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Title: The End is the Beginning

Please don't end! Noooooo

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 10:13 pm
Title: The End is the Beginning

That last bit was EVERYTHING! Especially this:

"she realized that her past was walking away from her as her future walked towards her"

Good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 08:44 pm
Title: The End is the Beginning

Very good



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 08:05 pm
Title: The End is the Beginning

oooo i cant wait!

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:16 pm
Title: The End is the Beginning

Yes, Malcolm is in there!! SAS apologized and Lynne truly forgave him. Now Lynne is able to truly move onto a life of love and happiness with Malcolm. Yippee Skippy, Lynne now has a real man! Aliho is going to jail!! Looking forward to the epilogue. Thank you Jaye Sims and Happy Resurrection Day!



Author's Response:

My pleasure, Ms Gayles.  And I thank you so, so much for reading!  Happy Resurrection Day to you as well.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 06:46 pm


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