Ummm...I hate to say this but I'm so on team Neil right now. He's not stupid, he knows something's up, and her denying it just makes it worse.

Ashley's a bitch.

Liked how you're mixing the flashbacks between this story and the last one, very nicely done. Hot love scene too, very nice writing there Black.

Can't wait for the next chapter.. .

Jack is an ass. I love him, I do, but he has been and will always be an ass. That stuff with the mail clerk? Lord, help me.

And Dru's leaving because Neil didn't support her? Really? Don't think that's the case at all, I think those wet dreams had more to do with that decision...

Don't make me side with Liv, I'll never forgive you.

Black, this fic gets me all worked up, I feel like I'm watching the damn show. Which is great, cause now I feel like yelling at my computer screen...

Awesome chapter.

Again, you're killing me with the flashback. I love that stuff, it's so good. And poignant, considering how things ended up.

Brad's an oily snake, but damn if he didnt' make me laugh. What the hell are you trying to do to me? And I loved the scene with Dru and Lily, very emotional. She really needs to talk to her daughter, it feels like she'd avoiding the situation with her family right now.

Excellent update as always. :)

Great update as always, I can't wait to see how this all shakes out.

The scene with Mamie was pretty damn powerful, and the banks slips falling to the ground...that was some powerful imagery there. But I think my favorite part was her walking down the street, she just seemed so broken, so unlike the Dru we normally see.

This was awesome as always, can't wait for the next update!

And then she faints. :)

No seriously, this was really good, I love how he just stepped up like that, put everything on the table. More like Jason Q, less like the Morgan version.

Great chapter, thanks for updating this story.

Very nice, Liked how she handled Sonny. And I love Scotty showing up, I miss that character on the show.

Great job! 

Great chapter, lots of interesting stuff unfolding. So Keesha's helped Jason before? Wow, I understand why Mac would be a little doubtful about her and him, given their history.

And I'm interested in the cop drama aspect, like how you're establishing her in her job. And going undercover, hmm..can't wait to see how that turns out.

Great work Ash! You get stars. :)

It wasn’t until she was walking away and heard Eric say something about “listening to mom” that it dawned on Alexx.

Maybe she didn’t miss her chance after all.

I love those last lines. How it brings the story full circle. I love this fic actually, its so intimate. Sad, but in such a great way.

Love this. Thanks so much for posting.

Holy sh**t, that was fantastic! You had me panting girl, I loved this so much. And I'm all about me some Yul, if I wasn't before, I sure as hell am now. Fab, just awesome. Take a bow, cause I f**cking love you.

Heh, that's was nice, here she was reaming them out and Kyle shows up. Brianna is a bit tightly wound, isn't she?

Author's Response:

Yeah she is. Very feisty and outspoken.  Lol. Thanks for reading Token! I appreciate it

I don’t care what I have to do, but I’m going to make her forgive me. I have to try to get her back,”

Nice, I like it when men get over themselves and go after the ones they love. I like Jason, seems like he's got a bit of sense, despite his mistakes.

Tabitha's pretty strong willed I think Patrick better watch out. And she does have a man, so not sure how that's gonna go down. Can't wait to see though. :)

Dude, Dana'a hard core. I want to know more of course, but she scares me a little... :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Token.  Dana is a little hardcore.  And a little scary. LOL. I'm glad you are enjoying it.