Penname: Sweet Pea [Contact]

Real name: Angela

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: Just a lady with a healthy fanfic obsession.


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CELIA by chocolate470
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 135]
Summary:

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Their love affair was never destined to go on for a lifetime - his father made sure of that outcome. Pregnant and alone Celia found comfort in the arms of Joseph who became a husband to her and a father to Joshua...the only man she could place her faith and trust.

Circumstances change and she had to seek out the one man that still had a part of her soul. How would things play out and how would it affect those around them?

Dedicated to: Megumi, Brown_Mocha, Sweet Pea and Robin



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 59634
Read Count: 76881
Published: 09/02/09
Updated: 04/06/09

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Go old Ben, always seeing what others make a note to ignore. Her sister obviously wants her husband for herself.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Its all due to Drake's sudden escape from the Bay move. Addison is wrapped up in his own world not as tight as the others. Lydia feels like she has to defend Joseph because frankly he is better catch than her own man...LOL!! Thanks so much for the great review!

 

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Date: 18/04/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Celia is right not to trust that Amy. She may be immature, but she is still a woman, and can read the signs men give off when they desire another woman.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Women take all the clues and try to fit them together especially when something has changed in a relationship. We are just wired differently better than some men...LOL!!! Thanks for the awesome review!

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Date: 21/04/09
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

That Amy is a beast!!!! Beatrice better do the right thing and tell Jonathan, but I seriously doubt that she will.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Thanks for the great review! Like I told another reviewer its very hard for Beatrice to do this because doing so has so many consequences like her not being able to work at another employer for speaking out things that were said in confidence....especially if Amy finds out that she was the one that did it.

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Date: 28/04/09
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Sarah is one cold-hearted something, but I dislike Amy more at this point. Something tells me that in the end, Sarah will be my new target of extreme dislike.

Looks like Celia will not need to make a decision. Joseph's desires seem to be shifting elsewhere.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Sweet,

Amy got the prize when she thought Celia was permanently dealt with. Usually these emotional battles were between the women because the men had all the power in those days.

Well Celia doesn't know what's going on at sea and you know some men...Wink

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Date: 05/05/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I feel no remorse for Amy, she's where she needs to be. Crazy heffa.

 

I knew Joseph was going to have his own side romance. I don't approve of cheating, but love is love.



Author's Response:

Hey Sweet,

Thanks for the awesome review! Yeah I had to give a glimpse live from the jail cell courtesy of Sara...;)

I'll give you a little history. Back then when the men went off to mahogany camp or the sea women knew what they did and what happened was that they ended up having their own "side romance" as you say ala Sonia. Victorian times you married for wealth and political gains and had affairs. Of course if I was writing about modern times I wouldn't necesarily go this route because I don't approve of cheating either maybe in the case of Todd and Evangeline...;)

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Date: 28/05/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Bravo!!!  I loved this story and am sad to see it come to an end.

Author's Response:

Hey Sweet Pea,

Where are the tears? LOL!!! I hope I have enough stories in my brain to impress you guys. As always thanks for reading!

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Date: 05/06/09
A Sweeter First by Realstone
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Sometimes a couple has to start over to stay together and sometimes the almost last time is Sweeter than the very First.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 309
Read Count: 1025
Published: 12/02/09
Updated: 12/02/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice. That kiss had to be something for her to left go of the thought of him cheating.

Author's Response: Maybe he didn't cheat, maybe he read it in a book, or he rented a video. 

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Date: 13/02/09
I've Seen That Hair Before by Realstone
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

This story is based on Marvel characters Storm and Logan.  Hopefully a reasonable version of what could have happened given Logan's long life.   Thank you to Ashley D. and Farretta for an excellent job as beta. Ashley's suggestions for the main character’s name saved me a lot of fruitless research.

 



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Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3616
Read Count: 1420
Published: 12/02/09
Updated: 12/02/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this couple. I admit it, I'm a RoLo fan.

Author's Response: Me too.  After finishing this story I rewatched the xmen cartoon episodes One Man's Worth this week.  A 2 parter where they were married in an alternate universe.

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Date: 13/02/09
That Other Woman by TokenBlackGirl
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

She just wanted to be the woman he couldn’t leave behind.


 


 


A Supernatural Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: Devils and Dust
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1457
Read Count: 4233
Published: 13/02/09
Updated: 13/02/09

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Title: Chapter 1: That Other Woman

Beautiful! What crazed woman would say no to Dean?! Not me!

Author's Response:

*shrugs* Got me. LOLOLOL

Thanks so much for reading Sweet Pea!

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Date: 13/02/09
Lesson Learned by BleedingPen
Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

 

100 First Kisses Challenge  

He had long ago accepted he was doomed to be the "Just Friends" guy. 

