Awwwww, I hate that the kids are involed
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 07 2015 12:03 am
Saul, please do explain, cause I can't wait to hear the bullshit that pours outta that piehole. I really can't.
You are on fiyah, my dear.
Author's Response:
:::curtsies::: Thank ya, kindly.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2015 12:44 pm
Giiiiiiirl, this is version 6000 and it is everything! It's so much better and it actually fills a lot of the gaps that were in the previous version.
Can't wait to see where this goes!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2015 08:28 am
Me likey this version better.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2015 12:52 am
Well S-H-I-T just hit the fan. Wow, just wow. Sorry about your story being deleted from the hard drive and on valentchamber but I must say your muse came out swinging in these first 2 chapters that I am hooked and will be checking daily for any and all updates.
Well Saul, you reap what you sow. I love the fact that he has to not only face his wife after this betrayal but also his children and watch the disillusionment in their eyes about their father and that can be the worst for any parent who cares about their children to see. Does Saul really think he can SAY anything that will improve this situation. That he can TALK his way out of this. Seriously Saul, saying sorry isn't going to cut it. As the infamous line by Halle Berry " Love, should've brought your ass home". I hope in this story line they still get a divorce because at this time, I don't feel he is sorry. If he was, he would've told her what happened after the first time instead he was NEVER going to say anything.
Can I say I loved how Lynne gave him the hands and how she shut Alicia down quick. Oooohhhh Saul, you just lost a real woman for a thot. "shakes head while sticking tongue out saying oooooooo, you in trouble".
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 20 2015 12:47 am
Well S-H-I-T just hit the fan. Wow, just wow. Sorry about your story being deleted from the hard drive and on valentchamber but I must say your muse came out swinging in these first 2 chapters that I am hooked and will be checking daily for any and all updates.
Well Saul, you reap what you sow. I love the fact that he has to not only face his wife after this betrayal but also his children and watch the disillusionment in their eyes about their father and that can be the worst for any parent who cares about their children to see. Does Saul really think he can SAY anything that will improve this situation. That he can TALK his way out of this. Seriously Saul, saying sorry isn't going to cut it. As the infamous line by Halle Berry " Love, should've brought your ass home". I hope in this story line they still get a divorce because at this time, I don't feel he is sorry. If he was, he would've told her what happened after the first time instead he was NEVER going to say anything.
Can I say I loved how Lynne gave him the hands and how she shut Alicia down quick. Oooohhhh Saul, you just lost a real woman for a thot. "shakes head while sticking tongue out saying oooooooo, you in trouble".
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 20 2015 12:47 am
Damn, I am glad that the kids will know what Saul did this time around. Saul there is no good explanation for cheating!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2015 12:31 am