Please do more. The story had me fro the start. Thank you so much for sharing.
Author's Response:
Okay-doky! Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:25 am
yasssssssssss so much more please :D
Author's Response:
Lol.... thanks!
Reviewer: Alphabet_Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:25 am
I like it and it is really good. You should definitely do more, a lot more lol. I cannot wait, please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Sandee Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:22 am
Moar please moar
Author's Response:
Thanks
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:04 am
Me likey!! More please.
Author's Response:
All right then!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:03 am
yeah you need to finish this or it may get ugly. I wanna know how his family is gonna react and how hes gonna handle it.
Author's Response:
Don't like ugly. Will get on it.
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:03 am
yes please do more
Author's Response:
Okay!
Reviewer: sdamien Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 01:43 am
YES!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: Fanny Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 01:29 am
yes you should do more!
Author's Response:
Okay then. Coming right up!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 01:19 am
please, please, please do more!
yes, there are errors, but it barely detracts from the expertise you've drawn this story with. so well done! the characters are well-rounded even in such a short space.
brava!
Author's Response:
I should probably seek a beta for this. Thank you titmouse!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 12:55 am
Wonderful, please write more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 12:38 am
OMG, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE DO MORE!!! I am hooked and if you leave it like that, I will go crazy! Please, I'm loving it!
Author's Response:
Please don't go crazy. LOL!
Reviewer: Evrok9807 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 12:09 am
That was very well done. I think if you have more story to tell you should. I would enjoy either more backstory or a continuation from this point.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Will see what I can do.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2011 10:55 pm
yesssssssss, I want more. I am really liking this story.
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks
Reviewer: ladeesse Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2011 10:55 pm
please do continue
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: DivineFindings Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2011 10:54 pm
You simply cannot leave it like this. I have so many questions about that may happen! Please continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Many have expressed the same sentiment.
Reviewer: IAMeEAP Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2011 10:48 pm
yes you should do more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2011 10:36 pm
I reaallllllly want to know how Yuki reacts to finding out Shouda is his son and what does that mean for Sara and Yuki's relationship! It was really great!
Author's Response:
Thank you. We'll see how it goes.
Reviewer: Kristin Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2011 10:12 pm