What is with all the racists assholes? Are we still in the 1950s or something? This old and narrow-minded thinking is sickening. I'm sure that if Andrew doesn't get out of there and soon that she is going to go off in every language she knows. And I wouldn't blame her one bit.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2015 06:43 pm
I didn't know that saying "but its really the same cliche story as always." is classified as being rude. It was just a critique/review. When I said no offence I meant it because I was not trying to offend you as a writer or to disrespect your story. I totally understand that some people are very touchy when it comes to their art and work. But when you also give a honest opinion about it, they get really defensive and say that you are offending them or being rude. Being rude is saying, "I think your story is shit. or you are a horrible writer" which is definitely not the case, because the story is fine and I don't think that you are a bad writer at all. I always respect people who put affords in to their work. I just wanted to pointed out that In my opinion the that the story is turning a little in to a cliche story and give my honest review about it. If that is not the case then my bad and I apologize. But its not like I was going on about it to offend anyone or to hurt anyone's feelings. You clearly had interpret it in a negative way which was not the intention.
Author's Response:
First of all, you don't have to call my story shit to be classified as rude. The way you critique and give your honest opinion without calling it "cliche". Second, I didn't get defensive, I chose to tell you how I felt in a polite way, rather than telling you to "go fuck yourself" or "if it's cliché then don't read it". I didn't interpret anything in a negative way, you didn't really say anything positive. Even if your review was to help and encourage me to make the story in a different direction, you didn't do any of that. You just rambled off what you thought would happen, which is rude no matter what you say. I accept your half apology though, thanks girl! 👏👏👏
Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2015 09:11 pm
I get the feeling that Felicia will be just the motivation that Andrew needs to finally stand up to these idiots. If for no other reason than to stand up for Felicia.
I'm excited for that!
(On another note, I see that you are still being forced to deal with some of the know-it-alls on this site. Just remember that many of us LOVE this story and what you are trying to do by writing it. Personally, this story feels like a breath of fresh air. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter).
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I really appreciate the love! I'm so excited to write the next chapter for you guys.
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2015 02:41 pm
Love the story, Andrew in this chapter was disappointing :-(
Great job
Author's Response:
Andrew needs to shape up. :) Thanks for reading and enjoying.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2015 03:05 am
Andrew gets a side eye for this chapter. He was so protective of her with his assistant but pretty much sat on his hunches while this old pervert called her a whore. Only a sex buddy and he condoned that crap b/c he didn't say anything. He wouldn't of had to be forceful but say I am most definitely attracted to her but for more than the possibilities in the bedroom though we are in the beginning stages right now. Now if she was to go anywhere with him, she will only be looked at like she is only a diversion before he settles down with the right one. He just made his life that much harder and now she runs into assholy and bitchy after a brief interlude with madame bitchy. She is going to leave Andrew in the dust and keep it moving. When does she get her degree. She was in her last year so she shouldn't have that many credits to complete and graduate. Let her graduate and find a good job away from Andrew and his ilk.
Author's Response:
Yep, Andrew isn't really a saint when it comes to money and business. But we'll see what happens in the next chapters.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 07 2015 05:14 pm
No offence, but its really the same cliche story as always. The black man is always the evil one. And then there is the crazy woman who wants to have the main character, in this case Andrew at any cost. She is spoiled and daddy's little girl. and later on will turn in to a psycho who won't take no for an answer and will try to make the main girl, in this case Felicia's life in to a living hell.
As for Andrew, he is either naive or plain stupid. The people around them are racists and try to manipulate them in doing what they want and he lets them. His publicist Robert is not a good friend if he is always overstepping his boundaries and trying to convince Andrew in doing things he clearly doesn't want to. Andrew clearly also doesn't have any morals. Like how desperate is he to merge his hotel chains with Shanna's father? The man is obviously a racist and its also obvious that he would want for Andrew to marry his daughter first. Business is business, but its clear that these people has other agenda's and are to concern about his personal life. Any sane man would not want to associate himself with these type of people. Felicia is better of without Andrew. He is weak and knows nothing about self respect and morals. After this event, she should stay clear of him and these people he interact with.
Author's Response:
I love how you jump to conclusions if how the story is going to turn out, I applaud the fact that you said "no offense" but offended me anyway. I respect anyone's opinion on my stories, but you were slightly rude. I want to say the story isn't cliché at all, but I can't just say how the story turns out. The story just started out, not even ten chapters in, and you just "know" how it's going to end. Thanks for your review anyway, but let's not be rude.
Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2015 04:14 pm
Love the story development but there's timeline inconsistencies. Felicia got reunited with her son's father 2 years in college, yet she said to Andrew she had her son in the middle of her senior year in college. Then when would she have time to go to Italy? Before she got preggers? It is quite vague reference just to emphasize her linguistic skills. Hope you will shed more light on this and correct the timeline. Also how can she be allowed to leave her shift just to go on a date with a patron, seems like her boss is pimping her.
But aside from these inconsistencies, I like how it is developing.
Author's Response:
Sorry about that, I'll get to that. Thanks for enjoying!
Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2015 02:36 pm
Why does Andrew want to do business with that asshole? Shane is racist and sex offender!. Felicia why would you turn an opportunity to have a career that you be proud of? Being a waitress is legit but that side business is shady not something that your son would proyd of when he understands what you did. Andrew please save her from Robert and Honna. Glad to see that see she finished her degree. Why hasn't gotten herself a job using her education ?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 07 2015 11:32 am
Is Andrew slow or what? Y would he let others disrespect Felicia...not cool
Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 07 2015 10:45 am