Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: March 03 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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[Reviews - 496]
Summary:

Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 123351
Published: October 30 2009
Updated: July 28 2012


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OK Dorian is a jackass..why would he trust anyone in that family I do not know and why would he put his sister and the Nichetti's in this mess I don't know either..he is a jerk!

The boys day out with the sons was hysterical..they pretty much Carmine good and he deserved too!

Chris blew Ms. Tay's mind with his exy self..Oh his little friend will be back Tay and it is going to be on!!

I wish Alicia would go ahead and marry her man..why is she waiting.!!

Loveee this fic sweetie and all the sexiness that is the Nichettis! Great job sweetie!

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Date: January 21 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 305]
Summary:

Always the odd woman out, Keisha Barrett, for once wanted to be the woman on the arm of the man of every woman's dreams.  Who knew a lunch date with her girlfriends could hold the answer to her dreams.

Ethan Carrington, British international businessman and confirmed bachelor, was tired of the lifestyle he had been living. Expensive cars, trendy night clubs, leggy models/actresses, and gold diggers were the norm until the day her meet her...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 22532
Read Count: 42352
Published: December 02 2009
Updated: September 26 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am so enjoying this story sweetie. i cannot wait for their first date. I think Ethan is teh perfect man to give Ms. Keisha a boost of confidence. I cannot wait to see how thier relationship develops and the snags they will hit along the way!!

Great job sweetie!! I cannot wait for more...

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Date: December 08 2009

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok I just happened on this sweet very cute story..what a gem!

I love that keisha's mystery man shut Brandi down..she was sickening!!

I love Keisha.s reaction and her girls reaction!

I cannot wait for hem to go out and see where all of this leads!!

Funny, sweet and sexy start sweetie...can hardly wait for more..good job!!

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Date: December 07 2009

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Date

I really like this story...it is unfolding so sweetly ...I think these two are going to find out how quickly love can bloom very soon!

Great job sweetie!! Cannot wait for more..

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Date: December 27 2009

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Lawd I needed some happiness today. I am so happy for Keisha ..Ethan seems like the perfect guy for her!!

I love the newness of their relationship and how everything about her turns him on..I love teh cutesy call and textes...I love the begiining of relationships before they get complicated and dificult!

I love Keisha's mom looking out for her baby and I cannot wait till they meet Ethan.

Good job sweetie..don;t make us wait too long for thee next updt!!

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Date: January 20 2010

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

At the Chicago Day Times, columnist Maxine Baker goes through the same routine everyday and wants a change. She really wasn't expecting murder. New shoes or a cute guy sure, but not murder....



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Mystery
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11989
Read Count: 42009
Published: June 02 2010
Updated: September 19 2012


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok so Max and Chris have gone to the next level huh..wellkinda at least sine Bill Clinton says that is not sexual relatiins.lol!

I think Max needs to tAke these threats seriously..now they break in her house..come on..she needs protection!!

This is getting better and better sweetie..luv it!!

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Date: June 11 2010

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Humm now I am wondering about the shy guy who does not deal with ejection very well!!

Two bodies I ws kinda thinking it might have been Eric till he bit the dust too..LOL.

Ok girlie this is getting very intriguing no obvious murderers humm!!

I am loving this story sweetie..cannot wait for more!!

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Date: June 08 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok This darn chapter had me cracking up!!I do believe Chris is going to have his and full with one Ms. Maxine after she solves this mystery and I think she will!!

Ok this best friend routine brings another suspect in the bunch..Lawd this is good..great job sweetie!!

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Date: June 06 2010

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh goodness I lovveee this story already!! I laughed so much...I love the style of writing....I aboslutley loveee Maxie and living this story through her perspective....she is a hoot to say the least!!

This is very different...first thing I thought of was a modern day Dick Tracey style murder mystery with more flair , sexuality and way more humor!!

Wow ..excellent excellent..I cannot wait to read morre!!

BTW I knew if there was a character death Claudia should be the one biting the dust!! lol...Love this beginning cannot wait for more!!

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Date: June 06 2010

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was so funny and oddlyy sexy!! I love this quirky girl Maxine..I swear she seems like somebody I knoow..so funny and kinda smart ass..I love her!

I kinda got my idea on who killed Claudia but I will just ride this wonderful story out to see if I am right!!

You are such a gifted writer sweetie..you make these folks so real..they really seem like people we already know!!

I cannot wait for more...good job sweetie!!

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Date: June 06 2010

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Maxie may have just found the murderer or be in danger of being murderd herself!

She should have waited for the police but she is way to hard headed!

I don't think it is Darren..that is too easy but we will find out soon!!

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Date: June 17 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69931
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Consequences of the Obvious and Oblivious

Ok wow Harrison is an ass for sure but Sienna is right Amelle is just as turned on by him as he is by her otherwise no way she would havee let him get away with that crap he pulled...

She is not going to confront seriously because I believe she wants him but what about David...hopefully she can't be that cold or could she ..to carry on an affair right under her fiancee's nose?? But a relationship with Harrison is stupid too..given he even wants one..because he seems to just love the chase and danger of the game!!

I don't know..this is getting sticky now and Amelle is in the middle of some mess...

I love the complexity of this story...the poop is hitting the fan and I cannot wait to see where you take us from here...excellent writing!

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Date: December 18 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Welcome to Hell

Interesting beginning sweetie...I cannot wait to read more. I wonder where you are going with this one..it is quite different and interesting!!

Cannot wait for more...good job!

