I like this but the fact that there are no updates on it and other stories that you write make me wonder why I even start reading to begin with. I don’t want to be one of those people that criticizes writers but maybe you should think about finishingg something before you move on to the next story.Reviewer: Nikol Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 30 2019 10:41 pm
I'm really enjoying this story, when can we expect an update?Reviewer: Faye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 02 2016 09:39 pm
First, let thank you for the update. I await the next installment. this is a story that can have a person running the gamut of emotions, from anger (Blake) to sadness, to joy(Mina's accomplishments and overcoming adveristy).Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11 2016 09:19 pm
I see Blake is as much an ass as he was before. He better not think he can get away with raping Mina again.
And what is with his jealousy regarding Reid? Is he in lust* with Reid or something?
*Because the only thing that nasty f*cker loves is himself.Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2016 03:29 am
It really chaps my britches, because had neither the confidence or the fortitude to press charges against Blake. That fool should have never gotten a job in the NFL. Let him and tell him the truth Mina, Reid deserves to know the real behind you running away.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2016 12:01 am
Needed this update, please don't leave us hanging for too long!Reviewer: Caterina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 10:27 pm
A psychologist would have said Blake is gay but refuses to admit it
he is attracted to Reid and considers him as his this is why Mina pisses him off.
Besides to have sex to the person your loved one loves it's psychological logic- like having sex with the object of your desires yourself.
So you see, with jealousy on board, thruth and drama will soon comme rolling and dancing their ways into all these people's life.Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 10:08 pm
There is something sick and twisted about Blake's seemingly weird obsession with having Reid to himself when it comes to Mina. What is it about Reid and Mina that seems to threaten Blake. It makes no sense. It's not like Reid and Mina was always together and Blake got none of Reid's time. This is really creepy.
I so hope that Mina doesn't become a victim of Blake yet again. She has gone on to make a pretty good life for herself. She is a strong young woman who has withstood a lot. Hopefully, she's aware of her strength.
Blake is a weak ass coward and has not grown into a man. And what about Reid. He gives Blake so much slack. Doesn't he see that this cretin is rotten to the core. There must be something else going on here that causes Reid to overlook some of Blake's less than stellar behaviour.
Anywhoo, thank you for the update. This is really a good tale, Chica.Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 08:44 pm
I see Blake hasn't changed at all. Mina girl, make sure you have a gun, knife, pepper spray, box cutter and your phone on record every time you are around Blake. I'm glad their friendship has been rekindle. Thanks for this update MP.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 08:37 pm
Blake sounds like a spoiled little boy used to getting his own way! This is what happens when one is used to getting what he wants regardless who he hurts. I would not be surprised if he has sexually assualted more women after Mina. I REALLY hope his evil crimes come to light at the pinnacle of his career!!!
"He was hoping that Wilhelmina wasn't going to come between them once again.." Really??? Reid is a grown ass man who can be friends with whomever he wants! What is Blake going to do when his friends start having serious relationships, get married and have children??? That is, if any woman will want him after they find out what he's done...
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Date: September 08 2016 07:17 pm
Good story--I hope she can defend herself, because last time he not only raped her, but broke her arm. He will hurt her again--he has not changed. Blake won't want anything to do with Calvin, which is good.Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 06:19 am
Let me guess Reid and Blake both play for the Steelers... Wow this is going to be interesting. Now we'll see if Reid is attached. Blake who cares, he is probably married and cheating behind his wife's back or they have an open marriage. Then again he could be single too, but who gives a crap. He's probably going to be still making fun of Mina if he sees her again. Some people can grow up over the years and some people don't. I think Blake will fall into the latter category. I am glad Mina has contact with her son. Oh no, her son. This is going to get very complicated. Great update.
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Date: August 16 2016 04:39 am
Girl... I'm glad you posted this update, because my family had me watching one of the worst movies I have ever seen " Sharknado 4 " so thank you for the break. I love how open the relationship is with Calvin, Mina, the Washingtons and the grandparents. I guess I'm a little sad that Calvin has Tourette's like Mina, but I'm happy the kids are not being cruel towards him. Girl, I love myself some Pittsburgh Steelers ( That's my team!) and I'm loving the fact that Reid plays for my team but! not that SCUM BUCKET BLAKE!!. Even though I love the Steelers I wish Blake would get sacked so hard by a defensive lineman on the opposing team, that he sees star's, unicorns, leprechauns and handcuff being slap on him by the police. I say Mina TAKE THAT JOB!!. Old Blake is going to panic when he sees her, because now she holds the cards to his future. GET HIM MINA!!!. Thanks MP for this amazing update.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 01:36 am
Had she told told the truth and shamed the devil Blake wouldn't be quarterback for the Steelers. Calvin will be out lyrics disappointed to find out that his hero is not her his father but damn sex offender.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 01:02 am