Penname: got2luvmel [Contact]

Real name: Mel

Member Since: November 10 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Me


I'm Mel... I'm a perpetual bookworm, I read any and everything, and I write romance—erotica, historical, suspense, and interracial. And, although I am quite the procrastinator, I'm quite determined to be published in the future. Stories posted here are solely for practice and my amusement, if others enjoy them that's even better.


As an aspiring author I can be a bit anal when reviewing and tend to digress, but I'm pretty laid back when it comes to people's tastes. Hey, If You Like It, I Love It (that's my motto)...


My General Review: All great writers use an editor (beta); don't post a story nor updates without having an experienced one look over it first. If you don't have enough respect for your writing at least have some for your audience. 



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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 130202
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

If Only...you'd update I'd be super happy and forever grateful :D 

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: April 12 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen

Aw, I LOVED this story from start to finish! Thanks for sharing this awesomeness, you're great :D



Author's Response:

That's so kind. Thank you!

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Date: June 11 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 452]
Summary:

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banner by minx 


Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76819
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012


Title: Chapter 25: FINALE

I just reread this entire story the other day, glad to read the finished product. Thanks for writing and sharing this, I truly enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to Carey's story, I'm sure it'll be just as pleasureable as the rest in the series :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sticking around and reading it. I will try not to disappoint.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: April 02 2012

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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168992
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

DeLeon being the Deputy gives me hope for his and Kendra's future, although I was hoping he, alongside all of their people, would get the fuck out of that cow town. But, then again, it'd be easier for Kenny to make a move than the whole lot of them. I've enjoyed reading this story and look forward to the rest.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: April 17 2012

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Her ending up with Dax would make it too easy and predictable. I prefer hard, complicated ships to the former. I hope you chose DeLeon.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: April 16 2012

Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

Prince needs a woman. A woman that is not Kendra.

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Date: April 08 2014

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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 25023
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Can we get another chap, please!

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: May 18 2012

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

I love Joseph and Seleah. I'm happy that they're finally married and hitting the sheets!

Amaris and Julian...HOTTTT freaks...but that's a given :")

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: May 31 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65031
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Really? I am pissed right now! I know that bitch Ashley took those photos. Chase is in love with Lila but I don't think, at least I hope, he could be that vindictive ARGH! 

 

Jack and Lila were so damn loving and cute boo'd up in line and I SO loved the gravesite openings...those two are my heart *meh creyyyyyssss*

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: March 24 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I honestly think Lila loves them both in her own way. But, what's stopping her from being in love with Chase is the fact that she's always looked at him as a little brother versus seeing him in a romantic light. Yes, she's now noticing him as the man that he has become but, in her mind, that doesn't take away from the fact that she still sees him as a little brother figure. She's one of those morally correct people, she won't ever see herself with Chase in that capacity and I'm glad about it. 

IDK about anyone else, but I'm rooting for Jack and Lila. I do think Lila and Chase have some amazing chemisty but I think Jack's her soulmate. And the way she told him that she has always been his *le sigh* LOVED it! 

Great writing; this story is deliciously sexy, complicated and just perfect. The amount of emotions I go through just reading a single chapter makes me want to scream, laugh and cry all at once. I haven't read anything like this story before, which makes me love it all the more! Thanks for writing and sharing this gem -Mel

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: March 22 2012

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94668
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

Albert's a trip, he'd rather Gabe be gay than be with a black woman SMDH

Per usual, cannot wait to see what happens next :D

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: January 01 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

LMFAO what a chapter, I was hooping and hollering when Gabe took Honey up there and made that announcement. What a way to stick it to his father (not that he didn't want to marry her already but damn), I bet Albert all but wanted to piss his pants with that news. I cannot wait for the next chapter heehee



Author's Response:

LOL Albert wasn't expecting him to do that and now Gabe is mad as hell at his father.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: December 28 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

I love all of your stories! Merry Xmas, thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: December 25 2011

Title: Acceptable Lies

I'm in the minority when I say that Albert and Sugar would have made a really HOT and sexy couple...had he not been married and turned into a sick freak! It surprises me the lengths authors will go to make readers hate a character. Albert was fixable before he went all ape shit; now the poor guy is a lost cause. I don't know, even with all the mess he's done, if I want to write him off like everyone else has......



Author's Response:

I didn't write Albert with the intention of him to be hated.  He's obsessed with Sugar.  Obsessed people will do some dumb things sometimes.   Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: December 15 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Awww Sugar has FINALLY gotten herself a real man willing to be devoted to her *le sigh* EEEEP!

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Date: December 28 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

I'm going to miss this story, it was fun while it lasted :D

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2013

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 100878
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Moment of Truth

Lu & Jared *le sigh* LOVE!!!! They are my favorite ship in this fic, more PLEASE!