Pictures would be very nice...:)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

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Date: December 14 2010

Title: Chapter 5: The Burden of Social Gatherings

These women are a trip..poor Amelle seems miserable and if this is going to be her inner circle I cannot see happiness comng in any time soon!!

This story is revealing it's layers slowly..I cannot wait for more!!Good job sweetie!



Author's Response: The girls are complicated... And thats really all I should say for now. Thanks for your review!

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Date: December 15 2010

Title: Chapter 7: You bait me...

Amelle Amelle...You will learn not to let pride rule you! Now she has David mad at her and Harrison's hand on her thigh!

Though I loved how she read them all...she may hav given away too much of herself and suggested something she did not want to Harrison!! We will see

One thing for sure Vivian is definitely not her friend lol!

Getting good sweetie..cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Pride is a sin that we all suffer from every now and again and we just might learn the motives behind this prideful action. Thanks for your review!

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Date: December 18 2010

Title: Chapter 9: Behind Jade Eyes

This is your story sweetie!! We are along for the riide however you decide to drive. If people don't like the journey they choose another vehicle to ride along with..another journey..

I love the story and I find Amelle very realistic actually..many wommen get caught up in situations there is no easy way out of especially when there is a powerful men involved,,,so just tell yourr story..I am in for the complete ride!!

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Date: December 28 2010

Title: Chapter 6: Talks of Tea with a side of Shade

Hummm these folks are snooty, upper crust and nasty!! I am not sure about Amelle...will she really fit in with this crowd or is this just the crowd for her.

Harrison pursuing an engaged woman seems totally acceptable to this crowd so I am concerned what else is totally acceptable..of course if you are in the circle!

Very interesting and complex story sweetie..keep it coming!!



Author's Response:

The girls, well some of them, just might suprise you. And In terms of Harrison, well he does have the power to do whatever he wants. Thanks for your review!

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Date: December 16 2010

Title: Chapter 10: A Lover's Thoughts and Actions

Amelle should have told David..it is not fair to keep him in the dark and hide things from him if she really loves him and believes in thier relationship. He may have surprised her and took her away from that place and/or knocked Harrison on his butt!

I know it seems like David is a big mama's boy but he seems weak for both the women in this life. Amelle really does seem to care for him. I hope she can find her way out of this mess before Harrison destroys her and David's lives..well if his parents don't do that first!

Good job sweetie!! Cannot wait for more..

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Date: December 28 2010

Title: Chapter 11: A Mother's Woe

I still despise Harrison but it is revealing to see that he wants a real rellationship with Amelle. He really has no idea how to court a woman apparently to think intimidation and scar tatics will win her over!!

I wonder what mama will do with this information...I just cant see her support this nobdoy with her son..but we will see!!

Great updt sweetie...dont make us wait so long before the next one!!

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Date: February 19 2011

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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Smiling got her through the deaths of her parents. Therefore smiling will get her through her guardian's wedding. Not that she loves him or anything...

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8390
Read Count: 18209
Published: December 20 2010
Updated: March 24 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Skinny Love

Hummm what is up with this..Tobias has feelings for her and she has for him..but what is keeping them apart...age?closeness? we will find out more as we go along I am sure...

Good job sweetie....cannot wait for more!

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Date: December 23 2010

Title: Chapter 4: I just wanna be okay

There is that war inside that Tobias is fighting..he does not want Melissa but he is afraiid of being with Serena...his heart and body says Serena the world and his mind say Melissa..however if does not get his head together soon it will be w mute point cause he mood swings will drive Serena away for good!

Good job sweetie...getting very interesting!!

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Date: December 24 2010

Title: Chapter 6: Until We Bleed Part 2

I reallly hate Tobias and he does not derserve her. If he felt he could not be with her there were better ways to say it and do it w/o making her feel like trash!! He is an idiot and I pray she finds someone else quickly!!

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Date: January 23 2011

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Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99695
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Just a Little Closer

Ok I feel bad for Joey.he seems like the perfect man..heck I even got the hawts for him!!! I hope Vlad wont kill him ,,,or I hope Joey can hold his own...I like competition between the men and let the best one win Bowie's heart!!

Ok new job could mean the death of Bowie...Vlad is putting her in a lot of danger I hope he knows what he is doing!! Something tells me Bowie is not such a weakling as Cir would imagine her to be after all!!

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Date: February 13 2011

Title: Chapter 23: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

That was freaking off the chain. Wow, Vlad did it...he is turning Bowie!! If we thought Bowie was a bad ass before ..she is going to be off the chain now.

I will say I felt sad for her because she seemed so hurt..I also think I wanted them together but I didn't want Bowie to be a vamp but I guess she must if she is to be the queen!!!

It was so incredibly hawt though...Vlad knows how to put it down...LawdLwad ..I would give him my neck too if he put it on me like that ..lol lol.

Oh how I love Mr. Muse..he is back with a vegence and you are writing your butt offf sweetie...loving it!! Don't stop....

 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Distraction

Joey is playing with fire...find another woman Joey..one not that is not the object of desire for one very dangerous hawt Russian vampire....I am worried for Joey!!!

Bowie has the hawts badly and I am not sure if it is because Vlad keeps coming to her dreams getting her all worked up, or if it is because she hasn't had any for a long time or if it is that sexy southern man...whatever the cause...her desire to get her groove on with tall dark and sexy man hurt him more than her.

BTW I love Rion and Bowie's friendship..they are funny and oh so real friends!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.