Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary: Francesca Dupree is a high powered corporate raider. Alex Williams is her nemesis from college. Sparks fly when the two come face to face after five years at a mutual friend's house. This is a one shot story.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3898
Read Count: 3849
Published: 13/08/08
Updated: 13/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so hot! It does kinda make me upset that they wasted so much time hating each other, and they could have been have GREAT SEX!!!!

Author's Response:

Hate and love are twins

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

by insight spinner © 2007

This is a very short scene that happens after Todd and Evan leave Capricorn set after the April 6, 2007 episode of OLTL. It's just a drabble -- While it is rated mature it is designed to be suggestive and not explicit. You'll have to fill in the rest for yourself.

I'm posting it because it fits with the Tangie Teases series.  Thanks to BlackMamba for letting this short-short hang out.

-- inspin



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 388
Read Count: 2700
Published: 13/08/08
Updated: 13/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Every time I read stories like this one I realize how much OLTL messed up by not putting these two together.

Author's Response: And that's why they loose loyal fans.  I'm not sure what they could do to fix it at this point seeing as we have proof that bringing characters back doesn't mean they will be written for or written well.  I'm glad we can honor what we saw on the screen.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/08/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary: This is a Boiler Room story. With the downfall of J.T. Marlin comes the end of his relationship with Abby. Can Seth reclaim what was once lost? Can what was broken ever be repaired? [Here's my take on what -really- should have happened at the end of the film between Seth and Abby.]

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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2135
Read Count: 2572
Published: 15/08/08
Updated: 15/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story. I loved this movie and this story makes me want to watch it again right now. I especially loved the reference to "childbearing hip,"I thought it was cute.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/08/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 CSI: Miami Fic.
She's sitting in an overstuffed chair, sipping on an overpriced drink, and feeling utterly out of place.  There was one realization that Alexx wasn’t ready to face.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 988
Read Count: 3020
Published: 17/08/08
Updated: 17/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: The Hands of Time

I feel Alex's pain. Although I'm still in my 20s, I can't help but to look at the 21 and under and wish I was that carefree again.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Evangeline and Todd are married but how will a night stand affect the the love and trust between them?



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1553
Read Count: 985
Published: 18/08/08
Updated: 18/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it, it's a very interesting take on Todd and Van's relationship.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 128]
Summary:

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I'm really not good at summaries. Basically Evangeline has been in Atlanta for a year and arrives back in Llanview with her new baby girl. Either Christian or Todd could be the father...or so she wants everyone to believe..



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48776
Read Count: 12564
Published: 19/08/08
Updated: 12/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was good! Cris and Todd's reaction were both well written. I can imagine both men wanting to hold her to see if it 'felt' right holding 'his' baby in his arms.

Author's Response: Thanks very much Sweet. I love your evaluation because I was aiming to convey that same sentiment to the readers.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/08/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Blair has NO right to call ANYONE a whore!! Van needs to stop fighting Todd and admit that they are going to be together!

Author's Response: Sweet you want the fanfic to end that quickly...lol!! The logical side of Evangeline cannot understand why she really has any feelings for Todd in the first place. Her past relationship with John will always factor into her decision making.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/08/08

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chris and Blair still doing that nasty, now that's NASTY!!

Author's Response: Bwhahahahahaha...Thats all I have to say!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Star is always so freaking dramatic always in grown ups business!

At least the test is done. Now, we just need the results. Cris needs to learn to ignore Todd, or else Todd will be able to bait him every time. He also needs to realize that Todd doesn't care what, I mean who Blair sleeps with.



Author's Response: Hey Sweet, you hit the nail right on the head. Todd doesn't give a hoot about Blair and what she does in her spare time but I knew that Cris would want to throw a word or two back at him...all I thought he could grasp for was his bedroom workings with Blairish...

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/09/08

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Starr is a brat! At least her actions didn't stop Todd and Van from getting together. Now all we need to know is who's the baby daddy?

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Starr could always try but when her daddy wants what he wants...Well lets say we all know our Todd by now...LOL!!!!

Love the review!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

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Edification -- The act of edifying, or the state of being edified; a building up, especially in a moral or spiritual sense; moral, intellectual, or spiritual improvement; instruction.

