Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Summary:

This is a story about a couple who wants to have a child. They will have to use a surrogate to have this baby. The woman they selected is a college graduate who wants to go to Law school. She sees this as a an excellent financial opportunity. She figures the couple gets the baby and she will get her Law degree, however, fate will effect all of their lives.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 39835
Read Count: 30967
Published: 20/10/08
Updated: 10/03/11


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 I have some explaining to do

WTF!! That was beyond crazy! He's lucky because I would have been to pissed to even listen to him at first. I would have needed a 24 hour cooling off period.

Let me start praying now that Jailynn, Jarred, and the babies are okay. It has to be bad for Jeffery to have had such a bad reaction to the news.



Author's Response: Love your comments I think most people would have needed 24 hours.

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Date: 22/07/09

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Will to live or will to die ?

Oh my stars!!!! They both have serious injuries!!!! This not good, not good at all. Just when things were looking up for these two, this just had to happen. Please this family make it!!

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Date: 06/08/09

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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Dawn Austin is a geologist, living her life in Vancouver until she's offered her dream job in Iceland only days before her 30th birthday. On the eve of her birthday,her body starts to change, and with the help of a new friend, she learns that she is a creature of myth; a Valkyrie.

Dawn is then introduced to a world she never knew existed; made up of creatures and places that she'd always thought were no more than fantasy. But her biggest challenge may be learning to live with what binds her to this world - the Elfen Lord, Hinrik. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 67135
Read Count: 8926
Published: 25/10/08
Updated: 24/08/09


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 - Midgard

I thought it was excellent. I love this story and can't wait for an update.

Are you going to do another Hinrik chapter so we can know what was going on in his mind?



Author's Response: Hey thanks girl! This chapter kicked my butt a little, but I rose above! LOL. To answer your question, yes, I do plan on showing what's going on in Hinrik's mind. I've been deliberately vague on his part, but we'll get a glimpse into his psyche soon!

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Date: 10/01/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - Clarity

Hot diggity damn! I can't believe he tricked her into marriage. That shit is crazy.

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Date: 08/04/09

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - Protection

I was just thinking about this story!! Dawn is going to explode on Hinrik when she sees him, and then he going to kiss her. At least that what my crazy mind is telling me.

It's going to be interesting to see what happens when Leelee see Luke's body. I'm wondering what she's going to do.

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Date: 26/08/09

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Summary:

Mob boss Martha Nichols runs Manhattan and Mob boss Travis Wall runs South Side Chicago.  When Travis decides that he wants to take over Manhattan a battle of the will soon ensues before the two even meet in person.  Once the two Dons finally meet in person the battle soon turns from protecting their territories to protecting their hearts.  Which Don will claim victory?

 

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 18833
Read Count: 2784
Published: 30/10/08
Updated: 21/05/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He is an arrogant jerk, and I can't wait until she knows him down a peg or two.

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Date: 11/01/09

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Summary:

Picture 

OLTL/General Hospital

Lorenzo Alcazar's been burned.

And the woman who did the burning just walked back into his life. Once again the Port Charles Police Department has fingered him as their prime suspect in the most notorious murders to hit Port Charles. And once again, he's forced to turn to Evangeline Williamson-the ruthless criminal defense attorney who played him for a fool and broke his heart in the process.

But when night falls on Port Charles, Lorenzo and Evangeline will give into their desires, reigniting a passion that that neither could forget but threatens to consume them both.

The Second Story in the Night Sins Series.

Banner by TokenBlackGirl



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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital, One Life to Live
Characters: Dara Jensen, Evangeline Williamson, Lainey Winters, Layla Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe, Crossover
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Night Sins
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 32491
Read Count: 16386
Published: 12/11/08
Updated: 27/03/09


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

I loved this chapter. Ric has my heart! He is very slick, but has Vange's trust. Loved when he called Talia a cunt, priceless moment.

Love that drama that is Lo and Vange, will these two just admit love already!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Sweet Pea. Ric has my heart too.  I've always loved him and he's fun to write.  Glad you're feeling Lo and Van too :) Thanks so much for reading.

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Date: 08/01/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

Wait, what was that at the end! Another mystery already!!! I don't care what anyone says, Ric is so damn sexy. He push me up against anything, as long as he takes care of business.

