Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary: Falling in love isn't supposed to be torture. Goodbyes aren't supposed to tear two people in half. But neither of these statements are true when it comes to Rayne and Adam.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6715
Read Count: 23943
Published: 23/01/09
Updated: 10/03/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She's doing the right thing. She can't wait around for him forever while life passes her by.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad he realizes that he needs to do something big to get Rayne to stay in his life, and it better be GOOD!!!

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Date: 03/03/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Rayne finally got her man!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 11/03/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm not into Harrison Ford, but damn he looks good in that pic!!!!

Now to the story.........

You are a tease! I was all ready for Adam to make his move, and then you cut it off. That's just cruel. 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary: With a million things going on in your world, it's easy to drift away from each other sometimes. Alex is about to find out it's just as easy to drift back to Matthew.

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2234
Read Count: 2617
Published: 23/01/09
Updated: 23/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Bed

The thoughts you have while shopping. I laughed at the fact that she spoke up about her feelings right there. My weak self would have waited until we got home, giving him a chance to escape, while I just got angrier.

Could you add more spacing to the next chapter. Spacing between paragraphs makes it easier to read.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

After ending her relationship with John, and her friends and family all with other plans, Evangeline believes she'll learn what the lonely do at Christmas.  However, much to her surprise, an old friend has other ideas.Evangeline and Kevin?



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Tis The Season Holiday Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1616
Read Count: 2594
Published: 24/01/09
Updated: 24/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was a little disappointed that they never gave Vange and Kevin a chance as a couple. This story gave me an inside view of what could have been.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/01/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary: This story was first written in 2006 when OLTL's PTB had one of their few good ideas and began to transition Evangeline into Todd Manning's world.  This is my take on how that might have happened.

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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2869
Read Count: 2852
Published: 24/01/09
Updated: 24/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a refreshing look at the triangle that was Todd/Vange/Chris. I liked that she allowed her self a couple of moments of weakness, but in the end she took back control of her life. That was the Vange I remembered and loved.

Author's Response: Thank you.  OLTL had a winner in the character but for whatever reason fail to keep the character and the actress. 

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Date: 24/01/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Devon did not know which was worst, the glare of the twenty-nine candles on her birthday cake or the sparkle of the two and a half carat engagement ring on her baby sister’s finger. However, as she closed her eyes to make a wish and blow out those candles, the real blow was the realization that in another year she was turning the big 3 0 and had yet to even have a genuine relationship.

Turning thirty was one thing, but turning into a young old maid was another…

Therefore, she blew out her candles and made a wish-a pact-with herself.  She had one year to today’s date to find a man to fall in love with and help her blow out that extra candle.  The challenge would be just that sweet and effortless as the cake she was cutting right now.

If only she knew, love is never that simple…

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1111
Read Count: 2834
Published: 27/01/09
Updated: 27/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Make a Wish

OMG! Are you following me around and getting story ideas! LOL!!! I'm 3 years from the big 3-0 and I can't get it off my mind. It doesn't help that most of my friends are married, married with kids, or just have kids.

Author's Response:

Lmao, I love your reveiws, im not going to lie i start to look for them when i post here. because they make me smile. thank you so much for that. but i promise im not a stocker. its just my brother said something that made me think, what if? ya know. so why not create someone whos got the guts to shut it down.  so please stay tune, keep telling me what you think. thanks again for the reveiw. and when i write im gonna be thinkin of you also. ;o) - dani

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/01/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary: Have you ever laid awake listening to rain hit your window and wondered what if the rain brought more than water down?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: Rain
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 564
Read Count: 3313
Published: 29/01/09
Updated: 29/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

We all have that one person that makes us open ourselves up to new possibilities.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/01/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary: camera Pictures don't just capture moments, they capture the essence of your heart.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 826
Read Count: 2228
Published: 29/01/09
Updated: 29/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Frame

That was so sweet. I like to sit back and go through old photo albums a the time. Remembering my past always helps me to continue forward.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/01/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary: Haven Marie only wants one thing after a night of clubbing: going home.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2810
Read Count: 2643
Published: 31/01/09
Updated: 31/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was sweet.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/02/09

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Spencer Edwards is a happy bachelor. He’s got a great job, lives in a great penthouse, and thanks to his good genetics, a fair amount of luck where the ladies were concerned. Family was the furthest thing from his mind, but apparently, life had other plans.

 

His world is turned upside down when his older sister and brother-in-law die suddenly, leaving their two young children in his care. Spencer can barely take care of himself, and he’s not so sure he should be placed in charge of anyone else.

 

But a light appears at the end of the tunnel when spirited, no-nonsense live-in Nanny Reese Talbot enters their lives. Through ups and downs and self-discovery, Spencer learns just what it takes to be a Family Man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 35037
Read Count: 11080
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 07/08/09


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Loved their first interaction with each other. She is sassy, not trashy and that's what he needs right now.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

The interviews were hilarious!!!!

