Reviews For Breathe (revised)
Title: Wounded

Love Aunt Ernie. She's got the right idea. Saul hurt his whole family, the idjit. He's got a lot of ass kissing to do for a whole bunch of people. And that strange is irrelvant, she's not even worth the bother. Saul needs to handle that, he brought the trick into Lynn's life, that's on him. Lynn best get tested, these days, cheating is not the worst thing that can happen. Saul is a fool and his tallywacker needs to be cut off. FOOL

Good read, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 12:20 pm

Title: Wounded

Love Dell and Erni!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 11:19 am

Title: Wounded

Love  Ernestine! ! Camille is taking care of business , I do wanted her to call that disease spreading ho and cuss her ass out!!  Poor Mal was devastated. Where did SS disappear to?  He had better not be with that ho Alicia!  This version is on fire!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2015 10:12 pm

Title: Wounded

Amazingly, some women (young and old) really do believe that 'as long as he comes home' or 'as long as he brings his check home' I can accept his cheating.  I have even heard 'well sometimes you have to just accept that a man is gonna be a man'--oh hell no you don't!  I hope Della don't take this type of nonsense to Lynne. 

The trust is gone and she will never get those images the other woman implanted into her mind, but they will fade.  

Read this in a book once:  man tells wife it was a accident when caught cheating. The writer suggested asking the husband if it was an accident that you both wound up naked, was it an accident that she fell in the bed with her legs open, was it an accident when your penis slid into her vagina--several times?  

Lynne did the right thing and he needed to go, so she can think.  

Love your new revision.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2015 09:59 pm

Title: Wounded

Amazingly, some women (young and old) really do believe that 'as long as he comes home' or 'as long as he brings his check home' I can accept his cheating.  I have even heard 'well sometimes you have to just accept that a man is gonna be a man'--oh hell no you don't!  I hope Della don't take this type of nonsense to Lynne. 

The trust is gone and she will never get those images the other woman implanted into her mind, but they will fade.  

Read this in a book once:  man tells wife it was a accident when caught cheating. The writer suggested asking the husband if it was an accident that you both wound up naked, was it an accident that she fell in the bed with her legs open, was it an accident when your penis slid into her vagina--several times?  

Lynne did the right thing and he needed to go, so she can think.  

Love your new revision.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2015 09:58 pm

Title: Wounded

Amazingly, some women (young and old) really do believe that 'as long as he comes home' or 'as long as he brings his check home' I can accept his cheating.  I have even heard 'well sometimes you have to just accept that a man is gonna be a man'--oh hell no you don't!  I hope Della don't take this type of nonsense to Lynne. 

The trust is gone and she will never get those images the other woman implanted into her mind, but they will fade.  

Read this in a book once:  man tells wife it was a accident when caught cheating. The writer suggested asking the husband if it was an accident that you both wound up naked, was it an accident that she fell in the bed with her legs open, was it an accident when your penis slid into her vagina--several times?  

Lynne did the right thing and he needed to go, so she can think.  

Love your new revision.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2015 09:58 pm



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