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To Last a Lifetime by intellectual titmouse
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[Reviews - 478]
Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78831
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016

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Title: Chapter 11: And It All Falls Down

dang, how long was mae sitting there alone?! if i was Mo, i'd be to scared after this,to leave Mae home alone anymore.  I am also curious as to Cooper's secret. i'm thinking it involves a woman. update soon!

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Date: November 22 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Keep Holding On

aww poor coop. i dont like these coop and simon being upset with each other. fix it! lol

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Date: November 23 2011
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The Demon Seed by Happy2bNappy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 276]
Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50638
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

geez, i bet she's wishing she didn't go to that club now, huh?

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Date: May 21 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

this aren't looking good for charly is it? and things definitely aren't going to go well for ana.

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Date: May 06 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

oh snap, charly sure is in for it.

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Date: April 08 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Nic should really stop playing games with her like that before she really does lose her mind. 

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Date: April 16 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

more! but what's really going through nic's head?

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Date: March 31 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

hmmm is right. is he a sucubus?

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Date: March 29 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

excellent update. i can't help but be continuously freaked out by Nic though. i mean geez.

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Date: September 02 2011
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Bright Ōsaka Star by puertaobierta
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 373]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 168234
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012

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Title: Chapter 9: Hachi (8)

Love Kamir, he sure did that maneuver with style, lol. I'm really liking him. I'm wondering at Yuki though. He's spending so much time with Sara, how is he really working through things with Karou? Seems like he's putting more effort in with Sara. As for Darren Percy...LOVE THEM!

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Date: May 08 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Sichi (7)

i like kamir and he's doing wonders for sara. i hope karou does improve on her self growth, it's a long time in coming. i don't know what's up wit yuki's mom, still don't trust her.



Author's Response:

Poor Yuki's mom, she gets no love. Thanks! :)

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Date: May 05 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Roku (6)

I feel for Sara. she's trying to be so compliant with everything for her son's sake but she still has those feelings/dreams for a happy family btw shouda, yuki, and herself. I don't know which direction you will choose to go with the pairings but I honestly do believe that she should move forward with someone new instead of backward with yuki. he does need to make it up to her, but i think they can do that as friends. looking forward to seeing how yuki's mom and sara's mom get along.



Author's Response:

I appreciate your comments. Truthfully, I don't know either.... :))

Thank you!

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Date: April 30 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Ichi (1)

yes you should do more!

Author's Response:

Okay then. Coming right up!

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Date: April 06 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Ni (2)

is it mean of me to want someone to lace yuki's mom's tea with arsenic? hate that woman. feeling awfully bad for yuki's wife. she should grow a backbone and divorce yuki and go be happy! don't know how i feel about yuki and sara getting back together. at least until yuki grows some balls and tells his parents to go jump off a cliff.

Author's Response:

I wouldn't say mean.... You are the second person to mention divorce. Arsenic, cliffs...you got me worried.

Thanks! :)

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Date: April 10 2011
Title: Chapter 4: San (3)

i am so glad kaoru had this discussion with sara. it's an unlikely 'friendship' but i think this will be the beginnings of kaoru living for herself. i find it kind of disturbing how yuki's dad finds it amusing how his wife goes around bullying people and just tags along for the show. I mean what's up with that. his wife is more easy to figure out, she's a bitch, point blank. i wonder who's going to finally put her in her place? I kinda hope it's either karou or shouda. Great update!



Author's Response:

Aaak! LOL! thank you for your observations. Yes, it is an unlikely friendship, but sometimes those are the best kind.

:)

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Date: April 12 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Yon (4)

yes please keep shouda away from yuki's mother. that woman could drive anyone to drink. i'm glad that sara is able to put her big girl panties on and make nice with yuki for shouda's sake but the vengeful part of me thinks yuki is getting over way too easy.



Author's Response:

He is getting over easy, but for how long?????

Thanks!

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Date: April 20 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Go (5)

i think that i would actually like to see yuki with karou. he's way to indecisive for me and what he did to sara is a big breach to gap. i think they should work on their friendship but move on. but hey that's just my opinion. oh and i'm looking forward to the chapter where karou goes off on yuki's mom. i'd pay money to see that one.



Author's Response:

I don't think Kaoru is the type to 'go off' do you? Never know till it happens. Thanks! :)

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Date: April 22 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Kyu (9)

i like kamir, i say bring it on, but only if he is serious and willing to stay in japan for sara and souda. if not, then he can at least be some fun for sara. i still think yuki is all up in sara's business and not really making an effort in his marriage but if you plan for yuki to be with sara, i guess that would be the way of things. loved percy's "up pops the muslim". LOL. i can't wait for this meeting to occur. there should be fireworks, no?

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Date: May 15 2011
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Good Things in a Small Package by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 670]
Summary:

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140170
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

OMG i can stand seleah. can she hurry up and catch that bus back to whatever rat trap she crawled out from?



Author's Response:

That shrew needs taming and I got just the man for the job.  LOL  MOre to come soon!

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Date: September 16 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15 So You Think You Know All About Me II

lmao, viagra??! i'm feeling really sorry for Dem, looks like he's about to hear some bad news. i'm wondering how much Paula is going to go off.

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Date: September 20 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3 Seeing the Real You

julian has a real problem with forgiveness and this vengeful attitude of his. it will be interesting how amaris and his relationship will go, considering.

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Date: August 24 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

well now...julian could get it any day of the week! I highly suggest amaris take tam's advice and get on birth control with the quickness.

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

freakin' awesome!

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

lol Tam is a trip. 

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Date: August 23 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14 So You Think You Know All About Me

well dang you had to go and make me feel sympathy for seleah. i was perfectly fine disliking her.  i still cant feel too much sympathy though, she's an adult now and should have changed her way of thinking. i feel worse for dem. having a mom who loves and resents you and not having a clue as to why. i hope those two do some bonding and get that mother/son relationship that they should have had all along after the truth is revelated.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately victims of child abuse cannot change themselves. They need help in order to stop their own self destructive behavior.  Seleah knows this, but she's afraid to tell anyone what happened to her, so the cycle continues.  You can keep disliking her if you want, that's ok.  LOL.  However every negative person has something in their past that made them that way.  Until they face what they've been through, nothing will change.  Thanks for the review.  More to come soon!

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Date: September 19 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.