Lu was in the wrong to come at Crissy in any way but, when it all boils down to it, she wasn't thinking clearly because she couldn't see past her jealousy. The fact that this is his ex just got to the girl. She was wrong, but I can forgiver her for being human.

Glad Mr. Peterson got his just desserts Muahahahahahaha

Charlie is a freeeeak and I love it. Wear that ass out, boy. She's only getting what she wanted lmbo I'll take her place!



Author's Response:

Yes, both Lu and Jared are sprung, but they don't realize how much yet.  LOL  Lu was jealous and feeling insecure after Jared left her.  She lashed out at Crissy because of that.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: March 25 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90701
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 11: “I can’t play this game anymore.”

Awww she's SO gonna hurt him! I'm dreading the day but I know it will come.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2013

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

BBW* I forgot to mention how much I lurve Adam and Katie! Love their bro-sis ship, I'm totally shipping those two kinship...more of the love, please!

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: March 25 2012

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

This seems interesting, I like it so far. Um, I just wish you would have casted a normal black woman for him instead of a model. I don't think models are your average everyday black women. I mean, obviously they're women just like the rest, but they aren't average in the least. Average black women are deliciously curvy individuals with real sized hips, titts and ass. She didn't have to be a BWW but average is a 14; I could have settled for a 10. It would have been sexy to see Adam Levine next to a beautiful, curvy woman. Anwho, I'm looking forward to more of this asap...

LOL I didn't realize this was your story (the same person writing 'Lila's Thunder') until right before I was going to submit my review...no wonder I actually ened up liking it. I won't lie, I was skeptical about even clicking on this fiction after reading the summary.

 

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: March 25 2012

Title: Chapter 2: “I need to know how the hell you manage to make it down any fashion runway alive."

I've seen many chick flicks somewhat like this story's plot, it's even nicer to see it done on paper though.

As to the 'debate' I was unaware I'd caused. I don't have to justify my opinions to anyone. You worry about what you decide to say in your reviews and I'll worry about my own thoughts. Take from that what you will, but I'm done with it.

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: March 30 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Carey Collins is Nashville's most eligible bachelor. His love em and leave em style have made him notorious on the Nashville dating scene. Can the beautiful and kind Bianca Releford make the self proclaimed "King of bachelordom" finally eat his words and commit to being a husband like his older brothers? Will the Challenges of Love prove to be too much for this couple to handle?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 18716
Read Count: 31914
Published: April 06 2012
Updated: June 06 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The introductions

great start



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: April 06 2012

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Summary:

make it nasty

 

Emery Johnson has been crushing on her older brothers best friend for years, too bad in his eyes, she will only ever be recognized as 'Darrell's sister'. Ready to change that, Emery enlists the help of a single book to snare her dream man, but along the way someone else steps into the picture, shaking up the feelings that Emery thought were tightly secured and forever stable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 116446
Read Count: 148893
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I love your story. So much so that I'm about to read your other one. I really like your writing style and creative ideas.

As to who she should be with? I don't know. But, I'll have a hell of a time reading whomever gets a chance to spend and ounce of time with Emery, she's lovely inside and out.

BTW, I also think Logan likes her, it's pretty obvious if you ask me. The ice cream was a dead giveaway and the 'heart' gift backed it up. I would not be surprised if he had it bad for her all these years. I love unrequited love from the hero's persective **hint hint**

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Date: June 15 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I know Jimmy is Logan, but I'll keep pretending he isn't for 'Alisha.' LOVED the teli conversation, but especially Logan and Emery in the bathroom, that was really cute and yummy! He is so feeling him some Emery.

I don't know about anyone else but I can do away with her trying out for cheerleading. She couldn't force herself to like it for her mother and she shouldn't do it for a guy either, no matter how hard she's crushing on him. I'm down with trying something new to get the guy but she shouldn't lose herself in doing so. Change herself completely for a dude? Um no! Total turn off for me. 

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: June 24 2012

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

You really had me going from the previous chapter then I read this and I'm like...hold up, hold up, HOLD UP! I thought we were getting into the Emery/Logan hookup stage. She was talking losing her V card to him and now I get this...hot mess! I don't like it one bit (except the cat part which was super adorable that he wants to take care of her pet while she's gone). I'm definitely for whatever option that won't drag this story out. Authors create timelines for a reason. I think it is pointless at this point for Emery to be in London and Logan to even have a girlfriend. I had a WTF moment...like, he seriously has a girlfriend??? Emery should be back NOW seeing as she shouldn't have ever gone there for any amount of time. Her going there and him having some random ass girl I don't give a damn about is stupid, period. That just made me want to stop reading altogether because I know it'll be futile chapters of nothing just to get to what I want in the end: them realizing they've been connecting this whole time since the phone switch, that they're obviously feeling one another and actually DO something about it(which all could've been reached in 3-4 more chapters).

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed
Date: December 10 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.