Author's Response: Hey Sweet Pea. I'm so with you, I love Ric too :) Thanks for the review!

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Date: 17/01/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

That damn Rick! That's about all I can say about him right now.

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Date: 03/02/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

Thanks for the update. I was thinking about this story the other day, hoping for an update. Lo is crazy, so why are people still messing with him. If I was Vange, I wouldn't completely trust him. He's still angry and out for revenge.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Sweet Pea. Yes, this has been shamefuly neglected. I"m trying to wrap it up soon, and all will be revealed :)

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Date: 19/02/09

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten

Damn. Was Lucky a good shot, or did Zander really get her. That was an awesome set-up!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

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Date: 31/03/09

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Summary:

Can two people fall in love after what is only suppose to be a One night stand? Nykia Walden and Antonio Bronson share a night that neither can forget. Was it only a one night stand or did these two share more than lust? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 32454
Read Count: 42583
Published: 17/11/08
Updated: 11/01/09


Title: Chapter 10: Mistakes

There is so much going on that I can't help but get attached to this story. I MUST find out what happens once she realizes that they are twins.

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Date: 23/12/08

Title: Chapter 11: Coming Clean

Wilson seems to be crazy, but at least his actions can bring these two craxy kids back together.

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Date: 24/12/08

Title: Chapter 12: The Right Man

I am so happy Tony tossed that skank to the side, how desperate!!!!

 

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Date: 27/12/08

Title: Chapter 13: The Right Man Part 2

What is he gonna say to Wilson! Is he gonna stake his claim on Nykia.

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Date: 29/12/08

Title: Chapter 14: Oh What A Night!

Well, he staked his claim. He's probably going to be so happy to hear about the baby. What the hell happened to Wilson?

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Date: 31/12/08

Title: Chapter 15: Miscommunication

All damn, how did he not notice her leaving. FREAKING MEN!!!!

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Date: 03/01/09

Title: Chapter 16: Friendly Advice

Nick seems like he means business. How the hell did he remember how her voice sounded?! Talk about stalker potential, LOL.

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Date: 05/01/09

Title: Chapter 17: The Proposal

All I have to say is, it's about time!!!!

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Date: 06/01/09

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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In an era filled with prejudice, racism, class divisions and societal norms enter Drake and Eliza – one born into wealth, one born to serve that wealth. Whilst growing up they shared a mutual respect for one another but years spent apart made their lives take its assumed direction. Could a return visit rekindle their friendship and something more?  

Banner:  Thanks to TokenBlackGirl for the awesome banner!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36040
Read Count: 56816
Published: 21/11/08
Updated: 14/01/09


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Not trouble, but destiny!!!!

Author's Response:

So you see it as Destiny....Sweet Pea

People have a way of mucking up destiny before it is reached...Thanks for the great review!

 

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Date: 21/12/08

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It's crazy how romance can quickly turn into heart ache. Add in Gloria's scheme, and this poor couple just seems doomed.

Author's Response:

theparty Merry Christmas!

Hey Sweet Pea!

That's life sometimes and its just that Drake isn't seeing the reality of their circumstances at the moment. You know me Sweet Pea...;)

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Date: 24/12/08

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay, I'm VERY curious about Jonathan's lost love and their love child.

Author's Response:

Happy New Year Sweet!

I believe that you are capable of writing that story for me...don't you believe so...LOL!!! :)

 

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Date: 01/01/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Happy New Year! And I could never do the Jonathan story justice like I know you can (hint! hint!)!!!!

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Date: 03/01/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

They finally really get together and he has to leave! Life back then was so unfair for interracial couples. Thank goodness I live in this century.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Thank goodness we all live in this century. There is still some ways to go but at least I don't believe there is a law that outrightly bans such relationships. Thanks for the great review!

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Date: 08/01/09

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

The ending felt a little rushed, but I'm such a sucker for this story that it didn't bother me. I'm glad that they were able to spend the rest of their lives together.

I was SO HAPPY when Eliza beat Gloria up. She deserved EVERY bruise!!!! 



Author's Response: You got me Sweetpea...I did rush it and it was just because I wanted to add that epilogue...should have just left the ship sequence that I had originally written. I also felt committed to letting this be my last chapter. Gloria did deserve every bruise. I am too a sucker for happy endings...Thanks for still giving me such an awesome review! :)

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Date: 15/01/09