Ugly Betty: Daniel Meade has something Wilhelmina Slater wants. He's editor in chief at Mode, the premier fashion magazine at Meade publications. And what Wilhelmina wants, Wilhelmina gets----a lesson Daniel is about to learn the hard way.

My response to TokenBlackGirl's Chamber Character Challenge



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Wilhelmina Slater
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: Something Wicked
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5879
Read Count: 9245
Published: 24/08/08
Updated: 24/08/08


Title: Chapter 2: The Edification of Daniel Meade by BlackMamba

You had all the characters down to a t. While I was reading, I was able to picture it character as the story went along. 

I love Willie and I can see her doing everything you wrote. Poor Daniel!!



Author's Response: Thanks Sweet Pea. I was really worried about getting it right so I'm so happy so your comment.  I love Willie too, and thought this was so her style.  Thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary: Todd Lord Manning was born to rule, Evangeline Nahim Williamson was born to serve, it's a taboo for the two worlds to collide and become one.

Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1072
Read Count: 847
Published: 24/08/08
Updated: 24/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

Loving it! Leave to Todd to be the one to break tradition and be his own man.

Author's Response:

Todd is just one of those people who can't be tied down by rules and I love him for it.[sometimes]

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Sebastian Langley has everything he wants except Kaiya Walker, his ex-girlfriend.  A reformed player, Sebastian would do anything to get Kaiya back.  And what Sebastian wants, Sebastian gets. 

This was one of my first fics, so it may be a little rough.  Still, it was a favorite on the TST board, so I hope you guys enjoy it.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 70325
Read Count: 119366
Published: 24/08/08
Updated: 24/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMFG!!! The peach talk got to me! I thought that was so sexy!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

A group of college friends and a wedding...shouldn't be too much of a problem, right? Wrong. When the Best Man writes a book that resembles their college life, problems occur among the newlyweds and the Best Man, where past secrets come to the surface.

     



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37498
Read Count: 44576
Published: 26/08/08
Updated: 29/10/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dang, Mason was hot in this chapter. The man has skills!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Finally, after YEARS of pent-up sexual tension!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Student Davia Vincent has sworn off men. Attorney and Professor Jackson Aldridge ego has been torn to shreds by his ex-girlfriend. Something draws the two together and in the end, they do learn that love is real, despite what they thought.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91423
Read Count: 168675
Published: 26/08/08
Updated: 26/08/08


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great story. I absolutely loved reading this. Jackson and Davia as a couple, experiencing real issues was very well written! Loved the drama and especially the love!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/09/08

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

KiFashions-2.jpg picture by Quania2004

Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49845
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really impressed with this story. I can already see all the juicy drama!

I don't know why, but I laughed so hard when he said that she was repulsive, talk about in denial! No wonder Ameila thinks he might be gay. 



Author's Response: Yes, Mr. Ki is definitelynt Definitions */ @font-face {font-family:"MS Mincho"; panose-1:2 2 6 9 4 2 5 8 3 4; mso-font-alt:"a325;a331; 明朝"; mso-font-charset:128; mso-generic-font-family:modern; mso-font-pitch:fixed; mso-font-signature:-536870145 1791491579 18 0 131231 0;} @font-face {font-family:"Cambria Math"; panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4; mso-font-charset:1; mso-generic-font-family:roman; mso-font-format:other; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:0 0 0 0 0 0;} @font-face {font-family:Calibri; panose-1:2 15 5 2 2 2 4 3 2 4; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:swiss; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:-1610611985 1073750139 0 0 159 0;} @font-face {font-family:"\@MS Mincho"; panose-1:2 2 6 9 4 2 5 8 3 4; mso-font-charset:128; mso-generic-font-family:modern; mso-font-pitch:fixed; mso-font-signature:-536870145 1791491579 18 0 131231 0;} /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-unhide:no; mso-style-qformat:yes; mso-style-parent:""; margin-top:0in; margin-right:0in; margin-bottom:10.0pt; margin-left:0in; line-height:115%; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:11.0pt; font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:"MS Mincho"; mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast; mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi; mso-fareast-language:KO;} .MsoChpDefault {mso-style-type:export-only; mso-default-props:yes; mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-fareast-font-family:"MS Mincho"; mso-fareast-theme-font:minor-fareast; mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri; mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi; mso-fareast-language:KO;} .MsoPapDefault {mso-style-type:export-only; margin-bottom:10.0pt; line-height:115%;} @page Section1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.0in 1.0in 1.0in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;} div.Section1 {page:Section1;} --> in denile which will make his realization all the more fun.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 


 


 


Looking back, I have this to regret. That too often when I loved, I did not say so.


