love the interaction between the two.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: April 03 2015 01:56 am
I'm really enjoying your story. The first version was nice, but I think this one is more polished and the plot and pacing are good. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for reading it.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 11:25 am
Alicia need to check on Paul--he is probably with someone now--I doubt he could last 6 months alone.
Enjoying these two being shy, but interested.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 05:27 am
See Saul, you brought that crazy ho into Lynne's world. All you could think about was gettin it in. No thought to what disease you could bring to Lynne, no thought of the cesspool you were dipping "little saul" in, no thought to that ho's mental instablilty, 'cause this couldn't be the first time homegirl has channeled "fatal attraction". Whatever happens is on your triflin' ass.
Malcolm really has it for Lynne and she's starting to feel him. Again I say, Saul who?
Author's Response:
Malcolm's crush on Lynne is so CUTE! I ship MalLynne. Or should it be LynColm?
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 04:15 am
So I just read through these chapters in like 30 minutes. This is really good! And you update fast!! Keep it coming!!😍😍😍
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it. I write when I should be sleeping, that's why the chapters come so fast, lol.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 03:54 am
Alicia is cray cray, and I want Lynne to beat her like Tina whooped Ike in that limo. Aliho quit her job! C-I-L-L Aliho!!!! Make Saul's dick shrivel up and fall off. Oh, I'm sorry I meant to call SS. Or we call him SAS which stands for Sorry Ass Saul! Yep that works for me. .Malcolm is working his way into Lynne's heart. Team Malcolm!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Your reviews are EVERYTHING! Aliho...I love it!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 03:09 am