Reviews For Breathe (revised)
Submit a Review
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

Yessss

 Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 01:23 am
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

Now that was awesome!!!!! That poor child musta bumped her head.....

 Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 11:58 pm
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

Go girl! This is the first story in a long time that had a woman stand up and dishout some punishment....

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 02:05 am
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

Go Lynne!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 10:16 pm
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

This is so good do not let them get back together let her go on with her life and bump the husband

 Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 02:08 pm
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

Alicia is just too bold and she is the one crazy.  Well, can't say Lynne didn't warn her--poke the bear and next time she is going to get swatted hard.  

Lynne really should get tested for any STDs and HIV--I think this will make it easier for her to move on.

I wish this had been longer.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 04:35 am
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

YASSSSSSSSSSS. Lynne - still waters run deep - with a right hook. YASSSSSSSSSSSS!

You do know that Lynne could shoot yo ass, drag you across the threshold and call 911, having just shot an intruder. Stoopid, stoopid git. Alicia is a twit.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 03:44 am
Title: Don't Poke the Bear

Alicia needs a beat down!!!   Lynne hit her with a left hook, damn! So Alicia will still try to play games, I want her tarred and feathered!



Author's Response:

Done!  LOL, just kidding, a tarring and feathering would be an interesting plot twist, though.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 03:43 am


Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.