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In The Eyes of the Beholder by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80855
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012

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Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

lol teddy needs a good cussing out. and i was doing the happy dance with that discussion btwn jessica and micah. 



Author's Response:

Now, now, Ms. Grumpirah.  You know that man didn't want to fornicate!!!!  LOL  More to come soon!

(More Micah and Lei coming up!!)

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Date: October 10 2011
Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

lol i'm torn between encouraging lei from teasing micah and wanting micah to tease her right back. (not the jealousy part) just the sly innuendo and flirtation. great update!!



Author's Response:

Oh, it's about to get heated....

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Date: October 17 2011
A Perfect Fit by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39394
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

lol if rus and kelly keep up their new and way more enjoyable sex life, maxie and selma's baby might not be the only midlife surprise in the family.

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Date: November 19 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

the more you write the more disgusted i am with husband #1. i hope her pregnancy goes well because she has almost all of the risk factors for everything to go south.



Author's Response:

So true.  Stephen Sr. was very selfish.  Selma knew that, but she didn't know all he had done. Stephen Jr. will be better now that he has gotten that burden off of his chest.  MOre tocome soon!

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Date: November 14 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well dang, their situation just got more problematic.  and it doesnt help that maxie had to find the business card to the abortion clinic.



Author's Response:

a confrontation with an angry Maxie is coming up!

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Date: November 13 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i feel selma. personally, i wouldn't mind getting remarried but having babies...i think not.  but stephen needs to calm his butt down.  i highly doubt that if his father was the surviving parent that he would have issues with him dating.  he just dont like the idea of her being with someone else. point blank. great update!

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Date: November 12 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i hate moochers! and self-entitled family members! bugs the mess out of me.



Author's Response:

Stanley just wants a small piece of the pie....

Not!  

More is coming!

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Date: November 22 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

someone needs a good smack down!

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Date: December 12 2011
Victim of the Fall by Lililei
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 108]
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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 66669
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Capture

i swear, andrew comes off as an ass more often than not.



Author''s Response:

lol he does, doesn''t he? Thank you grumpirah!

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Date: April 29 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Oblivion

even with his thoughts i cant begin to understand what''s going on in his mind. but he does have an unfortunate habit of initiating these intimate events and then projecting blame onto dana to appease his guilt.  i think these two need some distance btw each other. ingrid doesn''t deserve this and neither does dana.  andrew needs to make up his mind, once and for all.



Author''s Response:

I agree with you :) Thank you grumpirah!

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Date: May 18 2011
The Gift by Brenda1257
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 169]
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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 5908
Published: December 21 2011
Updated: December 21 2011

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As usual concerning your stories, excellent job!  Henny is a better person than me, I would have to think LONG and HARD about doing giving such a gift to that doofus.



Author's Response:

All Henny wanted was to know who her father was.  She got that so she's satisfied.  Thanks and Merry Christmas.

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Date: December 21 2011
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Acceptable Lies by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 427]
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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94675
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013

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Title: Acceptable Lies

i dont like albert for obvious reasons but sydney is really working my nerve.

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Date: January 01 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

sugar, albert, and sydney all need to go live on a deserted island together. and no offense but bruce needs to run in the opposite direction of sugar. she'll have him in debt faster than he can blink.



Author's Response:

LOL  Bruce hasn't gotten past the way she looks in the dress...but he'll learn.  More to come soon!

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Date: December 28 2011
Title: Acceptable Lies

sigh.... sydney is a self absorbed, bitter, little biyatch. at this stage of the story i dont like her.  the father is just ridiculous.  honey better watch her back.

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Date: December 25 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Cast Pictures

looking good ms. brenda!



Author's Response:

Believe it or not I'm working on an update between cooking pies and making a pound cake.  LOL

Don't know when it'll be finished though.

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Date: December 23 2011
Title: Acceptable Lies

sugar don't play that! lol, i'd love to have her in my corner.  i wonder if she'll let Gabe in on it. it's always nice to have an accomplice and sine we know albert isn't going to play fair, i say she shouldn't either.

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Date: January 22 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

sydney, sydney...smh.  girl has so much potential if she could just get over her jealousy. now i will admit that she has reason to be jealous. her father should not have her jump through hoops to gain and keep his aproval. albert has a lot to learn. i'm looking forward to an official scene with honey's dad.

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Date: January 30 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

don't even know what to say about albert and sugar.....

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Date: November 15 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

oh geez, this albert/sugar thing is for the birds.



Author's Response:

Sugar loves her daughter above all things and she is done.  When Albert showed up at her place, she fell immediately in her 'game' which is something she's had to do all her life.  It's a survival instinct to her.  Now she's done with Albert.  All she wanted was for him to accept her daughter and not give Honey a hard time.  Albert, however, is far from done with Sugar.  LOL

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Date: November 17 2012
Title: Acceptable Lies

i am disliking albert more and more with each chapter. in fact i'm at the point that audrey needs to get a divorce. this is so not cool. 

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Date: November 23 2012
We Shall Overcome Someday by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

 

We Shall Overcome Someday

by Brenda 1257

Henry McDermont wants to establish a relationship with his former girlfriend and his daughter, but each has baggage from their past that is influencing their decisions today.  Each family has racial issues that they need to deal with.  Can Henry and Vanessa overcome their past in order to make a new future?

We Shall Overcome Someday is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2012 BRAnderson

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 16498
Read Count: 6623
Published: January 06 2012
Updated: January 16 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

excellent addition to the story. 10/10!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

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Date: January 06 2012
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The Problem with Charlie by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 100900
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Lessons in Love

Charles Sr needs his a$$ kicked. I hope Lucinda doesn't get her feelings hurt messing the Jared. As for Charlie....go ahead with yourself! Happy Birthday, indeed!



Author's Response:

Jared is so used to being with girls that are pretty and self absorbed, he felt that he never had someone to love him.  He just wants to be loved and valued as a person.  He acted out growing up trying to get his mother's attention.  He is the middle child, stuck between Charlie and what he perceives as the 'adorable twins'.  No one paid Jared any attention before.  Things are about to change for him....

Charlie was happy to give that birthday present.  LOL 

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Date: March 14 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Change of Plans

Charlie better get over this virgin kick. he knows he wants inga.

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Date: March 09 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Feeling the Fire

hmm i wonder how valerie is going to take this

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Date: March 10 2012
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The Right to Remain Broken by Kmaj
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
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Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75332
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015

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Title: Chapter 16: M is for Medical History

oh dear, i think that phone call may have been a very bad idea

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Date: November 14 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.