Lynne, what you've hopefully gotten yourself into is Malcolm!
As for Saul, would feel sorry for him, but since he brought this on himself, I just can't find that sympathy chip. hee
On to the next chapter.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: April 03 2015 11:12 am
enjoyable chapter
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: April 03 2015 02:10 am
Lynne extended the invitation for dinner with her children. That is big! SAS is falling apart, aww poor baby! Not that I really care about his punk ass but I really want him to see Lynne happy and in love. Karmarific!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 04:45 pm
I feel bad that whatever is happening inside of Saul, that he has yet to truly delve into or address has caused him to lose his happiness. Unfortunately he has been the cause of his own misery. I still do not feel that bad that I want Lynne to take him back just yet. I have a hard time with him sleeping with Alicia after the conversation with Lynne and she brought up a divorce. If Lynne finds that out, I think it will really be no way to come back from that for Lynne. Malcolm seems cool but Lynne seems very mature and Malcolm appears a little young in his actions so it would be interesting to see how the romance plays out. Plus Malcolm doesn't have any children and does he want any? I like the pace of Malcolm and Lynne being friends first.
I feel like we are going to learn something in Saul's past that has caused him to self-destruct after 25yrs. You don't go from being happily married to cheating overnight. I sense a trigger somewhere that we don't know about yet. Looking forward to how you redeem Saul's character. He might be the more interesting of the two to read about actually (Shhh, keep that on the DL).
Author's Response:
Malcolm is little boyish, but I don't think he's immature. I think he's intimidated by Lynne. She makes him nervous, and that might explain some of his actions. I think Saul having something in his past that triggered his current behavior is an interesting one. Once he gets serious about therapy, we'll learn more about his past and how it affected his present.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 03:06 am
A feel a little bad for Saul. Not much though.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 02:54 am
LOVE THIS!! I literally yelp when there's an update!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 11:52 pm
I don't hate Saul. I feel sorry for him and I think he is remorseful. I'm rooting for the cheating bum!
Author's Response:
I want him to get himself together. Malcolm is my baby, but I feel for Saul.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 11:51 pm