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Date: 08/02/09

Title: Chapter 6: V

You just to had to write this to make me cry didn't you. The ending just so heart-breaking. Death is never easy to deal with!! I hope he comes to his senses and doesn't let Reese go. Him and the children need her now more than ever.

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Date: 08/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Sienna has always felt alone in life, but an unexpected message from beyond the grave will change everything she holds true.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1361
Read Count: 1089
Published: 08/02/09
Updated: 08/02/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'm a little confused. Her moms adopted her?

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/02/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

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A Boy Meets World, Shawn and Angela sequel which takes place two months after “I Do Love You”.  Upon discovering that his daughter is in love with her new white boy friend, Angela’s father, Master Sergeant Alvin Moore, meets Shawn for the first time.  However, the good impression Shawn makes doesn't last long. Consequently, Angela and Shawn learn that while breaking up may be hard, staying together is even harder to do.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Made For Each Other
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60536
Read Count: 105903
Published: 08/02/09
Updated: 17/02/09


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Finally our young couple is back together.

Author's Response:

Hah!  Yes, they managed to stay together and even grow a little, I hope.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.   

 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/02/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 135]
Summary:

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Their love affair was never destined to go on for a lifetime - his father made sure of that outcome. Pregnant and alone Celia found comfort in the arms of Joseph who became a husband to her and a father to Joshua...the only man she could place her faith and trust.

Circumstances change and she had to seek out the one man that still had a part of her soul. How would things play out and how would it affect those around them?

Dedicated to: Megumi, Brown_Mocha, Sweet Pea and Robin



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 59634
Read Count: 76880
Published: 09/02/09
Updated: 04/06/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!

I can't wait to see what the future holds for these two!!!



Author's Response:

Sweet,

Thanks for the enthusiam! I always say that its readers like you guys that give authors the will to write their next story! Thanks once again for the great review! 

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/02/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This story makes me so giddy!!!! I felt his lips on me when he kissed Celia. That had to take all of her strenght to tell him not to kiss her.

Author's Response:

Sweet Pea...Hey!

Sweet Pea he didn't kiss her...as yet...;) I hope that I can live up to your feeling of being kissed when it actually happens...LOL!!!! It did take a lot out of her but for now her mind is focussed on her life as it is now...but for how long...;) Sweet thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/02/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Reflections

It amazes me how outgoing and caring Jonathan is, yet he let the love his life be thrown out on the streets. Now, he's stuck in a loveless marriage and he doesn't know he has a son.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

There is a reason why Jonathan can this way...daddy Campbell is not around...I believe I can explain it...I hope...LOL!!! Yes he is stuck because he chooses to be but like I said before it will all be explained in my updates so stay tuned...;) Thanks so much for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I love how Celia politely told Amy she wasn't doing anything for her. It was a breaking you down in a nice way type of thing.

I can't wait for these two to admit their feelings, but I hope the news of  Joshua doesn't hurt them.



Author's Response:

Sweet Pea...I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story.

A polite way of saying...go to hell...your husband is on my side and there is nothing you can do about it...:)

The feelings they have for each other has always been there. It's just that their lives...so different. If you were married wouldn't you be afraid to complicate your life any further? Thats the question Celia asks herself. As for Joshua again hmmm...

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Date: 11/03/09

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Oh my stars, both Mr. Campbell and Joseph are coming home tomorrow!?! DRAMA! And Lydia's child might be Joseph's! I knew something more was going on there, but I didn't expect that one.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Good to give the readers a little curve ball...keep things interesting!Laughing Thanks so much for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/05/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I can not wait to for Jonathan's dad to make a appearance. I want to see if Jonathan will make a stand this time.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet Pea,

Yeah Jonathan's father will definitely make an appearance. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I knew that crazy Amy put something in his drink. I'm glad he's sending her away.

Is Jonathan about to meet his son for the first time?? I can't imagine him being very angry. It seems like he'll be more upset and disappointed in himself. Besides, I thought he knew about Joshua.



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet Pea,

Do you believe Amy will go away that easily...LOL!!!

I can say that you do know our Jonathan very well but as for the other questions stay tune for the next update! Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/04/09

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Is Joseph finally home? Just when I finally think Jonathan and Celia are going to be togther, something crazy happens. At least Amy got what she deserved.

Author's Response: Sweet Pea, I wouldnt put a cliffhanger in this story and make Joseph magically appear...Laughing So its not going to be all that crazy. Amy deserved all of it...Wink Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

What a sweet loving couple. I don't care what anyone says, I love them together.

Although I feel sorry for Celia's husband, he married her knowing she probably loved someone else. Afterall, her arm baby belongs to another man.

I'm not suprised that Jonatha's trying to get Celia to let him care for her and their child. But I have to admit that I'm not sure what she'll do. She loves Jonathan, but she feels a sense of responsibility to Joseph. 



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

You hit the nail on the head...Joseph married her knowing that she loved someone else and the baby belonged to that person. Celia respects that Joseph was there for her during that critical time in her life but we all know that her heart belongs to Jonathan. Which would you choose...love or loyalty? maybe I should give my readers this question in an upcoming update...maybe...LOL!!!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed
Date: 08/04/09