my take on what -really- should have happened at the end of the film between Seth and Abby.]

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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2135
Read Count: 2556
Published: 15/08/08
Updated: 15/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, it's been ages since I've seen this movie, so I kinda went into this with a vauge sense of the dynamic between Seth and Abby. But I liked this fic, the argument between them was well written, and her anger very justified. And even though it ended with them giving in to each other, something tells me that's not enough to settle the issues between them. And those are some pretty big issues.

Thanks for posting, this was really great!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/08/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 CSI: Miami Fic.
She's sitting in an overstuffed chair, sipping on an overpriced drink, and feeling utterly out of place.  There was one realization that Alexx wasn’t ready to face.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 988
Read Count: 3013
Published: 17/08/08
Updated: 17/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: The Hands of Time

Okay, this was just really lovely.

There was so much heart in this, if felt so damn raw. That realization she had was so universal, I think every woman has something like that at some point, regardless of their age. An appraisal of themselves that doesn't really measure up, a feeling of inadequacy that bubbles to the surface. The moment you realize you're at a different place in your life than you were before.

Sigh...I really loved this. Excellent work.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Alexx is portrayed as strong and fierce, so it's interesting to explore her weaknesses and less confiendent side.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Evangeline and Todd are married but how will a night stand affect the the love and trust between them?



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1553
Read Count: 984
Published: 18/08/08
Updated: 18/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, it's me again.

I wanted to say that I'm so happy that you looked at this couple, and the Evangline character in such an orginal way. You made her human, a person that can make mistakes, hurt the people she loves. And the idea of her cheating is completely realistic to me, because she did have a history of doing so on the show (R.J. and Christian) so this drabble completely makes sense.

And if you choose to continue, that's great, but I think this is beautiful the way it is. You've done really great work with this, and you should be very proud. Thank you so much for sharing this with the rest of us.



Author's Response:

Well, it's me again.

Am so glad you got the concept of the whole story, I was on you tube, watching Unfaithful which is Rihanna's music video and before I knew it, I saw Evangeline and Todd's relationship in a different light.

Personally I perfer the good Evangeline but she's like any other person who can make mistakes and be remorseful about it.

I was so excited and I enjoyed every minute I spent on writing this. Thanks for the review and the stars too.

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/08/08

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

An evening out in Muggle London changes everything for Angelina Johnson. Suddenly the world is no longer black and white, but grey.



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Categories: Books
Characters: Angelina Johnson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1925
Read Count: 3002
Published: 19/08/08
Updated: 19/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Into the Grey

You know, every time you post a story I get all giddy. Because I know it will just blow me away. This was no exception.

God, this was powerful stuff. I loved how you gradually revealed the events in the alley. And the aftermath was just heartbreaking, how that one event completely altered the course of those girls lives. Something that they'll probably never be able to completely shake.

And her finding the Death Eater mask....Wow, that was a fantastic way to end the story.

Thank you for posting this luckybrans. I'm so glad you're sharing your talent with the rest of us.



Author's Response:

Damn, thanks. I'm blushing right now. I don't even know how to adequately respond except to say I'm glad you're enjoying my fics.

If you're going to thank me for sharing then I'm going to thank you and the other hard working administrators for giving me a place to share. You don't even understand how this site has sparked my creativity.

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/08/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

CSI: Miami fic.

They’re close. She staring into hazel eyes she knows so well, slightly scared of what she sees. His breath brushes her cheek as he gives her a chaste kiss and her hold loosens on the paper. “I promise, Alexx.”



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 914
Read Count: 2383
Published: 22/08/08
Updated: 22/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this.

I liked that you gave a clear overview of the progression of their relationship, how feeling began to evolve over time, without her noticing until it was slightly too late. And her having that out, just in time to prevent her from making a mistake, that was a great ending.

I really loved this..

It's want. It's desire.

But it isn't love.

And that's just not enough.

Pretty much sums up the story I think.

Thanks for posting, reading this made my day!

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 25]
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Edification -- The act of edifying, or the state of being edified; a building up, especially in a moral or spiritual sense; moral, intellectual, or spiritual improvement; instruction.

Ugly Betty: Daniel Meade has something Wilhelmina Slater wants. He's editor in chief at Mode, the premier fashion magazine at Meade publications. And what Wilhelmina wants, Wilhelmina gets----a lesson Daniel is about to learn the hard way.

My response to TokenBlackGirl's Chamber Character Challenge



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Wilhelmina Slater
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: Something Wicked
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5879
Read Count: 9218
Published: 24/08/08
Updated: 24/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Heee!  Words cannot express how excited I am. Not only does Willie now have a story, but there's a damn Ugly Betty fic on the site!  I'm a happy woman, happy happy joy joy....

Author's Response: *Black dances with Token* I know, isn't it cool?!!!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08

Title: Chapter 2: The Edification of Daniel Meade by BlackMamba

There are really no words to express how awesome ths was, but I'm gonna try.

Thank so much for capturing the kick ass bitchy glory that is Wilhelmina Slater. You totally rocked this fic, and every bit was just as entertaining as the show. Even more so perhaps, cause you went with a story I've been dying to see. Loved Willie/Marc, and Daniel's damn cluelessnes was on point, but he was still slightly sympathtic. Way out of his league though.

So much of this had me lauging out loud, but this...

The dancing came later in her office with Marc---who'd fortunately had a playlist filled with gangster rap songs like "Sippin' on Some Syzzurp," and "Whoop that Trick."

and this...

 Well," Amanda said with relish. "I'm not sure if you're keeping count but that was the sixth girl you've made cry this week alone." Amanda lifted the camera again and grinned. "I'm starting a scrap book of all the ugly cry faces. I'm thinking of calling it "Carnage". "She placed her hand on her hip and puckered her lips, lacquered with glossy red lip gloss. "What do you think?" 