 


 


 


A Bones Fan Fiction:  My response to the Chamber Character Challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Camille Saroyan
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Cam/Booth (Bones)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2997
Read Count: 4021
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 27/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: An Unnatural Death

So sweet, yet so sad. It's hard to let the past go when you have to see him every damn day, and your feelings are just as strong now as they were then.

Author's Response: Thanks Sweet Pea. And you're right about seeing him every day, they didn't really get into that enough on the show in my opinion. At least when I was watching. :) Thanks so much for the reveiw!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary: Evangeline is so out of Todd's league but he is not giving up. We are all allowed to dream and wish, right?

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Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2007
Read Count: 881
Published: 01/09/08
Updated: 01/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

She 6 years. She must have wanted to make sure he'd matured! At least she held her ground while he was high school.

Author's Response:

Hi Sweet Pea, good to see you again. I am happy she took the high way instead of ending up in prison like all these female teachers with no self control.

Thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Bonnie and RJ

Bonnie McKechnie has been back in Oakdale a few months when word that James Stenbeck is returning gets out, via his new head man, Llandview's RJ Gannon. With Bonnie's cousin, Dallas and Margo Hughes, determined to put James Stenbeck under the jail, they do not refuse Bonnie's offer to use RJ's attraction to the McKechnie heiress to get information. But one afternoon, Bonnie finds herself surprised by the spell of passion RJ casts upon her...



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Bonnie McKechnie, Jessica Griffin
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26347
Read Count: 1559
Published: 01/09/08
Updated: 19/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: Bonnie's Choice

The scene on the horse took my breath away. Part of me couldn't believe what was happening and the other part was excited that it was happening.

I like RJ and am so glad that you're giving him a shot. 



Author's Response: I love RJ's dirty draws! And I've said this before to other people, but I think it is just ridiculous that no other soap has snapped up Timothy Stickney. But chances are if they did they wouldn't write for him properly anyway. And I love Bonnie. Or at least that actress that played her. She was playful and fun.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You have to admit that dangerous RJ is kinda sexy, especially when he's protecting his woman.

Issac is such a punk!! He knew exactly what he was doing. He was hoping to remind Bonnie of what they had in order to get some money from her. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/08

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this story. RJ has definitely branded Bonnie's as his own. I still can't believe that jerk asked her for money AGAIN!

James is a bad mofo!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Summary: Ryan is the lead vocalist of a K-Pop band called Rising Dragons. He and the band has come to America to promote their new album -- and hopefully become true international icons. Although the band is so close to reaching Ryan’s dream of breaking into American mainstream he is contemplating whether or not to stay in the band because of his band mate and leader Sang-Mun. Along the way of discovering what he really wants Ryan meets Devon, a young waitress at a local diner.

Warning: The Music Video/Trailer contains some spoilers for Rising Dragon 1&2

Beta-ed by greatodinsraven



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10133
Read Count: 1619
Published: 04/09/08
Updated: 16/12/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting so far. They've met, now I'm interested to know how they'll reconnect.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

what happens when a one night stand becomes somthing more? Lucas is a man of many talents and a dark past that could make or break him. He keeps his distance from others not allowing anyone to get close to him. That was until Bea appeared calling out to somthing inside of him. He wont stop till she is his armed with determination and a killer smile. Can her love save him?

Or will she run?

Betaed by:LOVEMBOTH



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 22575
Read Count: 56337
Published: 06/09/08
Updated: 27/11/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so hot! It'll be interesting to see how these two end up.

Author's Response: Read and find out.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 08/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nikko is funny. I liked the insight into Lucas's desire for Bea, but I would have like to have seen of Bea's desire.

Author's Response: I'm working on that one right now.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/09/08