This was all kinds of fantastic. :) Seriously, I think I ship them a little more just because of this fic. Nice use of all the characters, especially Morgana, I loved her dream sequence. But of course, those last moments with Gwen/Authur were my favorite, just stunning. I actually got chills when I read this Black. 

Bless you for taking up this fandom. I can't wait for the next story. :) 

You're amazing.

Seriously, I think this was kind of breathtaking in that it's a short and simple collection of moments between these two and still conveys so much longing that it got me choked up a bit. And it felt so painfully honest too.

I love that they never say what they're feeling though I really, really wanted them to. But that's not how it works is it? I can't count how many times I've been in a similar situation only to realize years later that I let that moment pass me by. I felt all kinds of things when reading this and that's when I know something is damn good.

In case you didn't know, I'm a huge fan of your writing. I look foward to your future stories. Thanks so much for sharing this one. :)

I think I might have missed this when you first posted, but I absolutely love it. It's so in character, especially with Damon. You have so many good lines here, but I really loved this.

She hit like a girl, all wrist and no hip.

I can't wait to read your next one, loved this! :D

KAT! o/

*takes a deep breath and tries to contain her glee*

So yeah, this is even better than I thought it would. Your first fanfic? Really? This just feels like the show. The dialouge the format, and I love LOVE that you have a case going in this too. And one that's so much like Cold Case, my heart is breaking for Amara and her loss. It's never easy to lose a child, even one that was obviously as difficult as August was.

I love that Kat is so affected by this woman the case, she is a mother. And the ones like these have to give her nightmares. That scene of her waking up in the middle of the night was just beautifully done. 

And Bell! o/

Okay, you know I'm a Scotty/Kat shipper first, but I'm also a huge fan of a man who sees how awesome this lady is and isnt' afraid to make that known. You really captured the fun vibe of this couple and his facination with her, which is just as lovely here as it is on the show. I love that he throws her because she's not a easy woman to throw. And the non-kiss at the end of the date was AWESOME, you know something else is on the horizion. Something more I mean. 

I'm wondering just how much this case and her relationship with Bell will coverge before its all over. And I can't wait until all that tension bubbles over, because you know it will. 

You are awesome for doing this. Like I said before, this feels like Cold Case. And nothing makes me happier than reading fanfic this close to the real thing. 

Thank you, thank you and I look foward to you next udpate. :D 

*hugs fic* this was so, so sweet. And awesome too. I love that he's thinking about her and that she makes him smile so much. I love the idea that she has NO CLUE how into her she is.

And don't think I didn't notice all the Valens in this fic, you write him just as well as the rest of these characters. I feel so spoiled right now, thank you again for posting these stories. I plan to read you next chapter of Gasping tommrow, as I'm falling asleep at my computer right now. But yeah, I had to look at this one before I went to bed. :)

*hugs you and your Cold Case fic*

Yay, I finally got to read this and good lord, I'm so happy I did. I love, loved the date he set up for her. I like the idea of Kat being wooed, she doesnt' strike me as a woman that happens to often. And good lord, he was good at it, the love scene was fantastic and the build up even better. I loved the last lines of this too, very nice and understanded but full of passion. Love fics that are arranged in moments like this, the story has beats and gets more intense with each one. 

*sighs* I love you for writing this fandom. Thank you for my CC fix this week. :) 

P.S. Don't think I didn't notice Scotty in this. I promised myself I woudn't mention him in my comments this time and you have him BREATHING DOWN HER NECK. *shakes head.* You're a little evil. And now I want a threesome. :P

Oh fic, I love you. You are awesome in so, so many ways, starting with

I’ll grab your soul some Juicy Juice at the supermarket tomorrow."

as well as, 

"That’s a public service. I mean seriously, nothing on Dale Midkiff’s brilliant turn on Time Trax? You’d think his life began with Love Come Softly."

(LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!)

And THIS ENTIRE EXCHANGE!

Gus turned to follow Shawn’s gaze. "What? What happened?" "There are bones in that man’s sandwich." Gus turned around as Shawn sidestepped him, determined to stop the abomination from leaving the tent. He felt Gus grab his arm.
"It’s a plate, not a sandwich."

"I know what a plate is. I’m talking about what’s on top."

"No, I mean, he’s not gonna bite into it Shawn. That’s just how they serve the fish." Shawn watched the man walk away with the offending entree in hand.

He turned to look at Gus. "I want go home, this place creeps me out."

"What, a plate of fish?"

"I know what I saw Gus." Shawn pointed to the vendor. "That man made a sandwich with…bones inside and you’re standing there telling me that it’s okay. Well it’s not okay, it’s… all wrong.

Dear god, I can't breath. Seriously, it's not often a fic makes me laugh out loud this much. I love this story. This is one of my favorite shows and I LOVE, LOVE this story. The Lassie reveal was perfect, and Gus busting them up with Joy's fling was Shawn was such a great finish. I don't doubt that Lassiter would walk away at that, she's tainted for him now. Just when I was starting to ship them. 

*sighs* 

This fic was brilliant and dear GOD, you must write more Psych fic. NOW WOMAN. 

This was so sad, but in a very good way. I love how stubbor Curtis was about his feelings for her, hopefully this is what's playing out on the show right now. We're just not seeing it. This was beautiful and heartbreaking and I loved it so much. I hope you get inspired to write the show again, but then I always hope that. :)