Were serious favorites out of all this rampant kick assness. Take a bow Black, you did Willie proud.

 



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! I was so nervous about this one, trying to get he voices right.  Most of all Willis's but Amanda and Marc were a challenge to.  Thanks so much for the awesome review.  So very much appreciated.  Might even frame the sucker!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Sebastian Langley has everything he wants except Kaiya Walker, his ex-girlfriend.  A reformed player, Sebastian would do anything to get Kaiya back.  And what Sebastian wants, Sebastian gets. 

This was one of my first fics, so it may be a little rough.  Still, it was a favorite on the TST board, so I hope you guys enjoy it.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 70325
Read Count: 119268
Published: 24/08/08
Updated: 24/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, so Sebastian is kind of a player, got that right off the bat. And apparently he likes to live dangerously, he wasn't even phased by Kaiya's age.

This was a great start, excellent first chapter.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, I didn't expect him to wait that long for her, though they did date other people. The kiss was sweet, and she does seem pretty innocent in the flashbacks. Makes me wonder if she still is, or if they're relationship changed her.

Oh, and I liked this.

 I could tell by the way she and most of the women in the party looked at me that my appearance got the Campbell's "umm umm good" seal of approval.

That was such a great line.

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/08

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So on one hand Sebastian's kind of an ass, way too full of himself. On the other, he's such an interesting narrator, I love reading this story from his perspective. The love scene was very hot by the way, I know why Kai's a bit sprung. He's definately a bad boy though. Wondering what happened to break them up.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

A group of college friends and a wedding...shouldn't be too much of a problem, right? Wrong. When the Best Man writes a book that resembles their college life, problems occur among the newlyweds and the Best Man, where past secrets come to the surface.

     



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37498
Read Count: 44425
Published: 26/08/08
Updated: 29/10/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a really great start, I only saw this movie once after it came out, and it was a while ago. So I feel like I'm reading this with fresh eyes.

Loving it so far. Thanks for posting it here !

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/08/08

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Summary:

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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49842
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such a great first chapter, I love the premise of the story, and like how you've set everything up. I like that Mr. Ki's not really fond of Serena at the moment, makes me wonder how their relationship will eventually change. And I really like Serena already. :)

Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response: Thanks You!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Loved the backstory on Serena and Amelia, they seem very close, which was nice. The stuff with Ki was very entertaining, his mother's no joke. Two weeks huh? :)

This was a great chapter, excellent job. :)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

“Now, I told you that Kyle and I will handle it. I don’t need you straining an ovary or something. I’ll never hear the end of it from your mother.”

LOL, I loved that line. Her parents are a trip. And Ki is so damn mean, I love it. I love how his solution to problems is just to fire everybody. I'm sure he'd fire his family if he could. :)

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Damn, I'm kinda in love with Mr. Ki myself, he's such an asshole, but I love it.

“You’re three minutes, thirty seconds late. I thought this was a company with standards.”

Loved that. And I'm worried about Amelia, but I think Serena is too, so...

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

And so it begins.:)

LOL at Mr. Ki's date, that was great. God, the image of those teeth sliding around *shivers.*

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Man, that was...awesome.

 Eun-Jun is such a great character, so damn complex. She beats her son horribly, then gives Serena a pep talk afterwords. Never know what's next with that woman.

And the scene with Mr. Ki and Serena was very hot, I loved the way he focused on her stomach and hips like that. It was very subtle yet sensual all at once. Serena's reaction was so heartbreaking, she's so damn confused and I so understand why.

So yeah, you officially have me addicted to this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes soon!



Author's Response: Thanks so much. I glad you like the story and I hope to have the next chapter up sometime this week.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/08/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Once again, excellent chapter. Loved how Serena took charge of the situation at her house, she told him about himself and it was awesome. And the kiss was very hot, I really like this couple togther, even with Ki's odder tendencies.

And the end was awesome, god I love Ki's mom.

Great update! Looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Finally got to catch up with this story and I love the direction it's taking. Serena's choice was so hard for her, but it's sweet that she would do that for her mother. And the wedding, well...not the stuff of fairytales, but then neither is the situation.

Loving this story Quania, hope you update again soon!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/10/08

Title: Ki Fashions

Loved the update, I really like how protective Serena's father is of her. And that first meeting went as well as she could expect I think. Very well written. I liked the moment with the wedding picture, that was sweet. And I kinda feel bad for Shane, it seems like he really likes her. Guy has no idea what he's up against.

Great update, looking forward to the next one. :)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Bonnie and RJ

Bonnie McKechnie has been back in Oakdale a few months when word that James Stenbeck is returning gets out, via his new head man, Llandview's RJ Gannon. With Bonnie's cousin, Dallas and Margo Hughes, determined to put James Stenbeck under the jail, they do not refuse Bonnie's offer to use RJ's attraction to the McKechnie heiress to get information. But one afternoon, Bonnie finds herself surprised by the spell of passion RJ casts upon her...



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Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Bonnie McKechnie, Jessica Griffin
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26347
Read Count: 1557
Published: 01/09/08
Updated: 19/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: Bonnie's Choice

Damn that was good.

So may thanks all around. Thanks so much for adding to the challenge and giving Bonnie a story. And thanks for giving R.J. some love, that character got such a raw deal on the show. And he was hot in this, very hot. Loved it.

And a big THANK YOU for posting another story period. I love your writing and I'm always happy to see a new story or chapter from you. So keep up the excellent work.

Awesome. Just awesome. ;)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOL, oh my god, she was gonna let him drown. Damn R.J.'s awesome, I love him in this. Kicking ass and taking names, perfect. And poor Bonnie better just give in and call it a day. :)

Great update, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/09/08