It didn't stop him from wishing she'd see him.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3336
Read Count: 6626
Published: 13/02/09
Updated: 13/02/09

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Title: Chapter 2: Lesson Learned

I don't know many people who can pull of an ending that is both sad and happy, but you did just that.

 

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Date: 13/02/09
Title: Chapter 2: Lesson Learned

I don't know many people who can pull of an ending that is both sad and happy, but you did just that.

 



Author's Response: Thank you! I was going to leave it much more depressing but I'm glad it's more liked coming out this way. =]

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Date: 13/02/09
A Chance Meeting by AiMiY 0510
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: "Who would've thought that id meet the love of my life in a coffee shop?"

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Categories: Primetime Television, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 844
Read Count: 1171
Published: 16/02/09
Updated: 16/02/09

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That had to be embarassing! But then, I'd rather fall on a hottie than a beast any day.

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Date: 17/02/09
Hypothetically, Of Course by Kokey
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Lance comes back to NYC to teach at one of the most elite private schools in the country, and in the middle of his second semester, in walks this new student with more brains than Einstein, a fast tongue - and his green eyes. You can never avoid the past. Ever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 16935
Read Count: 6223
Published: 18/02/09
Updated: 26/06/09

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Life's Assessment

Well that's one way to find out you have a kid. If his fist slamming is any indication, he is going to track her down and try to do some danger.

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Date: 20/02/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Pretty Girl Does as Pretty Girl Wants

She is a very bright girl, and I wouldn't be surprised at all if she really has figured out that he's her dad.

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Date: 21/02/09
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

I was not expecting their break-up to go that way. I respect that he realized that he wasn't ready for a real relationship, but he could have told her before he cheated on her.

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Date: 04/03/09
The Art of the Steal by Reese
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89885
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Realy good start. The sexual tension between the two is mind-blowing.

Author's Response:

Glad you're liking the story so far.  Ooh, goody.  I was hoping the tension between the two was palable.  Whatever their mouths may be saying, they're hot for each other.  lol

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

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Date: 23/02/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

I was wondering how long Collista was going to hold off on working for him. The attration between these two is off the charts, even Iris picked up on it.

Author's Response:

Sweet Pea, Collista might not have been as quick to work for him had he not shown up on her door.  I think that further re-enforced the little truce they had going from earlier.

I'm glad the sexiness and angst came through.  And that Iris is a downy one, isn't she?  Thank goodness because Collista was so clueless on the uptake this time.

Thanks for reviewing.

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Date: 25/02/09
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

I'm still stuck on the fact that she walked in on him naked. It took some real strenght not to either attack him, or running away.

Author's Response:

Lol!  As Collista will demonstrate basically all through the story, she's a very strong-willed chick.  lol

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

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Date: 26/02/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Now that took restraint. I mean they were a minute away from sealing the deal, and he damn sense of right and wrong juat had to kick in.


Author's Response:

LMAO!  Okay, I see I have another irate reader.  I'm sorry, and as Bell said, 'What else could I do?'  I don't think we'd like him so much if he wasn't the man he is.  But yeah, I know what you mean.  I want them together, too.

Thanks for reviewing.

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Date: 02/03/09
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

That was a hot scene and the fact that they didn't have actual intercourse makes me wonder what it's going to be like when they finally sleep together.

Author's Response:

I know!   It's gonna be on once they really take that step; go for the gold; make that plunge...okay, you get the drift.  LOL!

Thanks for reviewing.  

 

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Date: 30/03/09
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

She finally got her man, and now all hell is about to break loose. Ain't that a bitch!!!!

Author's Response:

I couldn't have said it any better myself.  LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

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Date: 30/04/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

As much as I like this couple, I find Collista to be very selfish. This man could lose his job, as well as respect in the collegiatic community, just by being with her. No matter what she is his student and that complicates things. If she really cared about him, she would have at least attempted to put a hold on the physical aspect of their relationship until after the semester was over.

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Date: 03/05/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen

Now that a hit first think later type of man. Aiden didn't even give Rocky a chance, he just took him out as soon as the door was opened.

Author's Response:

I love that about Aidan.  He's so bookish that he doesn't seem like the type.  I think Collista brings the He-Man out in him.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.

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Date: 13/09/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

These two have embarked on a whole of craziness. They are already having to deal with people hitting on them and not really being able to say "Stay away from man/girl." I know Aiden wanted to knock Simon out, but what can he really do. It's going to be quite interesting to see how they handle the social event that coming up. Who will be jealous, and who will almost blow their cover.

Author's Response:

Yes, Aidan is already getting an early taste of what to expect when conducting a secret love affair.  And that's just one aspect.  Now that their relationship is on firmer ground, it's going to be interesting seeing just what's in store next for Collista and Aidan.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

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Date: 08/08/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Nine

And the drama begins. That a horrible way to find out he was taking another woman.

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Date: 13/08/09