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Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

He wants his wife back but pokes her, please...Love the chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And thanks for reading.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 02:16 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

Can't wait to see how this plays out.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 10:36 pm
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

i was holding out hope for Saul. that he would at least to make things right but then he went and did this...! hell no. Go Malcolm! Go Malcolm!

thanks for update!



Author's Response:

Don't lose hope.  He might turn himself around...maybe.  ;-)

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 12:46 pm
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

Get yo man lynnnneeee!! Love it!

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 09:20 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

Saul, Who?

Bring on Malcolm.



Author's Response:

HA!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 08:59 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

Loving this story and Malcolm was just too cute--more background on him, please.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 07:10 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

good start



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

 Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 05:35 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

How could Lynn trust Saul again? Instead of seeking inner calm and reflection, he fucked that bitch without a condom and was hard as granite! I hope Lynn never takes him back; once a cheater, always a cheater. If not in reality, in dreams, looks toward other women or thoughts of other women. 

Lynn needs to be happy with someone new and trustworthy.

 Reviewer: Katt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 03:50 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

I am still wrapping my head  around Saul supposedly hate fucking Alicia, What message is Saul sending Alicia as the ho got off on it? Saul you disgust me!

 



Author's Response:

Guuuurrll, you be goin' IN on Saul, LOL.  I love it!  I knew he was going to do this.  I've known it for a couple of days, but even KNOWING that I was like, Saul you's a durrty rooster.  Of COURSE Alicia got off on it, she thinks that because Saul has sex with her it means he loves even though he's told her repeatedly that's not the case.  She believes her value is between her legs, that's the reason she's used it to advance in her career.  She has no self esteem.  It's not low, it's non-existent.  Couple that with being bat shit cray cray and it's a volatile combination.  She's going to make another appearance, but her stupidity is going to be her downfall.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 03:37 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

Malcolm is fine as hell!!  Lynene deserves that fine man.  Saul you doesn't deserve love of a good woman or your chilren. Sex with a ho and no protection, stupid as hell! Did Lynne ever get tested?   I really hate Saul!!



Author's Response:

Musey is telling me that she did.  She just didn't need me to write about it since she got the all clear.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 03:21 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

Eric Winter...muy caliente!!! Lucky Lynne...



Author's Response:

Ain't he delicious?

 Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 02:37 am
Title: Out With the Old, In With the New

Ssul is disgusting and clearly learned nothing from his "mistakes" with Alicia. The dumb man should take responsibility for his marriage failing and do better. Sexing the mistress even in anger isn't doing better. But Malcolm likes Lynne. Cute!

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 02:36 am


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